在浩瀚无边的宇宙里,漂浮着一个巨大的红苹果,它是一个苹果星球。
在苹果星球里,住着一条胖乎乎的肉虫子。
它每天除了吃苹果肉,喝苹果汁,就是躺在苹果核中间的苹果洞里睡大觉。
有一次,它吃得太多了,一路啃啊,啃啊,啃到了苹果皮上。粉红色的苹果皮,被它啃成了半透明的。这时,它看见了从外面透过来的几束光亮。
“这是什么?”肉虫子想,“这墙壁外面一定有一些我没见过的东西。”它感到有些害怕,就赶紧又缩回了苹果核里。
可是,从此以后,肉虫子每天都会梦见外面的那个宇宙,每次的梦都不太一样。有时,是红彤彤,暖洋洋的;有时,又是黑洞洞,冷冰冰的。它醒来之后,就越来越想知道,外面究竟是什么模样呢?
因为想得多了,睡得少了,它就觉得更饿了,它吃得越来越多,越来越快,最后,苹果星球被它啃得就剩下一层薄薄的皮了,而它却长成了一条很大很大的肉虫子。
终于,有一天,这层皮“啪”的一声破了,肉虫子从瘪了下去的苹果星球里钻了出来,它看见了一个无边无际的世界,四面八方都有星辰在闪烁,真是太美了!
可是,肉虫子却觉得有点透不过气来,它的身体里似乎有什么东西正在迅速膨涨,涨得它快要裂开了。“我快死了吗?”肉虫子颤抖着想。
就在这一瞬间,一条闪闪发光的银丝忽然从它的嘴里喷了出来。这条银丝越来越长,长得缠住了肉虫子,把它和苹果星球裹在了一起,变成了一个圆圆的、闪闪发光的银茧。
苹果星球就这样消失了。又过了很久很久的时间,从这个漂浮在宇宙中的茧子里,钻出了一只七彩斑斓的大蝴蝶,它衔着一颗金色的苹果种籽,向着宇宙的最深处飞去——它是要去寻找一片最宽广的土地,好种下这颗种籽,让它长成一棵开满花朵的大树,那时,宇宙间就又会飘起一阵阵苹果的香气……
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
在浩瀚无边的宇宙里,漂浮着一个巨大的红苹果,它是一个苹果星球。
在苹果星球里,住着一条胖乎乎的肉虫子。
它每天除了吃苹果肉,喝苹果汁,就是躺在苹果核中间的苹果洞里睡大觉。
有一次,它吃得太多了,一路啃啊,啃啊,啃到了苹果皮上。粉红色的苹果皮,被它啃成了半透明的。这时,它看见了从外面透过来的几束光亮。
“这是什么?”肉虫子想,“这墙壁外面一定有一些我没见过的东西。”它感到有些害怕,就赶紧又缩回了苹果核里。
可是,从此以后,肉虫子每天都会梦见外面的那个宇宙,每次的`梦都不太一样。有时,是红彤彤,暖洋洋的;有时,又是黑洞洞,冷冰冰的。它醒来之后,就越来越想知道,外面究竟是什么模样呢?
因为想得多了,睡得少了,它就觉得更饿了,它吃得越来越多,越来越快,最后,苹果星球被它啃得就剩下一层薄薄的皮了,而它却长成了一条很大很大的肉虫子。
终于,有一天,这层皮“啪”的一声破了,肉虫子从瘪了下去的苹果星球里钻了出来,它看见了一个无边无际的世界,四面八方都有星辰在闪烁,真是太美了!
可是,肉虫子却觉得有点透不过气来,它的身体里似乎有什么东西正在迅速膨涨,涨得它快要裂开了。“我快死了吗?”肉虫子颤抖着想。
就在这一瞬间,一条闪闪发光的银丝忽然从它的嘴里喷了出来。这条银丝越来越长,长得缠住了肉虫子,把它和苹果星球裹在了一起,变成了一个圆圆的、闪闪发光的银茧。
苹果星球就这样消失了。又过了很久很久的时间,从这个漂浮在宇宙中的茧子里,钻出了一只七彩斑斓的大蝴蝶,它衔着一颗金色的苹果种籽,向着宇宙的最深处飞去——它是要去寻找一片最宽广的土地,好种下这颗种籽,让它长成一棵开满花朵的大树,那时,宇宙间就又会飘起一阵阵苹果的香气……
上个星期六下午,我高兴而又激动的去金笔作文学校了,你知道为什么高兴与激动吗?因为,我们八班的全体同学要到鲁能超市去上课。为什么去呢?当然是为我们提供写作素材了。去那里干什么呢?用有限的钱――十元钱,买无限的东西。
到了学校,同学们都正议论着呢,过了一会,我们就出发了。大家在路上谈笑风声,快步的向鲁能超市走去。一到超市,里面的物品好像发着金光,琳琅满目的物品看得我眼花缭乱,馋得我垂涎欲滴。见到我喜爱的东西,可大部分是贵的,我只能对那些喜爱而较贵的物品说拜拜了。因为要用这十元钱购买无限的东西呢。我来到了零食区,我要买便宜的,这样才能买的种类多。无意间,我看到薯片、薯条,有各种各样的口味,我想把全部的口味都买一包,可为了买的种类多,就只选了一包一元钱牛肉味的薯片,又买了一元三角钱的泡泡糖。接着来到了饮料区,买了一瓶易拉罐的零度可口可乐,我问了一个同学文具的位置,她把我带了过去。我买了支中性笔芯。有个同学给我推荐了一个东西――旺旺碎碎冰,我就买了一个,还买了小布丁。看见了泓一咔吃巧克力和泓一巧克力小熊,就毫不犹豫地各拿了一个,另外还买了一个喜之郎果冻和一包奶茶,外加一瓶娃哈哈纯真年代矿泉水……这时,我算了一下货品的总金额已经超出了十元,没办法,就去掉了巧克力、果冻和大大泡泡糖,拿了些徐福记的散糖果。
换完之后我一数,十一样东西正好十元钱。我也从这次活动中知道了精打细算的好处。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
今天,我和妈妈去购物,我们打算上午买菜,下午买鞋子。
上午,我们一走进菜场,那些蔬菜们仿佛在说:“快来买我啊!快来买我啊!”它们好像在比谁更漂亮。西红柿在阳光的照射下,变成金色的.,成了“西金柿”;花菜像花儿一般美丽,散发出淡淡的清香;红萝卜也不甘示弱,它们像灯笼一般,向人们招手……看着这些漂亮的菜,我们不费吹灰之力就挑选好了许多可爱的菜,回家了。
下午,我们去了商场,买鞋子时,妈妈讨价还价,本来200元一双的鞋子,妈妈最终只用180元买到了手。讨价还价的时候,妈妈说:“我每次都在您这边买的,可以给我便宜点吗?180元?”老板笑嘻嘻地说:“本来要220元的,我已经给你便宜了。”不过,最终还是妈妈赢了。
回到家,我偷偷地问妈妈:“您这样讨价还价会不会觉得不好意思?”妈妈微笑地回答:“这就是生活,这就是买卖呀。”我追问道:“为什么您出的价格,老板会卖给您呢?”妈妈想了一会儿回答道:“因为我已经跑过好几家商店,知道什么价格可以买,而且我的心里有一条底线,守住自己的底线,不随意迁就别人。”“噢,原来是这样啊,要有自己的底线,做人也应该如此。”我心想。
这一次购物我看到了很多琳琅满目的商品,学会了如何讨价还价,坚持自己的底线,今天和妈妈购物,收获多多。
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