初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
大明湖是济南的三大名胜之一。“四面荷花三面柳,一城春色半城湖”就是它的真实写照。
走过写着***诗词的大理石碑,一直向前,一棵棵立在湖边的垂柳,就像一个个苗条的少女在湖边梳理秀发,一边梳一边唱着“沙沙,沙沙”动听的歌曲,给人一种飘逸、舒适的感觉。
走在湖堤上,眺望水势浩淼,“芙蓉镜”似的大明湖,真令人心旷神怡!数十只游船、画舫从水面上悄悄地划过,留下一路燕尾形波纹。湖水清澄,清得都能看到水里嬉戏的鱼儿。
湖中心有一组喷泉——趵突泉。趵突泉南靠千佛山,东临泉城广场,北望大明湖,面积达到158亩。今日之趵突泉正越来越为世人瞩目,拥有“游济南不游趵 突,不成游也”之盛誉。该泉位居济南七十三名泉之首,被誉为“天下第一泉”,也是最早见于古代文献的名泉。趵突泉是泉城济南的象征与标志,与千佛山、大明 湖并称济南三大名胜。喷泉中间的一个泉眼能喷五六十米高的水柱,周围的几十个小水柱相互交叉在一起,犹如巨型水塔的塔座,水珠四散,洒落在游人脸上、手 上,清爽极了;偶尔还会出现七色虹,这更为大明湖增添了一道亮丽的风景。
在喷泉的西南方有一个湖心小岛,那就是“历下亭”,亭子被层层垂柳包围着,掩映在绿荫之中。里面有许多文人墨客的题字,使“历下亭”显得更加古朴、典雅。
喷泉的周围是大片大片的荷花。此时,正是炎炎夏日,湖面上大片大片的荷花开出白色、粉红色的花朵。有的躲在荷叶背后,不肯露头,像个羞涩的小姑娘;有的 从荷叶中探出头来,含笑怒放,散发出阵阵清香;有的还是花蕾,看起来饱得马上就要破裂开似的。一片片合荷叶就像一个个翠玉雕刻的大圆盘,有的亭亭玉立,有 的贴在水面……
傍晚,微风中,夕阳下湖面碧波荡漾,闪烁着亮晶晶的光点,像洒满了大片的碎金、碎银。
大明湖多美啊!此时如能乘一叶扁舟,荡漾在大明湖上,那就如同进入了仙境一般,令人陶醉。
如果说泉城是一块翡翠,那大明湖就是嵌在翡翠上的一颗明珠。如果有机会的话,我一定再次欣赏这大明湖——那用泉水盈育出的名胜。
终于度过了紧张的期中,爸爸妈妈为了让我绷紧的神经放松一下,决定周六周日带我到浙西大明山登高看秋色。
星期六一早,我们就出发了。汽车在高速公路上疾驶,高楼大厦离我们越来越远,小溪田野和山谷映入我的眼帘,沿途的风光真美丽。
经过长途跋涉,我们来到了大明山。大明山有十里峡谷、百米飞瀑,海拔1300多米,素有“小黄山”之称。我沿着弯弯曲曲的台阶向上爬,一路上小鸟在叽叽喳 喳地唱歌,一阵阵秋风吹过,小溪上洒落了片片红叶,就像是为小鱼儿准备的花瓣浴。我气喘吁吁地爬到了山顶,突然在我眼前出现了一片千亩草甸,这片草甸有蓝 色、黄色、绿色,蓝色的是蜿蜒流过的小溪,绿色的是郁郁葱葱的秋草,黄色的是成片成片的芦苇。在蓝天白云的映照下显得格外美丽。望着这片草甸,我不禁想起 了语文书上的一首诗“天似穹庐,笼盖四野。天苍苍,野茫茫,风吹草低见牛羊。”今天身临其境才真正理解了这首诗的意境。
回家的路上,妈妈问我爬山累不累,我说:“累。”妈妈说:“如果你不爬到山顶,怎么能看到最美的风景,就像学习一样,只有付出了辛勤的汗水,才能取得优异的成绩。”
山东济南的大明湖,是我心中向往的地方,今年暑假我终于如愿以偿了,妈妈带我来了,我心中向往的地方大明湖。大明湖很大,可以说一望无际。大明湖的水波光粼粼,偶尔会翻起金色的波浪,大明湖的水很清,从湖面可以看到湖底,足足有三米多深。
大明湖的风景很美,我一进去就被大明湖迷人的风景吸引住了,各式各样的树、蓝蓝的天、洁白的云,映在水面上那景色犹如人间仙境,此时的大明湖是如此的美丽、如此的寂静,这时妈妈说:“不如我们去坐船吧。”我说:“好呀,好呀。”于是我们上了船往湖中央开,慢慢的快到湖中央了,这时,忽然一声鸟叫打破了大明湖的寂静,我一看前后左右全是水鸟和鸭子,几只蜻蜓在天空上飞、柳树在风中跳出了它最美的`舞姿,几只水鸟在树梢上唱起了动人的歌曲,几条小鱼跳出来呼吸新鲜空气,给大明湖增添了许多生机。
不知不觉中船已经靠岸了,一下船我抬头一看,一座高塔矗立在地面上,周围有很多树簇拥着高塔根本找不到入口,远远望去这座高塔建造得非常精美。
天晚了,我们该走了,我又回头看那美丽的大明湖,可它已经消失了。大明湖是我去过最美的地方,美丽的大明湖我会把它保存在我记忆的深处。
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