My favourite swimmer is Sun Yang.He swims very fast.He took part in the last Olympic Games.He is my hero.
He is 21 years oid.He is very tall.He is 198cm tall.He is cute.I love him.
He is good at swingming very much, He has had all-round success in his study olypic games.
朋友,你到过庐山吗?庐山秀丽的风景一定给你留下了美好的印象。你最喜欢的也许是“险峰”,也许是“花径”,也许是“仙人洞”。而我最喜欢的却是庐山的云雾。你听了也许会发笑,云雾谁没见过。不就是迷蒙蒙一片吗?不,我所见到的庐山云雾却是别具一格的。
我和爸爸妈妈来到庐山脚下,抬头向上仰望,啊,多美呀!一座座山峰好像一个个亭亭玉立的绿衣仙女,手拉着手站在那儿,笑着向游人致意。我们乘着汽车,在银蛇般的盘山公路上向上奔驰。车才行到半山腰,天忽然变得阴沉沉的,如丝的细雨飘了下来,这时,山上起了雾,到处变得迷蒙蒙一片,整个庐山好像披上了一层层薄薄的白纱,真给人一种“不识庐山真面目”的神秘感。
雾越来越大,天地像被一张巨大的纱帐笼罩住了,浓雾之中,游人虽然近在咫尺,也只听到声音而不见人影。山谷中的小溪在我们脚下流淌,“叮咚,叮咚”,小溪悦耳的歌声在山中回荡着。我向前张望,寻找它的去向,它却钻进了雾里,消失了身影。浓雾使空气变得湿润而清凉。
我们来到山顶,雨过天晴。蔚蓝的天空中飘着几朵白云。我向远处眺望,不禁吃了一惊,难道是我误入了仙境?那对面山上的云雾几乎把山淹没了,隐隐约约露出一点儿山顶。云雾好似波涛汹涌的大海,浪涛一个接一个地滚滚而来,好像要把我们吞没,真是气势磅礴,宏伟壮观。我觉得传说中的八仙随时都会出现,乘着龙船在这云海上行驶。几位年轻人看到这壮观的景色,兴奋得一蹦三跳,欢呼着,奔跑着。谁知,更有奇观在后头,转眼间,那云雾像被一种巨大的力量推动着,一阵风似的迅速向一侧移动,被它遮盖的大山立刻变得清清楚楚,以它雄伟的风姿展现在游人面前。
啊!庐山的云雾真是千变万化,奇妙莫测,令我久久不能忘怀。
今天我们按计划去参观庐山最有名的三叠泉。
导游讲三叠泉位于庐山东南,水从悬崖峭壁中流出,落差155米,分三级跌下,所以叫三叠泉。三叠泉为全国四大名瀑之一,是庐山第一奇观,素有不到三叠泉,不算庐山客之说。
昨天听说下到三叠泉边需要走九百多级台阶,我们队伍中有些人打了退堂鼓。妈妈问我去不去?我说:当然要去。壮壮本来不想去,听我说去,也同意了。
我们先乘坐缆车到了石级跟前,然后沿着峭壁边上的狭小的石级缓步而下。此时瀑布在脚下,听得见却看不到。我们一会儿就累得像缺氧的鱼,张开大口喘起气来。这可的确是一段艰难的旅程。不过风景会让你觉得,一切的辛苦都是值得的,
终于来到涧底一个开阔的观景石台上,在这里仰望三叠泉:仿佛天空破了一个洞,水从洞口飞流直下。在阳光照射下,化作了道道彩虹,美不胜收。我不由得吟起诗仙李白千古不朽的飞流直下三千尺,疑是银河落九天诗篇,以为这就是描述三叠泉的。
一旁的导游笑着告诉我们:李白所描写的庐山瀑布并不是三叠泉,而是香炉峰的瀑布。三叠泉长期隐藏在荒山中而不为人知,直到南宋才被樵夫意外地发现。
我正欣赏美景,突然发现远处的两段悬崖间竟然有人在走钢丝表演。看着在两山间,离地1400多米的高空,这样的表演,真为他们捏了把汗。
后来我和壮壮下到水潭戏水,巨大的水花飞溅到脸上,手上,腿上,仿佛沐浴一阵清风,凉爽无比。
好好休息之后,就是无尽的悲剧了,因为要原路返回,而且还是上山。这是一个谷底,下面没有出路,只能原路返回爬上去。
在上山的路上,看到有挑夫在抬游客上山。听导游说,这抬人,是按斤算的,3元/斤。以100斤/人来算的话,那少说也要300元了。妈妈问我,怎么样,要不你坐滑竿吧。我说,没事,再坚持一会儿,我能自己爬上去。
我们花了两个多小时才上去,已经累透支了。虽然我浑身都是汗,都快湿透了,可我心里甜滋滋的,因为我用自己的双脚征服了庐山。
八月份,我回了妈妈的老家九江,8月16日中午上了庐山。
8月16日 阴有阵雨
今天中午,我们坐上一部豪华轿车和智舅舅、外公一起上山。
车行了不久便开始上山。路呈优美的“S”形。起初很平缓,不久便陡峭起来,慢慢云雾也起来了。
上山以后,我们就去含鄱口玩。含鄱口下面就是中国最大淡水湖――鄱阳湖。山紧紧地“含”着鄱阳湖,故而得名。因为今天雾较大,所以只看到一点点影子。鄱阳湖是著名的候鸟栖息地。两块地方放在一起,就是鬼斧神工了。含鄱口有两条索道,一条是太乙索道,它通往海拔800米、著程“江西第一度假胜地”的太乙村;另一条是含鄱口索道,通往大口瀑布。这两个景点没在我们安排之列。
