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英语作文写如何到自己家【一】

我们今天到娜娜阿姨家做客，我看电视了，看的是《战神联盟》。故事说的是，有一个星球，有很多坏蛋，他们想要抢一颗神树。他们有一个怪兽，怪兽吃了神树上的果子，就会变得很厉害，然后他们就可以打败五个英雄。怪兽为了吃果子，撞倒了神树。但是五个英雄也很厉害，他们找到了怪兽的弱点，就是怪兽肚子上有个钻石，他们把钻石打掉了，所以怪兽就死了。坏人也被打败了。

我最喜欢里面的雷伊，因为他很厉害，他可以发电。我还看了小钱叔叔打游戏，游戏里也是怪兽，也有好人。我还看了小鱼。三条小鱼在水缸里住着，水缸里还有喷水器，是给小鱼换新鲜空气。我还看到一只乌龟，乌龟很大。奶奶和爷爷给我吃了饼干，饼干很好吃。我还嚼了口香糖。真是一个快乐的周末啊！

英语作文写如何到自己家【二】

Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.

So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.

In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.

首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。

第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….

第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….

第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….

其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。

段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。

统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。

连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。

完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。

再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。

1. It has been shown that … …

类似句型：It is known to us that … …

It is said that … …

It is reported that … …

It is controversial that … …

2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。

3. enable v. 使…能够

I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.

4. in that = because

表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：

The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.

此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：

Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。

最后，提纯范文“措辞”。

1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。

2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的

形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions

a multitude of

a great deal of

a large amount of

plenty of

many a

3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。

I argue that … …

I maintain that … …

I claim that … …

I insist that … … = I think that … …

I hold that … …

I assert that … …

I assume that … …

4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的

hold negative view = hold opposite opinions

5. phenomenon n. 现象

social phenomenon 社会现象

natural phenomenon 自然现象

6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever

(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever

在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：

1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会

2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会

3. 我的看法

Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.

However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.

In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.

英语作文写如何到自己家【三】

“嘀……嘀”瞧，这是我的时光屏幕，能随时和过去、现在、未来人通话。“请输入时间和人物。”“请接2100年的我。”“嘀……已接通。”“喂，未来的陈宇昊，我是201x年的陈宇昊。”我高兴地说。未来的我说：“要不要到我家玩？”我问：“可是怎么才能去呢？”“我自有办法！”未来的我说。

一道金光从我眼前闪过，突然，我站在一个隧道里，我抬头一看，隧道里刻着“时光隧道”四个大字。我觉得十分新奇，便走了进去。

这里的空气清新甜润，马路一尘不染，树木舒展着枝叶，小鸟在枝头唱着动听的歌，五彩缤纷，神态各异的蝴蝶在林间飞舞……我走着走着，突然，一块石头挡在了路面。不看不知道，一看真奇妙。只见这块大石头变成了一座房子，这座房找不到一扇窗户，只有个小通风口，未来的我说：“这座房子是用高分子材料做成的，能消除噪音，可以透气，十分坚固。下面的小通风口是光源接收器接收光的。有小偷偷东西时，感应器会自动报警，还会告诉主人。”未来的我说：“进来吧！”我走进门。啊！这房子真大！可以容下两个足球场。可是，这房子怎么空空如也呢？未来的我也是100岁的老人吧！怎么还精神抖擞健步如飞呢？未来的我好象猜透了我的心思说：“因为这是我们设计的无限房，想要什么就有什么。第二个问题，待会你就知道了。”话音刚落，未来的我摸了墙上红色的一块，屋子里顿时亮了起来，可哪儿也找不着电灯。“这光是从哪里来的？”我好奇地问。未来的我说：“我手上的静电把墙壁上那块红色下面的电容值改变了，发出电流信号，信号被光源放大器接收，光源放大器可以把很微弱的光放到很亮。即使在晚上，它也能发出很亮的光。”这时，未来的我摸了摸绿色那块，输入了程序，一间设备齐全的房屋出现在我眼前。就这样，眼前的影象飞快地变幻起来：卧室、书房、厕所……最后，又变成了一间客厅。只听未来的我说了一句：“开门。”门自动开了。“为什么只要说一声‘开门’，门就自动开了？”我问。未来的我说：“我说话的声音被门上的感应器感应到了，当声音和程序里指定的.声音相符时，门就会按照程序里指定的动作去做。”接着，未来的我叫了一声：“机器人。”不一会儿，便来了两个机器人热情地招待我。我又问：“为什么想要什么就有什么？”未来的我说：“分子组合器把各种分子组合在一起就可以变成一样东西。如果要消失，就把分子拆散，再吸进去，这个东西就消失了。”“那这些能源是从哪儿来的？”我问。未来的我说：“这些能源都是太阳能、风能、海水能、热能、还有二氧化碳变成氧气时的能量，从不污染环境。”“哦，我明白了。”我说，“生活在这样一个高科技又环保的年代，怎么能不健康长寿呢？”“时候不早了，再见！”未来的我说。“再见！”我说。这时，一道金光从眼前闪过，我又回到了现在的世界。

