去广州英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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去广州英语作文五年级【二】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
去广州英语作文五年级【三】
终于到了超市。这个超市好大呀，虽然不如大商超市那么大，但远比它东西多。这里的东西样样齐全各式各样，看得我眼花缭乱的，来到了食品区，有很多好吃的，有水果、有饼干、有奶、糖……
忽然，我听到了一个声音，是爸爸说的`，说：“宝贝，你挑点儿吧，”天啊，这是我最感动地一次，爸爸竟然主动让我买吃的，我挑了我最爱的"好多鱼”、“3+2饼干”还有“康豆花生”，满满一大包，我好高兴啊！
买完东西，我们才依依不舍地离开了超市。
去广州英语作文五年级【四】
来到了广州是一定要去动物园里瞧一瞧，看一看的，我和妈妈，弟弟走在坐公交车的路上，弟弟突然说：“妈妈广州好像开通了地铁，我们也去坐一回吧。”我赶忙说：“好啊，好啊。”妈妈苦恼地说：“我也不行啊，况且还带着你们两个调皮鬼。”不久，妈妈就在我和弟弟的软磨硬泡下答应了，我和弟弟大叫：“yes,go,go”。
不久我们就到了地铁站，对于不太熟悉坐地铁的我们找了好长时间才终于找到了卖票口，是自动卖票机，我们要在地图上去寻找同和到动物园的路，我先排在别人之后，正好别人点别是这个地图，可是由于我们的速度太慢了，所以又变成了原来的那个地图，妈妈和我在图上乱点，就是点不出到动物园的路。
正在我和妈妈急得焦头烂额不知所措的时候，后面的`年青人好像看出我们的难处，关切地问我们怎么了，我求助地说：“我们点不出去动物园的路了。”年青人微笑着说：“没关系，每个人都有第一次，我来帮你们吧。”
果然，不久地图就出来了，我们按照年青人的说法，马上付了钱，领了票，但是我们不知怎么走，不过年青人马上领了他的票，拉着我们说：“走，我带你们去吧，”这时我觉得年青人很伟大，他帮助了我们，妈妈也有感而发的说了一句：“这个事上还是好人多呀!”我笑着说：“是啊。”那份温暖久久地留下心里。
今年的暑假我学到了帮助这个词，让我知道在我们生活的这个家园中处处有朋友，处处有友情，而我们也应该伸出友情之手帮助别人。
