英语作文模板记叙【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
英语作文模板记叙【二】
I like reading novel books very much, and now I have read a lot of books. Thanks to my parents, they lead me the road to fall in love with these amazing books. I open my vision and learn a lot outside the class. Everyday before I sleep, I will take out the books and read them for an hour. This good habit helps me to know more about the world.
我非常喜欢阅读小说，现在我已经看过很多书了。多亏了我的父母，是他们让我爱上了这些神奇的书，开阔了我的视野，也在课外学到很多东西。每天在我睡觉之前，我都会拿出书，看一个小时。这个好习惯帮助我更多地了解世界。
英语作文模板记叙【三】
I like dreaming。 Sometimes I will think if I were a bird， it would be so good。 If I were a bird， I won’t need to go to school and have class everyday。 And I also do not need to do so much homework。 If I were a bird， I can fly freely。 I can go wherever I want。 I can fly to New York to visit my pen friend。 If I were a bird， I can sleep on the tree。 I can breathe the fresh air every day I wake up。 How wonderful it would be to a bird。
我喜欢做梦。我有时候会在想要是我是一只鸟，那该有多好啊。如果我是一只鸟，我就不用每一天去学校上课了。我也不用写那么多的作业。如果我是一只鸟，我就能够自由自在的飞翔。我能够去任何我想去的地方，我能够去看望我在纽约的笔友。如果我是一只鸟，我就能够睡在树上。每一天醒来的时候呼吸一下新鲜的空气。如果我是一只鸟，那该有多么好啊。
英语作文模板记叙【四】
Today， good sunny weather， always a hundred flowers 。I head swimming glasses， I sing a little song， walked meteor big， went to Zhoushan Middle School swimming pool。
Wow thiazolyl! Today， many people can really ah! A group of three students， five pile， in the pool， pushing and shoving， no better happy!
I already have lost Hing son， traveling light。 \'Thump!\' I caught a spring， water ducks to water generally swim a 。 Nice to feel the water! I have a moment like a free fish fry for a while yet also seemed a carefree birds。 Sometimes wildly breaststroke frog forward， sometimes into freestyle， rolls toward the deep water。 I kept the swinging hands， feet not live playing the water splashes like a bit graceful girl， and like one a lovely boy， beautiful great! I jumped up， roll forward。 \'Wow!\' The water was cold and deep water， thrilled! \'Crash 。\' my original\' Deep Somersault \'began。 I pushed the hands， feet Yi Deng， jumped backward， turn sideways for a more perfect performance ah! I am in the midst of cheers， air to drill into the water。 At this time， the students are ing to my swim。 Suddenly， the pool open swim posture: breaststroke， butterfly， dog plane， everything。 Overtake each other， with each side。 Laughter， playfulness sound into a 。
Tired， I lay quietly on the water: If water every day as partners， so the fish do my friend， my teacher， my job is only swimming 。 it was nice to ah!
When the sun sets， my classmates and I still play pool slapstick。 Finally， the shore， and the evening\'s setting sun dragging our very， very long shadow。 Happy swimming， I like!
“这天天气好晴朗，处处百花香……”我头顶游泳眼镜，口哼小曲，迈着流星大步，向舟山中学游泳池走去。
哇噻!这天人可真多啊!学生们三个一群，五个一堆，在泳池里推推搡搡，好不快活!
我早已耐不住兴子，轻装上阵。“扑通!”我纵身一跃，如水鸭子一般去水里畅游了……。水里的感觉真好!我一会儿像一条自由自在的小鱼，一会儿又似一只无忧无虑的水鸟。时而青蛙似地蛙泳前进，时而自由泳进，向着深水区进发。我的双手不停着摆动着，两脚不住地打着水，溅起的水花如一位位婀娜多姿的少女，又像一个个活泼可爱的男孩，美丽极了!
我跳跃着，翻滚着。“哇!”深水区的水好凉、好爽!“哗啦。”我的独创“深水空翻”开始了。我双手一推，两脚一蹬，向后一跃，侧身一转，多完美的表演啊!我在一片喝彩声中，神气地钻入水里。这时，同学们都向我游了过来。顿时，泳池里游姿开放：蛙泳、蝶泳、狗刨、应有尽有。你追我赶，互不相让。欢笑声、嬉闹声响成一片。
累了，我静静地躺在水面上：要是天天与水为伴，让鱼儿做我的朋友，当我的老师，我的作业只有游泳。那该多好啊!
