Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
大自然是充满生机的,有时它是一组旋律,有时她是一副幅多姿多彩的画。冬日,雪花飘飘,天寒地暖,但雪中的景物却那般和谐静谧,散发出别致的意味。
自然是永恒的奇葩,她赋予梅花秉性,那是“众芳摇落独暄妍,绽尽风情向小园”。她绘制出别致的风景,有“乱花渐欲迷人眼,浅草才能没马蹄”的偏安一隅。她雕刻出壮阔山河,“日月之行,若出其中,星汉灿烂,若出其里”。
古往今来,文字记录了自然的旋律,它在纸面上自由挥洒,将大自然的变迁与奉献永载史册。我们后人手捧沉甸甸的书籍,恍若置身其间,不由得用心来体会自然的心跳。无数的书籍告诉我们:人与自然本是一家,两者理应和谐共存,互惠互利,与自然和谐相处,共同进化。
谈及“人与自然和谐相处”这一话题,我就会不由自主得想起一本小说《斗罗大陆》,这本小说讲述了在一个名为“斗罗大陆”的世界里,有着两个种族:魂师和魂兽。魂师必须通过猎***魂兽获得魂环来提升自己的实力,长此以往,魂师与魂兽的矛盾日益激化。小说的主人公唐三一家为了缓和和甚至解决这一矛盾,也是一直在努力探索。尽管他们开创的道路最终没有得到广泛推广和实践,但他们付出的努力也是不可置否的。
我想:这部小说中所讲述的这一故事不正是一个类似人与自然和谐相处的问题吗?很显然,小说中的这个问题比起我们人类与大自然的问题困难了十倍百倍。即便是这样,他们也最终找到了解决方案。那么,我们人类又有什么理由不去解决这一问题呢?
在经济建设突飞猛进的今天,物质生活日益丰富,为了满足自己的需要,人们砍伐一片片的`森林,污染一条条河流,侵蚀一寸寸土地,让那个曾经美丽的地球满目疮痍,这样的自然会成为我们的朋友吗?
为保障人与自然的和谐,必须建立人与自然和谐的心,除法律手段外,还必须依靠道德的力量,建立适应生态环境保护和改善的道德规范,有利于形成人们坚定的内心信念,形成强大的社会舆论压力。
唤醒“绿色之心”,实施“绿色计划”,开展“绿色行动”。让我们用双手撑起一片蔚蓝的天空!
亲爱的同学们:
您好!
这是我第一次给您写信,今天想和您聊聊“诚信立身,友善待人”。
在我们身边经常会因为诚信不足而引发一些事,从而引起一系列问题。那么面对这些问题,你会如何看待呢?我认为我们必须“诚信立身,友善待人”。
四年级下学期的时候,我们学习了关于诚信和友善的一组课文,给我感触很大,想和你分享分享。其中《中彩那天》给我的印象极为深刻。这篇课文讲了:在二战时,父亲无意抽中了大奖,但是抽中了大奖的彩票却是他帮同事代买的。经过思想斗争,他把大奖送还了同事。父亲放弃了汽车,选择了诚信。听了这个故事,你有什么感受呢?如果你是父亲,你会怎么做?我觉得一个人只要活得诚实,就等于有了一大笔财富。
在生活中换位思考很重要。如果我是她会怎么想,怎么说,怎么做?人与人之间发生了矛盾,多多换位思考会缩短人于人之间的距离,多些宽容和理解,会少了许多矛盾。因为没有换位思考,有时候,一件很小的事也会闹的天翻地覆不可开交,从而使彼此受到伤害。多点欢乐多点爱,让我们一起友善待人吧!一个优秀的人必定具备“诚信立身,友善待人”的品质,我觉得做到“诚信立身,友善待人”就要做到以下几点:
1、学会以诚待人。在生活中不欺骗他人,说话必须真诚,为他人着想。
2、学会友善待人。对他人友善,不把小矛盾放在心上,不责怪他人。
3、学会换位思考,将心比心。
让我们一起做一个“诚信立身,友善待人”的人吧!
祝:身体健康,万事如意!
亲爱的张后宇老师:
一转眼,我在这个陌生的学校生活了十三天,从刚来这里的不情愿瞬间变成了依依不舍,我发现了原来这个学校有太多太多值得我留恋的地方,这里的老师十分和蔼,这里的同学幽默有趣,我打心底里喜欢上了这个著名的杭州外国语学校了。
刚迈进学校大门时,我的心里一直在想:“这里的老师会不会很严厉?老师会体罚学生吗?当我们不听话时老师会请家长吗?这种种猜想在我脑海里一遍又一遍地重复着。当我上完一天的课程后,我顿时觉得一切似乎是神圣的,老师一点也不凶,反而像我们的朋友一样对待我们。我特别喜欢上您的课,因为我觉得您上的课就像在听别人讲故事一样,生动有趣,有声有色,现在离回家还有几天时间,我真希望时间可以倒流,让我再回到7月10日那天,那么,我还有十五天在这里生活,如果有机会,我一定还要来杭外参加夏令营,我永远不会忘记我在这里的美好回忆,更不会忘记曾经教过我的老师,那句句叮咛,那声声嘱咐,一直在我的耳边回响,张老师,希望你别忘记您有这么一个学生,曾经把您当作自己偶像的学生,我也会像您说的那样好好学习,我也不会您失望的,我会给您写信,也会在QQ上与您聊天,我们可以这样保持联系吗?教过我的所有老师,我真的特别特别特别特别(无数个特别)为什么会这么迷恋您呢?也许是因为您年轻,也许是因为您像姐姐,反正不管怎么样我就是喜欢您,别人不能阻拦我!否则我要他们好玩。(嘻嘻,张老师我就是这样有一点点野蛮的性格,请别见怪哦!)
