将要去东方明珠的英语作文五年级【一】
星期六，我和妹妹在爸爸妈妈的带领下去儿童乐园游玩。
我们乘车来到儿童游乐场，儿童游乐场十分美丽，游戏的节目众多。有碰碰车、淘气宝，还有恐龙世界，真是举不胜举。
我们首先来到玩碰碰车的地方，只见小伙伴们开着五颜六色碰碰车，让我看得眼花缭乱。我和妹妹迫不及待地坐上一辆红色的碰碰车，由我来操控方向，妹妹控制前进和后退。忽然，有一辆绿色车夹住了黄色车，我也去凑凑热闹，快速上前夹住了绿色车。这时，还有一辆红色车趁机而入，把我的车夹住了。我们都使劲想把对方撞开，结果不成，结果都被撞了出，玩碰碰车真是带劲。
玩好了碰碰车，我们又来到淘气宝玩。这里面玩得东西真不少，有“马”、“房子”、“楼梯”和“障碍”等等。我玩起“打鬼子”的游戏，我成为中国的勇士，我奋勇战斗，总算把“鬼子”打败。我正玩得尽兴，妈妈催促我去别的地方玩，我只好恋恋不舍的告别了碰碰车。
接下来，我们来到了恐龙世界。我看到一只大恐龙，这只恐龙是给游人们玩的。我便不由自主地来到恐龙面前。只见恐龙的头不停地撞着铁，我忍不住大笑起来。其他游人听见笑声也纷纷跑过来看，涌上前去，争先恐后地玩了起来，场内不时传出欢声笑语。真是开心极了！
时间不早了，我们依依不舍地离开了儿童游乐场。
将要去东方明珠的英语作文五年级【二】
以前，爸爸经常对我说：“有一个游乐场很好玩，那里有一个巨大的过山车，等你长大了一些，我就会带你去玩。”哈哈……我终于盼到了这一天，这是在暑假中一个晴朗的\'星期天下午，爸爸开着车，带着妈妈和我来到了锦江乐园。
一进游乐场，我就迫不及待地拉着爸爸妈妈冲到游乐场的位置地形图处，寻找出过山车的位置，直奔而去。终于我坐到了过山车上，系好安全杆，即期待又紧张地等待着车开动。过山车开始起动了，车子慢慢地沿着轨道向上爬，我的心一下子被拎了起来，下意识地紧紧抓住扶手。
然后车子很快地冲下来转了一圈又一圈，我闭着双眼，不断地尖叫起来，什么都顾不上了！听着耳边的风声与一起的玩伴们的尖叫声，我感觉到自已马上就要掉下去了……又过了一会儿，车子终于缓缓地停了下来，我抬起发软的腿，慢慢地走下了车子。这真是我长这么大以来最刺激的一次游玩。妈妈问我“怎么样，好玩吗，还敢再玩吗？”我兴奋地回答她，这真是太好玩了，下次我还要再来玩一次！“
将要去东方明珠的英语作文五年级【三】
终于到了超市。这个超市好大呀，虽然不如大商超市那么大，但远比它东西多。这里的东西样样齐全各式各样，看得我眼花缭乱的，来到了食品区，有很多好吃的，有水果、有饼干、有奶、糖……
忽然，我听到了一个声音，是爸爸说的`，说：“宝贝，你挑点儿吧，”天啊，这是我最感动地一次，爸爸竟然主动让我买吃的，我挑了我最爱的"好多鱼”、“3+2饼干”还有“康豆花生”，满满一大包，我好高兴啊！
买完东西，我们才依依不舍地离开了超市。
将要去东方明珠的英语作文五年级【四】
星期天下午，我和妈妈去游乐场游玩。
来到游乐场，啊！人山人海，用人流如潮，热闹非凡等词语来形容真是太恰当不过了。有打网球的，有滑潜艇的，有玩碰碰车的......
引起我注意的是滑潜艇比赛。我想比一比，妈妈同意了，于是我坐上潜艇开始比赛。
比赛枪一响，我就开始潜艇了，出乎意料的是有一位队员的速度飞快。不一会儿，他就和终点只离五六百米远了，我却几乎还在起点，气的我火冒三丈。我想：如果他累得满头大汗，不想往前滑的时候，我不就可以超越他了吗？于是我慢慢的开，他还以为我认输了呢。就在他掉以轻心，不注意的时候，我加紧向前，近了，近了......最终，我以飞快的速度超越了他，到达了终点。他只好认输了，我开心的领了奖品。
我怀着愉悦的心情离开潜艇的地方，路过转盘，就问妈妈：“我可以玩转盘吗”妈妈见我玩的正尽兴，就同意了。我来到转盘前，伸手猛一转，转盘便转呀转，转呀转......转了好几分钟，我一心想拿一等奖，急得直挠头，又过了好一会儿，终于停了，哈哈哈哈，真的是一等奖啊！但是工作人员一直没给拿出奖品，我纳闷的走过去问，他们笑嘻嘻的说;“忘了”。说完便进去拿奖品，但是，拿出来的却是二等奖的，我气的发火了，说：“不要欺骗小孩子啊。”那人说：“对不起，我弄错了。”真气人，游乐场也会出现这种情况。还好奖品是我喜欢的小自行车，看见这丰厚的奖品忘记了不愉快。
太阳落山了，人们依依不舍的离开了，这真是令人难忘的一天啊！
将要去东方明珠的英语作文五年级【五】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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