夕阳西下时，我和同学们还在泳池里嬉戏打闹。最后，上岸了，黄昏的残阳把我们的影子拖得很长很长。快乐的游泳，我喜欢!
英语作文模板记叙【五】
The story of an ugly swan becomes beautiful as it grows up telling people not to judge others by appearance. Most kids especially girls look homely but they turn to be beauties as they become adults. But some people are exceptions, because they look beautiful all the time. For the celebrities, they like to show the audience with their pictures as they are small, which proves that they are naturally beautiful, instead of doing the plastic surgery. Like Natalie Portman, the famous actress and winning the Oscar Award for Black Swan, became famous in her 13. The audience grew up with her and watched her became more and more beautiful. But what makes people surprised is that Portman studied at the top university. She is a smart girl with beautiful face. Only the talent can help a person shinning all the time.
丑小丫变天鹅的故事告诉我们不要单凭外表来判断一个人。大多数孩子尤其是女孩看起来普通，但他们长大成人后就会变美。但有些人是例外，因为他们一直看起来都很漂亮。对于名人，他们喜欢给观众展示他们小时候的照片来证明他们是自然美，而不是做整形手术。像娜塔莉·波特曼，著名女演员，凭借《黑天鹅》赢得了奥斯卡奖，,在她13岁的时候就出名了。观众伴随着她长大，看着她越来越漂亮。但是让人惊讶的是，波特曼是在名校上学。她是一个有着漂亮的脸的聪明女孩。只有才华才能让一个人一直闪闪发亮。
英语作文模板记叙【六】
On November 11th, which is treated as the Single Day in China, has become the shopping day on the Internet. The e-commerce earns the largest profit in this day, while in the western countries, they also have such discounting day. On the first working day after Christmas Day, which is called boxing day. The shops will give great discount, which attracts people to buy products. Many Chinese people have joined this group now. They fly abroad and spend Christmas, then they are waiting for the Boxing Day, preparing to buy the brands. The coming of Boxing Day was in the Middle Age. Boxes were put in front of the churches, after Christmas, the workers would open these boxes and donated the money to help the poor. Now Boxing Day is very popular, and western people want to buy what they want in great discount.
11月11日，在中国被认为是光棍节的这一天已经成为互联网购物日。电子商务在这一天获得最大的利润，而在西方国家，他们也有这样的折扣日。在圣诞节过后的第一个工作日称为节礼日，商店会以大打折扣来吸引人们购买商品。现在许多中国人已经加入这个行列。他们飞到国外去过圣诞节，然后等待节礼日，准备购买商品。节礼日的起源是在中世纪。那时在教堂前边放了盒子，圣诞节后，工作人员打开这些箱子，把里面的钱拿去捐赠并且帮助穷人。节礼日如今是非常受欢迎的，西方人们通过大折扣去购买心头所爱。
英语作文模板记叙【七】
My first stay at home alone was memorable. When I was twelve, once both of my mother and father were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. I actually kept the light on in my bedroom the whole night. For fear of getting up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms respectively at 6:00, 6:10, and 6:15. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for Mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.
英语作文模板记叙【八】
今天上午第三节英语课，我们班进行了U6词语的听写，昨天的作业口语100上面老师布置了一个准备U6的词语准备听写这个作业，可是我没有复习U6词语，每次老师在作业上布置了要复习U几，可是，我根本就不去看，不去复习，所以，我这是听写考得很差，在这次听写中，我们班大部分人都没有复习，所以我这次听写只得了40分，我感觉这次听写成绩很差，我错过六个，对了四个，一共有10个词，八个短语，两个句子。
我这次错的太多是因为我根本就没有认真去看，去读，去背，我只想到把笔头作业写完就可以了，从来不认真去记，其实老师每天都布置复习的作业，可是我从来都不复习。我现在很后悔，没有认真完成老师布置的作业，我一定要改掉这个坏毛病，上课认真听讲，认真的去完成老师布置的各项作业，认真复习，争取每次听写和考试都能取得好成绩。