亲爱的张老师,如果您可以当我姐姐的话,那我就高兴得疯掉了!!!现在是白天吗?哦,那我就是白日做梦了!bye bye,张老师!眼睛酸了吧,呵呵!
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An ant is walking by the river. He looks at the river and says to himself, "How nice and cool this water looks! I must drink some of it." But when he is drinking, he slips into the river.
"Oh.Help!Help!" The ant cries,
A dove is sitting in the tree. She hears him and throws him a leaf, "Climb up that leaf," she says "and you will float bank."
The ant climbs uo onto the leaf, and the wind blows the leaf to the bank. And the ant is saved.
"Thank you, Dove. You're so kind," The ant says and runs home, "You have saved my life, and I wish I could do something for you, Goodbye!"
"Goodbye!" says the dove, "Be careful. Not to fall into the river again."
After a few days, the dove is building her nest. And a man is raising his gun to shoot her.
The ant sees this, and runs quickly to bite the man's leg. "Ouch! Ouch!" The man feels pained and drops his gun. The dove hears and flies away. So the man picks up his gun and leave.
The dove comes to her nest. "Thank you, my little friend," she says, "You have saved my life."
The little ant is so glad, because he can help the dove.
一只蚂蚁在河边散步。他看见喝水自言自语道:"这河水看上去真清凉啊!我要去喝点。"可是他在喝水的时候,一不小心滑进河里了。
"啊!救命!救命!'蚂蚁叫喊着。
一只鸽子正呆在树上,听见呼救声,就扔给他一片树叶。"快爬到树叶上去。她说:"你会漂到岸上的。"
"谢谢你,鸽子。你真善良。"蚂蚁一边说一边向家跑,"你救了我的命,我会报答你的。再见!"
"再见!小心别掉进河里了。"鸽子说。
几天后,鸽子正在筑巢,一个人举着枪要打鸽子。蚂蚁看见了,迅速地跑过去,在那个人的腿上咬了一口。"啊呀!哎呀!"那个人疼得扔掉枪。鸽子听见了,连忙飞走了。那个人只好捡起枪,走了。
鸽子又飞回巢里。"谢谢你,我的小朋友。"鸽子说,"你救了我的.命。"
小蚂蚁可高兴了,因为他也帮助了鸽子。
寓意:有些朋友也许平时看似微不足道,但却有可能在我们身处困难的时候提供巨大的帮助。
英语老师:
您好!
在辽阳过得好吗?工作也顺利吧?在这里我给您写一封信,借此问候您。
老师,我永远忘不了那个下午,当我听说您要调到辽阳去教书时,泪水充满了我的双眼——要知道,我舍不得您走,舍不得您,好舍不得!
记得刚学英语的时候,您第一次来给我们上课,您那天穿的好美:白色的连衣裙,长长的头发,大大的眼睛,甜美的声音,我们所有同学都被你迷住了,打那一刻开始,我就喜欢上了您,喜欢您的美丽,喜欢您的甜美的声音。
还记得那次演讲比赛,我在耿庄镇中脱颖而出,代表耿庄镇去海城参加演讲,是您带我去的.,虽然我努力了,但是还是只得了一个优秀奖,您安慰我说:"没关系,毕竟你这是第一次,下次你一定会取得好成绩的,失败是成功的开始,别伤心了。”我听了,擦干了眼角的泪水,眼里又重新绽放出光芒,我知道,那是希望。从那一刻起,我决定做您最优秀的学生,我下功夫,拼命的学,努力的学,本以为还有机会,可谁知道,比赛之后的第3天,就传出了您要调走的消息。我们不敢相信,简直不敢想象,我们大家都哭了,所有人都哭了。那一刻,想见您,拼命的想见您,我当时都有了那个想法:只要能见您,付出生命我都愿意!您对我们比妈妈还亲,您教给我们的知识,我们会铭记在心,我们知道,您不可能在调回来了,就算调回来,教的也不再是我们了!
老师,自从您调走后,我们做梦都天天梦到您,满脑子想的全是您,您甜美的声音,美丽的笑容,充满希望的眼神…
老师,我们好想您!
祝:永远年轻美丽,开开心心的生活!
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