五年级英语作文关于商店【一】
森林里住着一群小动物，随着科技的发展，它们的生活越来越好，对商品的要求也越来越高，渐渐地，它们都用上了名牌。
狐狸看见了，就嗅到了商机，它准备在中心广场开一家商店。因为它想：它们那么需要高级商品，如果我开一家百货商店，一定能赚大钱！
开张第一天，狐狸拿着一个大喇叭朝外大声的喊着：“快来看呀！开张第一天，全场八折优惠，买够100元即可抽一次奖，优惠多多，多买多送哦！”小动物们听了想：那么便宜？不会吧！它们立刻从四面八方赶过来，把狐狸的店围的是里三层外三层。
狐狸店里，迎来了第一位客人——老虎。老虎一进店，狐狸就傻了眼，为什么老虎是第一个呢？狐狸只好带着笑容走了上去对老虎说：“老虎大王，您是第一个光临我们小店的人，要知道您的到来这可是我的荣幸啊！”老虎走到食品区看见了“进口的澳洲牛肉”馋得直流口水了。狐狸笑着说：“这牛肉可是进口的，全森林只有我一家才有，而且库存只有5盒了。”老虎连想不想交了三千多元把5盒牛肉拿走了。狐狸狡诈的想：嘿嘿，那些不是进口牛肉而是用豆子做的伪劣牛肉。
第二天，小动物们纷纷赶来投诉，最后，动物们送给狐狸一句话：狐狸开商店——没好货。
五年级英语作文关于商店【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文关于商店【三】
我喜欢吃水果，在各种各样的水果中，我尤其是喜欢吃草莓。
到了草莓上市的季节，每当走到草莓摊前，那红彤彤的草莓，闻到一股甜丝丝的香味，我就会像只馋嘴的小猫，口水忍不住“飞流直下三千尺”。
我喜欢吃草莓，因为它的颜色、形状和味道都特别惹人喜爱。草莓的.形状像颗鸡心，浑身长满了细细软软的小刺，摸上去毛茸茸的，不像仙人掌的刺会扎人。熟透了的草莓穿着红艳艳的“外衣”，头上戴着一顶绿色的“太阳帽”，样子可爱极了。取一颗熟透了的草莓放在嘴里轻轻一咬，软软的，那酸酸甜甜的红色液溢的满口都是。
我喜欢吃草莓的另一个原因，因为它没有皮和壳，吃起来特别方便，这样我就不用剥皮，吐壳了。嘻嘻，一口一个，痛快极了。
草莓不但好吃，营养也非常丰富，含有多种维生素。草莓的吃法有很多种，除了直接食用，还可以榨成汁或者腌着吃。我们家的金典吃法就是酸奶拌草莓，妈妈把刚买回来的新鲜草莓切成一块一块的放进一个大碗里，我把原味酸奶浇在上面，再拌一拌，等酸奶的颜色变得艳红艳红的，草莓就腌好了。哈哈，吃上一口酸奶草莓，更是回味无穷。
这就是美味的草莓，怎么样，听了我对草莓的介绍，你一定口水“飞流直下三千尺”了吧?保管你吃了还想吃!