之后我们来到了五老峰。我和爸爸一起登峰。五老峰海拔1436米,俨然如席地而起的五位老翁,由此得名。爬到半山腰时,一阵大雾吹来,有些模糊,非常凉爽。雾是乳白色的,比牛奶还要纯净,还湿漉漉的。他们一阵一阵的,我是生平第一次见到这么壮观的景象。我借助一根拐杖登上了一峰。
接着我开始登二峰。通往二峰的路是一些大石头及石板,道路很陡。往外瞭望,是一片云海,白茫茫的。
往三峰就有一个洞,大人要弯腰低头才能通过。二峰通往三峰路程较远,中途有庐山迎客松。它是从石缝、悬崖峭壁中长出来的。前枝叶片整体看像一个大手掌,好像在迎接我们似的。
登上三峰,便看到了海拔最高的山峰——四峰。我们走了以点儿路就到了。只见五老峰陡峭挺拔,东南面绝壁千仞,陡不可攀。我们是从西北面爬上来的,五峰下去即是三叠泉。妈妈交代说这次不可以去那里,再加上天气阴阴的,我们原路返回了,有点遗憾。不过爸爸说没关系,等我长大点再去。
晚上我们逛了牯岭街。(提醒一下,车子开上来,就已经上了一大半山,所以无须下到山底下)我知道了庐山的特产——三石一茶。哪三石呢?石鸡、石鱼、石耳。茶是庐山云雾茶。
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ……
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ……
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……
6) Never in our history has the idea that …… been so popular.
7) Faced with ……, quite a few people argue that ……
8) According to a recent survey, ……
9) With the rapid development of ……,
10 When it comes to…, (当说到…
二、列举观点
I.Some people think/believe that…,
Other argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true
1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages.
2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.
3.Compared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages. ,
4.Although computers bring people a lot of convenience,they have many disadvantages.
5....has many advantages.For example,…
6. However,just as every coin has two sides,…has it’s disadvantages.
II…play(san important role/part in……
1.Computers play an important role in science and technology.
2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life.
3.Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies.
4.Education plays an important part in developing our mind.
5.Addiction to alcohol and drugs plays a role in homelessness.
6.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.
7.In the past,letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication.But now,telephone,email,and fax have taken their place.
III.With the development of…
1.With the development of our economy,many Chinese families can afford a car.
