《两个朋友》是讲有个地方山青水秀,花红叶绿,不知名的小鸟唧唧喳喳地叫着,胖子和瘦子两个好朋友约好到这儿玩,瞧他们玩得真开心啊!
忽然,灌木丛中一声咆哮,一只大熊吼叫着,向两个朋友扑过来。
“救命啊!救命!”两个朋友叫感着,拼命向前奔跑,瘦子真灵活,他几下爬上了树,胖子拼命地大叫:“瘦子瘦子快拉我一把,快拉我一把,可瘦子像没听到一样,续继往上爬,绝望中,胖子忽然想起熊是不吃死人的,胖子赶紧往地上一趟。像死人一样,熊看了看就走了。
这时瘦子看见熊走远了,就从树上跳下来拽起胖子说:“兄弟你大难不死必有后福。”可胖子却说:“你在危险时候不救我,却在安全时来讽刺我,你这种人算什么朋友。”胖子说完头也不回走了。
我读了这个故事懂了一个道理:遇到危险,只顾自己逃命,不顾别人死活的人不能算是朋友。
这个故事使我想到:如果有二个朋友在森林游玩,一个朋友有了危险,那另一个不顾自己的死活去救那个有危险的朋友,那么他们才是真正的朋友。
My uncle has two dogs. One is big and the other is small. He likes them very much.
One day, Mr. Smith came to visit him. When the friend saw two holes in the door, a large hole and a small hole, he was surprised and said, ;My dear friend, why are there two holes in your door?; ;Let my dogs come in and come out, of course,; Mr. Smith asked. ;But why are there two holes? One is enough!; ;But how can the big dog go through the small hole?; my uncle said.
Sometimes a clever man may make such mistakes.
我的叔叔有两条狗。一只是大的,另一只是小狗的.。他很喜欢它们。
有一天,史密斯先生来看他。当这个朋友看见门口上有连个洞,一个是大洞和一个小洞时,他感到吃惊并说,;我亲爱的朋友,为什么你的门上有连个洞?;我的叔叔回答说:;当然是让我的两条狗进出了。 史密斯先生问到:"为什么门上要两个洞呢?一个就足够了。"我叔叔说:;大狗怎能走小洞呢?;
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
洋洋和皮皮是一对好朋友,它们整天都形影不离的在一起,他们在一起做游戏,在一起学习,在一起吃饭。
洋洋学习认真,成绩很好,遇到什么事儿,都爱动脑筋。可皮皮却不这样,它学习不认真,遇到什么事也不爱动脑筋。
有一天,洋洋和皮皮争论起来。洋洋说:“我比你个儿高。”皮皮说:“不对,你跟我是一样高的,怎么会比我高呢?”洋洋说:“我发现你最近变矮了。”皮皮生气地说:“不可能,我不会变矮的。”洋洋说:“你不信?咱俩去哈哈镜馆照照去。”
它们来到了哈哈镜馆。这时,洋洋心想:“教师说过,凹镜照物体大,凸镜照物体小。”于是,它就来到了凹镜前,一照,自己果然非常高,它很高兴,便得意洋洋地看着皮皮。皮皮把老师讲的这个知识忘了,它不管三七二十一,站在了凸镜前,一照,看见自己很矮,它心想:“洋洋说的真对呀。”
它们俩来到了门口。洋洋挺着胸、背着手,嘴还叼着一只烟,神气活现,好得意。可皮皮呢,低着头,耷拉着尾巴,满脸不高兴,垂头丧气地趴在地上,呆呆地望着洋洋,认输了。
这件事告诉我们:要认真学习,遇事勤动脑,这样才会成功。
一天中午(有太阳小兔子饿了,它在大海边看见一棵椰子树,小兔子想吃可是不会爬树,就请来小猴子帮忙,小兔子说:“你帮我摘几个椰子吃吧”!小猴子爬上树把椰子全部摘了下来,小兔子说:“我们一起把椰子放到篮子里,提到我家吃吧”。
我读了《两个朋友》以后,我觉得这两个朋友篇文章很有趣,使我明白了什么是真正的朋友。下面我就和大家来分享这两个朋友篇文章。
这两个朋友篇文章的大意是,有两个朋友在玩的时候碰到了一只熊,他们拼命的逃跑和呼救。瘦子抱着一棵树爬了上去,胖子爬不上去,叫瘦子拉他一把,瘦子却没理他,自己还向更高的地方爬去。胖子想起熊是不吃死人的,就闭上眼睛,屏住呼吸,一动不动,象真死了一样。大熊闻了闻胖子就走了。等熊走远以后,胖子对瘦子说:“不顾别人死活的人,不能算朋友!”说完胖子就走了。
读了这两个朋友篇文章以后,我知道不能共患难的朋友不算是真正的朋友。今后我要真心实意对待自己的朋友,在她们遇到困难的时候及时帮助她们,多替朋友着想,成为她们真正的朋友。
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
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