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为了鼓励人们去外面放松,现在有越来越多的公园免费入场。人们从中受益,尤其是在经济困难时期。随着自由的进入,更多的人将有机会为家庭负担得起的假期,享受自然景观的乐趣。
公园里的新鲜空气和景观对人们有好处。然而,太多的\'人蜂拥到公园可能不是那么好的公园。
例如,一些游客把垃圾扔在身后,这可能会造成环境污染。和人们的烧烤和冲压将损坏在公园草地和其他绿色植物。
作为一名大学生,我赞成免费进入公园。免费进入公园不仅节省了人们的开支,而且使事情变得更加公平,人们喜欢贫困,学生也可以经常去公园。另一方面,在欣赏自然之美的同时,也要保持对环境的保护。
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
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