jenny的周末英语作文五年级【一】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
jenny的周末英语作文五年级【二】
假如这个周末没有作业，我就可以尽情地玩耍。我想去天津参观被称为“滨海之眼”的滨海图书馆，在书海中拾贝，而不用担心路途遥远而无法写作业的问题；我想和同学一起去公园骑车、“撕名牌”或者联机打游戏而不被家长催着写作业；我想看自己喜欢的书，想看多久就看多久，一点儿不受作业的干扰；我想下棋、画画等等，总之没有作业我玩什么都痛快。
假如这个周末没有作业，我就可以去看望我的姥姥、姥爷。今天是重阳节，我想去帮姥姥、姥爷做些家务，我想去给他们捶个背洗个脚，晚上吃一顿姥姥做的美味佳肴，夜里我可以和他们睡在一张大床上，听他们讲述他们年轻时候的故事，这将是多么幸福的周末呀！
假如这个周末没有作业，我会是一个好脾气的.孩子。其实我的脾气并不差，只是经常在我玩到兴头上的时候，妈妈会问作业写完了吗，然后我会不情愿地放下手中的玩具被迫去写作业，这让我产生怒气积在心里，不知什么时候就会像火山爆发一样发泄出来，然后就会被爸妈一起批评。要是没有作业我哪会发脾气呀。
可惜这只是“假如”，我不得不从这白日梦中醒过来，接受这残酷的现实，继续赶着这周末的作业了。
jenny的周末英语作文五年级【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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jenny的周末英语作文五年级【四】
我知道这将会是个非常庸俗的开头。
我无法创造出一个类似小说里那样富有情节的开始。
比如“当你收到这封信的时候，我已经在开往a城的火车上，或者是在飞往b国的飞机上。”
我哪里也不能去，现实把我牢牢的钉在这里。
但这仍然不能阻止我必须要对你说下面的这番话。
至今我都不明白我们在bbs的相遇是不是属于偶然。
我一直认为象我这样的人不会引起别人真正的注意。直到，遇到你。
bbs里充斥一些自以为是的男人和女人。他们想当然的认为自己风流倜傥，玲珑八面，美艳可人，所以自然应该成为耀眼的中心。
但对于我而言，这里只是我心灵最后仅存的圣地。
我鄙视一切矫情。
我写下我的心情，追念我的过去，思考我的将来，而无须担心现实中那种直面的尴尬。没有人知道我是谁。
但这只是我的一部分，并非全部。
我无法确认我是否属于严重的分裂者，但我必须要把你感知之外的另一个我毫无保留的告诉你。
我每天挥汗如雨做着卑微的工作。准确的说我不认为我和那些向往大都市的淘金者有什么不同。虽然我确实存在和生活于这个大都市里很多年。
我喜欢coronaextra的清香味道，不加糖的esperesso，知道什么是咏叹调，萨特是谁罗丹又是谁。很从容的和别人谈论一切小资的话题。
这让我看起来是个有品位和格调的人。但这一切只是源于过去我的经历，和现在无关。
这些记忆存在于我的思想里，也许会让你觉得我很丰富，但实际上，我除了在思想上拥有这些，已经没有别的什么了。
而思想不能为我换来一袋米。
文籍虽满腹，不如一囊钱。
我是个极其浪漫的人，追求完美和极致，追求细节。这也意味着我不能容忍粗糙的生活。
如果我们在现有的基础上继续迈进哪怕是小小的一步，那么，你必然真实的见到光环下的另一面。
而一旦开启了这扇门，最终的结果只有两种。
第一种：我进入你的现实。在你的羽翼和期待下，继续我的奋斗之路。问题在于在我能改善这些生活状态以前的这段时间，对你的耐心和我的'心理承受能力都是一种很大的考验。
第二种：你进入我的现实。我说过我不会容忍粗糙的生活，当然我不是指我自己。也许你可以放下一切跟着我过现在艰苦的日子。冬天里洗衣服，下班后无休止的家务，永远担心下一个月的房租和水电费。你的手会变得粗糙，这样的日子会在你的脸上很快刻下岁月的痕迹。你会很快变成一个不折不扣的平凡女人。
我不是吓唬你。这是我绝不愿意看到的。
人的一生总是要面临不断的选择。
那么，我宁愿选择把我最光辉的一面留给你。
jenny，原谅我。
jenny的周末英语作文五年级【五】
我无法创造出一个类似小说里那样富有情节的开始。
比如“当你收到这封信的时候，我已经在开往a城的火车上，或者是在飞往b国的飞机上。”
我哪里也不能去，现实把我牢牢的钉在这里。
但这仍然不能阻止我必须要对你说下面的这番话。
至今我都不明白我们在bbs的相遇是不是属于偶然。
我一直认为象我这样的人不会引起别人真正的注意。直到，遇到你。
bbs里充斥一些自以为是的男人和女人。他们想当然的认为自己风流倜傥，玲珑八面，美艳可人，所以自然应该成为耀眼的中心。
但对于我而言，这里只是我心灵最后仅存的圣地。
我鄙视一切矫情。
我写下我的心情，追念我的过去，思考我的将来，而无须担心现实中那种直面的尴尬。没有人知道我是谁。
但这只是我的一部分，并非全部。
我无法确认我是否属于严重的分裂者，但我必须要把你感知之外的另一个我毫无保留的告诉你。
我每天挥汗如雨做着卑微的工作。准确的说我不认为我和那些向往大都市的淘金者有什么不同。虽然我确实存在和生活于这个大都市里很多年。
我喜欢coronaextra的清香味道，不加糖的esperesso，知道什么是咏叹调，萨特是谁罗丹又是谁。很从容的和别人谈论一切小资的话题。
这让我看起来是个有品位和格调的人。但这一切只是源于过去我的经历，和现在无关。
这些记忆存在于我的.思想里，也许会让你觉得我很丰富，但实际上，我除了在思想上拥有这些，已经没有别的什么了。
而思想不能为我换来一袋米。
文籍虽满腹，不如一囊钱。
我是个极其浪漫的人，追求完美和极致，追求细节。这也意味着我不能容忍粗糙的生活。
如果我们在现有的基础上继续迈进哪怕是小小的一步，那么，你必然真实的见到光环下的另一面。
而一旦开启了这扇门，最终的结果只有两种。
第一种：我进入你的现实。在你的羽翼和期待下，继续我的奋斗之路。问题在于在我能改善这些生活状态以前的这段时间，对你的耐心和我的心理承受能力都是一种很大的考验。
第二种：你进入我的现实。我说过我不会容忍粗糙的生活，当然我不是指我自己。也许你可以放下一切跟着我过现在艰苦的日子。冬天里洗衣服，下班后无休止的家务，永远担心下一个月的房租和水电费。你的手会变得粗糙，这样的日子会在你的脸上很快刻下岁月的痕迹。你会很快变成一个不折不扣的平凡女人。
我不是吓唬你。这是我绝不愿意看到的。?
人的一生总是要面临不断的选择。
那么，我宁愿选择把我最光辉的一面留给你。
jenny，原谅我。