我恋恋不舍地回到了家，心思还在那新奇的未来世界里……同学们，这样的房子你喜欢吗？你想拥有吗？那就让我们一起为这一天早点到来刻苦钻研，勇于探索吧！

英语作文写如何到自己家【四】

“滋——”车缓缓停了下来。我们脚刚着地，热情的阿姨就从老远迎了上来，笑容满面地说：“欢迎，欢迎！”妈妈郑重地将牛奶塞给了她，“来，给你们家儿子好好补补！”阿姨连忙拒绝，可经不住妈妈的软磨硬泡，只好勉强收下了。刚进阿姨家的门儿，就感受到了一种不同氛围：地板擦得能当镜子使，玻璃透亮，一尘不染的茶几上并排摆放着两杯冒着热气的白开水，一盒满满的'饼干，几盘五彩缤纷的水果糖。洁净的水果篮中还有那水灵灵的葡萄，红通通的苹果，挺着大肚子的鸭梨……令人垂涎三尺。开着的电视机正在放映着男女老少皆爱看的《一家老小向前冲》。叔叔见我们来了，连忙从里屋飞奔出来，为我们拿出拖鞋，又颇具绅士风度地将手一摊：“请进！”我们如贵宾一般被请进了屋。这时，阿姨的儿子从房间里微笑着走了出来。他是一名初中生，胖胖的圆脸，或像庙里的财神，眼睛几乎被挤没了。

一幅令人发笑的样子。这哥哥还挺会逗乐子，张口便说：“呀！

托你们的福，今天家里像个宾馆似的哟！”阿姨狠狠地瞪了他一眼，当看到我们都开怀大笑，也忍不住哈哈大笑起来。我们都悠闲地坐在柔软的沙发上津津有味地吃着东西，妈妈与阿姨开始天南地北地聊起了天。哥哥也开始发挥他的搞笑才能——为我讲笑话。那一句句幽默的话语，晓得我肚子都疼了。我啃了口饼干，正好挤到了那颗将要下岗的老顽固——一颗松极了却总也不掉的牙齿。只听“啪哒”一声，嘿，牙齿被挤掉了！这时，哥哥大惊失色，惊讶地说：“不会吧，你还真笑掉大牙了？”我乐得差点没在地上滚起来。“你们这些同志，怎么光顾开心，不顾吃饭了呀！”叔叔故作严肃地教育道，“俗话说，‘人是铁，饭是钢’……”“行了行了，再说我可真饿死了！”哥哥望着这一桌丰盛的晚餐，已有点迫不及待了。“瞧你这猴急样儿，来！来！来，给你！”叔叔说这给了哥哥一大勺香喷喷的米饭，接着又一一为我们盛，还给每人准备了一瓶牛奶。我狼吞虎咽地吃了起来，阿姨给我夹了些绿油油的青菜，并像个哲学家似的告知：“蔬菜要多次，它能给脸上增添点颜色……”“嘿！她稀罕绿颜色的脸蛋吗？”哥哥漫不经心地吐出一句话。“哈哈哈……”又是一串爽朗的笑声。

“现在，你认为需要这么破费了吗？”回家的路上，妈妈笑着问我。“当然当然！”我毫不犹豫地回答道。