2022沈阳中考英语作文模板(2022沈阳中考英语作文题)

2022沈阳中考英语作文模板(2022沈阳中考英语作文题)

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2022沈阳中考英语作文模板(2022沈阳中考英语作文题)

2022沈阳中考英语作文模板【一】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

2022沈阳中考英语作文模板【二】

您好!

您知道吗?每当我走过语音室时,总会透过明净的玻璃窗去看看里面的设备,语音室里的一切对于我来说都是那么新奇,那么吸引人。跟着您,在高科技设备装配的语音室里学英语,是我当时最大的愿望。可是,自语音室建好以来,您从未带同学们进去参观过,更没带同学们进去上过一节课,这使得我的愿望变得那样渺茫。

王老师,记得您每次在我们教室里上课时,起码有三分之一的同学在小声说笑,因此,教室里总是乱哄哄的`,可您却很少制止。王老师,维持课堂秩序是您的职责呀,您为什么不去制止他们?还有,您每次提问学生时,一旦同学回答不上来,您总会露出一副不耐烦的神情,为此,许多同学感到很伤心,好多同学也不喜欢上您的课。

王老师,学校培育了我五年,我希望学校越办越好,希望老师能教得开心,我们也能学得开心。因此,我诚心诚意地给您提几条建议,希望您能采纳。

一、每周带同学们到语音室上一次英语课。

二、您不要不管那些上课小声说笑的同学。作为一名教师,您有责任对他们进行批评和教育。

三、今后,请您对那些回答不上问题的同学多一些宽容和理解,并耐心地讲解,这些同学会非常感激您的,他们也会越来越喜欢您的。

王老师,如果您能采纳我的建议,我将十分开心。我坚信您一定会成为我们心中的好老师!

祝您工作顺利!

您的学生:张辉君

3月26日

2022沈阳中考英语作文模板【三】

Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.

Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?

Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.

2022沈阳中考英语作文模板【四】

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.

2022沈阳中考英语作文模板【五】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文:

第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法

结论:

第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法

2022沈阳中考英语作文模板【六】

如果在我们家里评劳动模范,非我老妈莫属。因为她在家里一有空就找事做,永远没闲着时间,是典型的“忙不停”!

有一次,我在家看电视。于是我对妈妈说:“妈妈来看会电视吧!”妈妈说:“好的,等一会!”可是过了半个小时还不来。于是,我就说:“妈妈你这等一会,有多长时间啊?”妈妈说:“来了,来了,还有一点东西整理整理,快了,快了!”可时过了好长时间,她还没过来,于是我跑到老妈妈面前,对他说:“老妈啊,老妈,我真服了你了,刚才还看见你在洗衣服,现在又在拖地,你真是名副其实的‘忙不停’。”

还有一次,我在外面玩的时候,妈妈在擦家具。我玩了一个多小时,回到家里,看到老妈在洗碗,我对他说:“妈妈休息会吧,你不累啊,刚才几个小时,你可是一直在忙啊!”

老妈气呼呼地说:“严超啊,严超,你的房间到处是垃圾。是要有什么就有什么,什么包装袋啊,饮料瓶啊,水果皮啊……那真是垃圾厂里的东西你这有,垃圾厂里没有的东西你这还有……我真是无话可说!……”“啊!那么我怎么看见很干净?”我纳闷的说。老妈说:“那是因为我刚才打扫过了!” “不会吧!我这房间不是很脏,你竟然打扫的这么快,是不是我走以后你一直在做这个?”我惊讶地说。老妈说“是啊!”“老妈别忙了,休息会!”我说。“好的。对了去把水桶里的脏水到了,再灌上干净水。”老妈说。“你要我灌水做什么?”我纳闷的说。老妈说:“拖地。喂,你看看人家家里多干净……”“嗨!老妈啊,老妈,你真是‘停不了’!”我笑着说。

我为有这样勤快的妈妈感到自豪。我经常要对她说:“妈妈,休息会!” 朋友你说我的妈妈是“忙不停”吗?

2022沈阳中考英语作文模板【七】

生活中,劳动必将是一笔难得的人生资源和财富,人生的绚丽和精彩都是在不断的劳动并勇于创造的过程中写出来的!“劳动模范”是我们的榜样,说起“特等劳动模范”,您一定会想到那些工作了半辈子、已经四五十岁的劳动者。可是在昨日举行的2010年沈阳市先进集体和劳动模范表彰大会上,却有名“80后”当选了“特等劳动模范”。

在表彰大会现场,记者见到了这名叫陈雪娇的女孩。她是沈阳某大型商场的营业员,在黄金饰品专区金条柜组工作。“她有个绝活儿,就是能蒙着眼睛编织金刚结。”据表彰大会工作人员介绍,“她卖东西很有特点,常以讲故事的形式为顾客讲解。有了沟通,成交数量便大大提高,其中一笔420万元的销售额更是创下了集团单笔销售之最!”记者了解到,陈雪娇只有24岁,却丝毫没有“80后”的娇气,她对待顾客热情、诚恳,被顾客亲切地称为贴心的“微笑天使”。

百折不挠,让华夏同胞,不懈努力,迎难而上;孜孜不倦,使中华英豪,充满激情,争做栋梁。

“我觉得无论什么行业、无论什么工种、无论什么人物,只要立足岗位,甘于奉献都能创造出一定的劳动价值!”重庆能源集团打通一矿通风队员工胡明军说。       胡明军是名农民工,打过掘进,干过采煤,而最让他记忆深刻的劳动就是在通风队搬石头。在别人看来,搬石头是重活、粗活,可他却在搬运石头的过程中创造出了安全价值、实现了自己的人生价值。“我们一个人一个班要往井下搬运7矿车石头,接近7吨,说不累那是假的,但我们累得十分有价值。”他说。        劳动之所以伟大,是因为劳动引发了一系列的发明创造,推动了社会生产力的不断进步和物质财富的极大丰富,使人类大踏步,从必然王国向自由王国迈进。劳动之所以崇高,是因为劳动是财富之母,人类所享受的一切物质成果、科技成果、文化艺术成果无一不是劳动的产物。

“无论是劳模、明星还是普通劳动者,他们所创造的劳动价值不管大小,都应该得到社会、企业的尊重和认可。”在讨论会上,60多名与会人员向社会呼吁。因为他们发现,在一些企业,普通员工的工资待遇与劳动付出不成正比,政治待遇更是可望而不可及,因此,他们呼吁全社会应该像关注明星、劳模一样关注每一位普通劳动者。只要是通过劳动创造出了一定的价值,不管价值大小,都要让他们既有经济回报,又有政治回报,要让每一位劳动者都有奔头、有想头,从而也让普通劳动者在被尊重和被认可中实现自己的人生价值!

许多时候,命运给了我们黑暗的际遇,但并没有剥夺我们追求光明的权利;命运给了我们坎坷的遭遇,但并没有剥夺我们快乐的心境.命运给谁的都不多,最重要的是我们不能向命运低头,不能好逸恶劳!因此,如何正确对待工作和劳动的问题,实际上就是社会主义荣辱观的一项重要的思想内容,也是我们每个人如何选择和树立正确的世界观、人生观、价值观的具体体现。        在今天的生活中,我们最需要的就是适当的劳动,只有劳动才能更好的谱写生命之歌。

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