一年级小学生书写作文评语【一】
Yesterday I saw the school first class, feeling very deep. This year's theme is beauty is near. Beauty, a very common words, we are literally think beauty is beautiful. So, what is the true meaning of beauty?
With the question I look up, the first lesson is to find beauty. How to find? It makes people lost in thought. When everybody zhang two monks confused, host "shenzhou" 9 astronaut liu Yang, please tell for you. Liu said, the universe is endless, much bigger than she had expected: long, on the other side of the galaxy, the star vega, mercury, Saturn... . All panoramic view. Time is the most interesting of weightlessness, everyone one by one all floating in the air, pens, book ah of what are messy, can be fun. Finally, she concludes the essence to find beauty, love sports, and more to find the beauty around, so beauty will show in front of you.
LiuLiLi mountain elementary school teachers as the second class of the bell took to the podium, she is only 20 years old this year, in this flower age, many girls are enjoying, who will suffer poor mountainous areas! Can't liu, she is out of the mountain, liu with great love for the children's happiness, she hold the children art, gymnastics and other mountainous area children can't learn knowledge. Liu planted beauty, transfer the beauty. Let the beauty of the mountains germination, results. So she right because when people called the most beautiful teacher, this is to create beautiful?
Gymnastics team player Chen yibing showed also in the field. His contribution for our country in the London Olympic Games, the host asked him why he is going to win? His answer: before the race, they are seen as a failure. But because of his companions support each other, encourage each other. Make them very first champions league. The companion's encouragement is beauty.
Yu Dan is the most let me have a feeling of the teacher's words. She hit a harmonious beauty, for example, put eggs, tea, carrot in boiling water, eggs, hardened into the fragrant tea, tea radish was soft. That means what? Hardened eggs tend to be the kind of person who are "really low on agreeableness, and most men are single minded and turnip are too weak, they couldn't get hold of degree dating, so don't be understood, so being bullied. And the tea? It combines with water, this kind of person is good at unity collective, so they are best represents the harmonious beauty.
The school first class with only an hour and a half, but let me benefit a lot.
一年级小学生书写作文评语【二】
认识你，差不多有十分之一世纪了。你把我这个八年前那个幼稚的孩子领进了浩瀚的知识海洋。
曾几何时，你教会我a、o、e,又使我懂得了“子曰、诗云”，我认识了鲁迅、老舍、冰心，了解了李白、杜甫、罗贯中。你像桥，像阶梯、像奠基石，不是吗？你是基础，我只有掌握好你，才能登上知识文化的顶峰。
在你的引导下，我去游玩了《老山界》，参观了《圆明园》，明白忘记历史就等于背叛，又《夜走灵宫峡》，踏过《中国石拱桥》，看到了《万里长城是这样修建的》。等上完了《最后一课》，我又和《小兵张嘎》提着《小橘灯》去看《社戏》，瞧，《美猴王》正和妖精打的难解难分，我们开心地笑了。在你的引见下，我认识了《傻二哥》和《老王》，知道了《大自然的语言》，看到了《落日的幻觉》，吃到了甜美的《荔枝蜜》，找到了一位《最好的顾客》。结束时，我又经历了《第二次》，最后的成绩是《连升三级》，妈妈带我去了《芦花荡》，祝贺我的成功！
啊！语文书，你使我变得充实，使我从“四角的'天空”走了出来，走进了浩瀚的知识海洋和辉煌的科学殿堂。而你，正是通往大洋的彼岸和科学殿堂的一座桥。此时，我就正走在这座桥上，手中拿着一封《就英法联军远征中国给巴特勒上尉的信》，此刻，《济南的冬天》早已过去，《春》天已悄然而至，到处都盛开着《花》。
亲爱的语文书，在这鸟语花香、春光明媚的温馨时刻，祝愿你永远年轻，永远相伴着朝气蓬勃的青少年！
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一年级小学生书写作文评语【三】
前段时间妈妈给我选了几本《意林》，她说这是她学生时代最喜欢看的杂志，和我说了很多很多有关她的读后感，经不住诱惑的我接过妈妈手里的书，津津有味地看了起来，这也是我第一次接触《意林》。
初次接触感觉和我之前看的书完全不一样，它的内容通过用一些故事、寓言和生活经历体现出来，每篇文章都通俗易懂，看着看着我就喜欢上了这本杂志。突然有一天妈妈和我聊起一个话题有关隐私问题，妈妈和我说：“乐乐你这么大了，什么该说什么不该说自己心里要有数，不能想到什么就说什么，祸从口出，后患无穷。”我说：“妈妈你放心，我明白的，我刚在《意林》里看到过相关文章，书里有这么一句话：如果说，明知不问是人格魅力；那么，知而不言，就是人格的顶级修养。
文中还引用了《增广贤文》里的一句话：“守口如瓶，防意如诚，宁可负我，切莫负人。”意思是守住自己的嘴巴像瓶子一样严密，不要多言，言多必失。思想才是不出声的语言。”妈妈看看我伸出手摸摸我的头，欣慰地笑了。