2.With the development of our economy and society,pollution is more and more serious.
3.With the rapid development of Science and technology,people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home.
4.With the current social and technological developments,employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed.
5.With the rapid increase of China's population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious.
6.With more and more women entering the society,people's attitude towards women is changing.
7.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up, an increasing number of (a growing number of,a significant number of
families can afford a car.
三、陈述自己观点
There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements,but…
四、批驳
1)It is true that ……, but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3) Some people say ……, but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that……
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6) It makes no sense to argue for ……
7) Too much stress placed on …… may lead to ……
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ……
9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ……
10) No one can deny the fact that ……
11) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
12) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ……
13) Recent studies indicate that ……
14) There is sufficient evidence to show that ……
15) According to statistics proved by ……, it can be seen that ……
五、结尾句型 :
英语议论文多以简要总结全文或对所讨沦的问题提出解决办法来结尾。总结全文时除常用到in one/a word,generally speaking,to conclude等外,没有固定模式。提出解决办法时却常使用下一句型:
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ……
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ……
3). We should take measures to control the rapidly increasing world population.
4). We’d better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams.
5). The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse.
6). Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks.
7) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ……
8) In conclusion, it is imperative that ……
9) There is no easy method, but ……might be of some help.
10) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ……
11) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
12) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
13) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ……
14) Taking all these into account, we ……
15) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear……
六、其他句型
I、There be结构
There+be+主语+(修饰成分,表示客观存在的\'人或事物。 There must be a lot of fuel in the tank.
There remains nothing more to be done.
There is no point in talking about it again.
There is something you don't know.
There is not enough time to do the work. .
II、名词化结构
名词化结构用以表明抽象思维的逻辑性和概念化,从而使语体更加正式、更加具有书面语风格。
1.由of连接主谓关系
That the earth revolves around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.
名词化:The revolution of the earth around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.
2.由0f连接动宾关系
One of the most important natural phenomena is that energy is transmitted from one point to another in waves.
名词化:One of the most important natural phenomena is the transmission of energy from one point to another in waves.
3.用of连接含有by的短语,把简单句转换成名词短语
庐山因为唐代诗人李白,来此写了一首诗名为《庐山瀑布》,今年十月十一长假,我们两家人来到了庐山。
早上六点整,我们踏上了庐山的车,大家在车上有说有笑。
我们先来到了庐山的“大门”,大门用几根“擎天柱”来支撑着它的牌匾,进入大门,我们看到了蒋介石以前居住过的花石楼,花石楼是中西结合的风格,花石楼的旁边是一个教堂,听说是当时蒋介石在此游玩也是在此被捕的地方,现在这个教堂还在使用。
离开教堂,我们顺首山路向上走去,走了大约三十几分钟就来到了三叠泉,俗话说:“不到庐山好汉坡,不算到庐山,”但是这里的人说,“不到三叠泉不算到庐山”。因为好汉坡哪个地方都有,但是三叠泉只有庐山才有,我用三叠泉的水洗了洗手沾沾福。
离开三叠泉,我们往山梁上走,过了四五分钟我们来到了古今闻名,闻名世界的庐山瀑布,“日照香炉生紫烟,遥看瀑布看前川。飞流直下三千尺,疑是银河落九天。”这瀑布就像一幅白色的窗帘,细细的水珠像伞兵一样从高空中跳下来,让我们感到一丝丝凉意,水珠也像一台降温的机器。那座落在瀑布边的小亭子,小巧玲珑,旁的树生机勃勃,苍松翠柏。这庐山瀑布名不虚传,我们来到了山顶,庐山的景色映入眼帘,极目远眺,太阳公公快下山了,天空先是金黄渐渐的变成了浅金,深红,淡白,最后太阳公公下山了,乘着月光那马路像一条长龙,那树木,就是一声碧绿的“海洋”,那细细的小溪就是龙的胡须,那山就是龙身和龙尾。
啊,庐山真壮观啊,我们满载而归,恋恋不舍的离开了庐山。
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