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2.参考词汇:房租Tent(n..
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(2词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数 。
High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate.
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I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior three student, it won't take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
高中被认为是一个人一生中最好的时间。作为一名三年级的学生,在我毕业前不需要很长时间。现在,我和我的同学们分享了很多。
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."
首先,我想对我所有的方式,教师,家长和朋友包括我的赞赏。没有他们的帮助和建议,我的生活将是不同的。其次,是对我伤害或误解的同学说对不起的时候了。沟通和微笑是友谊的桥梁。最重要的是,我已经下决心要尽一切努力去学习,因为我相信努力工作是成功的关键。正如俗话所说:“没有痛苦,没有收获。”
Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.
最后,我希望所有的年轻人都能充分利用时间,因为时间和时间等待任何人。
Now, I am sixth grade student. After ten years later, I will be a college graduate and apply for the first job in my life. I think I will be a teacher, because it’s my dream. I will teach my students all I know. Maybe I will meet some problems and challenges in my new job, but they can’t beat me. Besides, I can earn money and support myself at that time. Therefore, I can do a lot of things I like. For example, I can travel in summer or winter vacation. Or I can go to see a movie at weekends. It seems so wonderful.
现在,我是一名六年级的学生。十年后,我将是一名拥有人生中第一份工作的大学毕业生。我想我会成为一名老师,因为那是我的梦想。我会把我知道的都教给我的学生。也许我会在新工作中遇到一些问题和挑战,但我不会让它们打倒我的`。此外,那个时候我能挣钱养活我自己了,因此我能做很多我喜欢的事情了。比如,我可以在暑假或寒假去旅游,又或者在周末去看一场电影。这样的生活似乎很好。
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