五年级英语作文关于商店【四】
猫城里有猫咪食品店，那里卖老鼠肉花生豆、鲜老鼠罐头、油炸老鼠干儿等四十几种跟老鼠有关的食品。
在白猫街的`白猫胡同里的白猫楼第一层的42号住着一只出生了六个月的白猫小伙儿。这只猫小伙儿叫艾笛，它9999999999个猫城货币。
这天，它去食品店买了一盒鲜老鼠罐头、一袋油炸老鼠干儿和一瓶老鼠脑浆酒，一边吃，一边说：“嗯，真好吃！要是能开一家商店，可就能赚大钱了！”它突然拍了一下脑袋，说：“我真是太糊涂！自己开一家商店，不光卖吃的，还卖用的。哈！我要发财了！”它高兴地唱起歌来：“喵！喵！喵喵喵喵喵！我要发财了！咪呜！咪呜！哈哈！”
它用8000块猫城货币盖了一间豪华的商店，又用1000块雇了六十名猫女士当售货员。它又进了鼠皮大衣、鼠毛粉等50多种商品。艾笛在商店门口挂了一块写有“艾笛商店”的招牌。
第二天，正式营业。买东西的猫排了一大行。售货员都忙不过来了。嘿！不到天黑，东西就被抢购一空。艾笛想：既然能赚这么多钱，我还不如……
它在每样东西里都掺了一些假货，价钱也降低了一些。第二天，买东西的猫更多了。它们都以为自己占便宜了，就大量争购自己需要的食品和用品。不到中午，东西又被抢购一空。艾笛可发大财了。
有一天，一位叫米加的猫先生，用了鼠毛粉后，身上非常痒，而且起了许多小红泡。它问妻子爱丽：“这种粉用了后怎么这样？”“我也不知道。”爱丽回答。米加只好去找艾笛。“用了你这种粉后，我身上怎么起了小红泡？”米加问。艾笛结结巴巴地说：“因为，这……这……这些老鼠身上有……有虱子。”米加去老鼠城抓了只老鼠一看，哪里有虱子？米加气极了，去找警官。
警官宣布：“把被告人——艾笛押上来！”警官问艾笛：“你是不是在粉里掺了小跳蚤粉？”艾笛不承认。警官又说：“那米加身上怎么起了小红泡？”艾笛还是不承认。警官又生气地说：“你不承认，就重重判！”艾笛只好承认。警官又说：“好吧！既然你承认了，可以从轻处罚，不过，那得判你有期徒刑！”
这只贪财又骗人的猫，以害人开始，最终又以害己告终，得到了应有的下场。
五年级英语作文关于商店【五】
一天狐狸在外面看见了许多已经坏了的电器，于是狐狸眼珠子一转就想了一个办法，狐狸把这些电器拿到了自己的商店，并修理好了。
他又在自己商店的门口大声地吆喝道：“快来呀，快来呀，这里有好货了。”这时小狗走过来对狐狸说：“狐狸大哥，你这里有饮水机吗？”狐狸连忙笑着说：“有的，不过你要饮水机干什么呢？你家旁边不是有一条小河吗？”
“原本我家旁边是有一条小河的，但是我搬家了，现在跑到小河那要走一个小时呢。”小狗无奈地说道。狐狸说：“那行，这个饮水机便宜，卖给你50元。”小狗说：“谢谢。”因为它已经跑了三家店了，最低也要100元呢，小狗给了狐狸50元之后就拿着饮水机高兴地走了。
接着小熊来了，它对狐狸说：“狐狸老哥，你这里有电视吗？”狐狸说：“有的，不过你要电视做什么呢？你家不是有一台了吗？”小熊说：“是的，我家是有一台电视，但是坏了，我已经把它丢掉了。”狐狸顺手就拿了一个电视，小熊看到电视很熟悉，就说：“诶，这好像是我丢的那一台电视。”狐狸连忙说：“才不是呢，这可是最新款的电视，我用800元钱进来的精品电视，今天促销，这台电视600元卖给你了。”小熊说：“成交。”小熊抱着电视回家了。
狐狸商店促销的消息一传十、十传百，许多动物都来这里买东西了，有买沙发的，有买笔的、文具盒的.，还有买电脑的。可是，凡是在狐狸商店买的东西，过了几天之后就全坏了。他们都去警察那里告状。不久，警察就查明了真相，狐狸商店的货物全是假冒伪劣产品，于是警察就关闭了狐狸商店，并处罚了罚金赔偿小动物们。
这就是“狐狸开商店——没好货”的故事，小朋友们，我们可不要像文中的狐狸一样耍小聪明。
