To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
我马上就要升五年级了,马上就要成为五年级的学生了.我想:有些同学渴望升到高年级,因为他们是为了权势,在高年级,每个人都不能够欺负高年级的同学,而高年级的同学却能为所欲为的去欺负每个人.(当然,有大部分高年级的同学都在认真读书我的看法,则跟那些人的看法完全不同.我认为:一个人不是为了权势而读书,而是为了学习而读书.我想永远沉浸在那弥漫着童年的一年级,二年级.在那里,我找到了我所有的欢声笑语,所有的快乐.我想告诉在上一年级,二年级的小朋友们,你们要珍惜一分一秒的时间.
接着,就讲讲我的计划吧!我准备在老师眼里做个好学生,在父母眼里做个好孩子,在众人眼里做个好公民。我准备在开学期间准备这几样作业:
(1完成每天老师布置的家庭作业.
(2看一些有益的书籍.
(3把字练好.
(4诚实,不说谎话,知错就改,答应别人的事要努力做到.
(5讲究个人卫生,保护环境整洁,爱护公用设施,文物古迹和花草树木,保护有益动物.
(6注意安全,不攀高爬险,不玩火,不做危险的游戏.
这就是我新学期的准备,你有什么意见吗?
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
没有准备就直冲云霄,只会中途坠落,折断飞翔的翅膀;没有准备就想绽放花朵,只会成为严寒中的残枝败叶,一片凄凉;没有准备就想日行千里,只会被烈风撕破航行的帆,阻挡前行的路。
做好准备才能展翅飞翔,翱翔苍穹,飞向理想的天堂;做好准备才能鲜花绽放,百花丛中,鲜艳夺目;做好准备才能扬起理想的帆,带着成功的梦,驶向成功的彼岸。
没有准备就急促上路,只能是徒劳;做好准备,自信前进,才会走向成功之道。成功,属于有准备的头脑。
准备是行动的前提和基础。如果没有准备,那么给你一艘轮船,你敢航行吗?给你一个指南针,你敢探险吗?给你一个舞台,你敢展现自我吗?因此,只有做好充分的准备,才会坚定心中的目标和理想,明确自己前进的方向。
准备是顺利实施的保障。古人云:“工欲善其事,必先利其器。”没有工具,怎么能够有效地完成任务?没带武器就上战场,怎么能够战胜对手?没打牢地基就建筑楼房,怎么能够避免墙倒屋歪?没做好充分准备就上考场,怎么能够取得优异成绩?因此,只有做好充分的准备,才能扫除道路中的障碍,加速前进的步伐。
准备是成功的缔造者。邰丽华做好了充分的准备,踏上舞台,用心编织舞蹈,用手传递温情。准备,打破了无声世界的寂静,创造了一位舞蹈天使。杨利伟做好了充分的准备,踏上神舟飞船,实现了亿万人民的飞天梦,加速了中国航天的进程,引起世界震烁。准备,创造了这位航天英雄。刘翔,做好了充分准备,走向国际比赛,打破世界纪录,充分的准备创造了这位中国飞人。
有了准备,才能坚守前进的方向,坚实路上的脚步,坚定地走向成功之峰。为了明日曙光的照耀,赶紧做好今日的准备。成功,永远属于有准备的头脑。
今天,我已经是一位三年级的小学生了。为了让自己更上一层楼,我要写出新学期的计划。
俗话说无规矩不成方圆,能让自己在纪律与学习等方面能够全面发
展所以我为自己制定的计划如下:
1、上课认真听讲、好好学习、尊敬师长、团结同学、懂得欣赏他人的优点。
2、节约水、电、粮食。
3、不玩危险游戏、不撕纸本、不疯打闹、不小气、不吃零食。
4、认真完成老师布置的作业,积极参加班里的各项集体活动。
希望通过自己的努力会成为一位合格的好学生,我会严格按照计划要求自己。请老师同学们拭目以待吧!
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