今天,我帮爸爸做许多家务,心里感到十分愉快。
我选择个爸爸上网的时间打扫,最后给他个惊喜。一开始,我冥思苦想,先干什么好呢?,嗯,先收拾桌椅吧,我便开始忙活起来,由于太久没有打扫,所以屋子里早就乱成一锅粥,遥控器藏在沙发底下,桌子底下躲满纸屑,沙发上站满东西,看来这此要大忙活。
经过翻箱倒柜的整理,桌椅终于整理好,不过地板可是个大问题,地板上有各种各样的尘土、纸屑、垃圾、这可把我累坏,由于我们家是在太大、害得我整理半个多小时,呜呜。
经过和垃圾的一番斗争后,我终于把他们全部消灭,屋子里焕然一新,我实在太开心!
突然,爸爸从房间走出来,惊呆,爸爸问我:“这打扫的太干净,是你***吗?”我激动得说:“是我***!爸爸说:“你真能干”听这句话,我心里感到美滋滋的。
通过这次干家务活,我明白劳动的艰辛,我还明白成果是用汗水换来的,虽然我很累,但我很快乐!
一、何为“折衷观点”和“折衷方案”。
很多雅思写作考题的提问方式都是“Do you agree or disagree?”或者“To what extent do you agree or disagree?”。很多刚刚接触雅思的学生甚至是老师认为对于这种提问方式无非就是yes或no两种答案,所以文章的观点也就只能是同意或者不同意了。其实,对于这类提问,也可以采用“折衷”的观点,即“partly agree,partly disagree”(部分同意,部分不同意)。但是前提是一定要在文章中从支持和反对的两方面都阐述一些理由,而且最好再提出一种“折衷”方案。例如,考题问“现在很多人用动物做试验,你同意吗?”,考生可以在文中分别讨论支持和反对动物试验的理由,最后提出动物试验既有好处也有坏处,这就是一种“折衷”观点。除此之外,作者还提出了是否能用动物来做试验主要是取决于试验是否能给人类生活带来显著的改善(比如帮助人类发明治疗Aids的药物),这就属于“折衷”方案。
二、“折衷观点”和“折衷方案”的几种形式。
那么如何提出“折衷观点”呢?“折衷方案”又有哪几种形式呢?下面笔者将对常见的几种安排折衷观点和折衷方案的'形式,结合相应的考题进行总结。
(1) 兴利除弊
“兴利除弊”应该是一种比较简单的折衷方案,在优缺点类文章中特别常用。即在分析完考题所涉及事物的优缺点之后,在结尾段提出“优缺点都有,我们要兴利除弊”这样的折衷方案。例如以下考题:
The advantages brought by the spread of English as a “global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
在讨论完英语作为全球性语言的利与弊之后,结尾段可以这样提出折衷观点:
To sum up, it is difficult to tell whether or not the advantages outweigh the disadvantages regarding the spread of English as a global language. What we may have to consider is how to accept this trend as positive while at the same time staying away from its drawbacks.
(2) 平衡发展
很多考题需要考生讨论两种观点,通常会有“discuss both views and give your own opinion”这样的提问要求。很多情况下,文中说到的两种观点表面上看来是完全相反,但其实并不矛盾,可以用“平衡发展”的思路来提出观点。例如考题:
Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.
在讨论完发展旅游的必要性和保护文化传统的重要性之后,结尾段可以这样提出折衷方案:
We should find the right balance between tourism development and cultural protection and I believe the government has a very important role to play here. In my own country, for example, many tourist cities have made effective development plans to successfully attract large numbers of visitors while still preserving their distinct cultural traditions.
(3) 取决于……
有时在讨论完A和B两种观点以后,可以提出类似于“同意A还是B要取决于……”这样的折衷观点,前文讲到的动物试验是否可以进行取决于试验的性质就是属于这样的方案。再比如下面这个例子:
Some people think that the animals should be treated as pets; others think that animals are sources of food and clothing. What is your opinion?
在讨论完动物当宠物养的理由和动物当食物吃的理由之后,结尾段可以这样提出观点:
From my point of view, there is no absolute answer as to whether animals should be treated like pets or as sources of food and clothes. It largely depends on what kinds of animals they are. But what remains undoubted is that we should treat animals with a humane attitude and bear in mind that they are important in preserving nature’s ecological equilibrium.
(4) 解决方法
很多双边讨论型文章中所讨论的两种观点其实是可以通过某种方案来“化解矛盾”的,例如这道考题:
In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should wok in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your own opinion.
在讨论完“支边”的利(缩小城乡差距)与弊(年轻人丧失自由)之后,我们可以提出这样一种解决方案:
The best solution, therefore, is not to order, but to encourage. We should instill a sense of responsibility in young people and give more incentives to those who are willing to work in difficult areas, so that we can address the problem of urban-rural disparity while respecting whatever decisions new teachers or doctors have made.
今天中午我放学回家,我看见地面很脏,我觉得我应该帮妈妈拖拖地。因为这是我力所能及的事。
我趁我妈妈不注意跑到则所里涮拖把。妈妈听见问:“你在干什么呀?”我说:“我没在干什么。”妈妈感到很奇怪但是又不敢问。
我涮完拖把后,拿着拖把偷偷的到阳台拖地去。妈妈刚好在阳台晒衣服,她一看才知道,原来刚才听见的奇怪的声音是我涮拖把的声音。妈妈问我累不累?我说:“不累,我还有的是劲。”妈妈露出高兴的神色。妈妈说:“累就去吃饭。”我说:“知道。”
我拖得阳台每个角落都很干净。拖完阳台再拖客厅,我觉得客厅的桌子底下可能很脏,所以就好好的拖拖。妈妈很高兴,说我长大,懂事。
通过拖地这件小事,我的感想是,干活也是一件不容易的事呀,妈妈在家整天干肯定很辛苦。以后我要多帮妈妈干些力所能及的事!
从小到大,妈妈一直做家务太辛苦,我觉得我该长大,可以帮妈妈分担一些辛苦。所以,我特别喜欢做一些力所能及的家务。
我帮妈妈擦过地,煮过粥,还冲过药。给我印象最深的就是煮粥,当时正好是大年初一,妈妈生病,没有力气,我就帮妈妈煮粥。我先把小米放到锅里,再拿两把大米,然后淘迷,我把锅里放一半水,接着我用手去上锅里抓米,这样反复几次米就被淘干净,紧接着我把米放在电饭锅里,等十五分钟饭终于出锅,妈妈说我长大。
妈妈跨我长大,懂事,我心里别提多高兴。妈妈还向我道谢,因为今天是大年初一,我还没有休息,我跟妈妈说不用谢,我喜欢干活。
从做家务中,我到劳动的乐趣,同时,也感受到妈妈的辛苦,我越来越喜欢做家务。
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