周五的下午,我和全班同学一同观看了一部电影,名字叫《愤怒的小孩》。大家一听这个名字或许会觉得这是一部非常搞笑的电影。但,你错了,我觉得这是一步贴近生活的影片,他是一个真实生活中的例子……
影片讲述了主人公孙小傲的爸爸妈妈因工作关系去了俄罗斯,从此孙小傲成了留守儿童。有次爷爷生病了,爸爸妈妈没有回来。这一次孙小傲生气了,整理好行李之后以“小孩愤怒了”的话离家出走了。
这部电影主人公孙小傲使我学到了许多,从他身上我看到了机智、勇敢、诚实、有礼貌……他富有正义感,主动帮助被坏人追击的兰兰。面对危险是,他好不畏惧,机智果断。虽然他没有我们个子高,但是却有着比任何人的厉害的智慧,他有一颗勇敢的心,这都是我们应该向他学习的。
这部影片也让我明白了留守儿童的空虚和寂寞,许多父母可能认为孩子们只需要在物质上满足他们就够了。不,你们错了,大错特错,往往孩子内心上的\'需求比物质上的需求更重要。如果你们每天都可以抽出一点时间陪孩子们对他们笑笑,这在他们心里,比任何东西都重要。
对于父母来说,工作压力大,可能不会太顾及孩子们的感受。现在的我们,物质上是那么富有,然而我们却离父母越来越远,成长不是只需要一份物质,往往需要更多的是关爱。就像电影中的兰兰一样,尽管父母不在了,她还是想回到当初那个家,那个让她依恋的家,那个曾经各她温暖的家,那个曾经让她不害怕的家,她爸爸妈妈的照片不仅是一张的照片,而是一份亲情、一份思念……
我想对全天下父母说: “不管你们有多忙,请抽出一点时间来陪陪你们的孩子,他们幼小的心灵或许只是乞求你们一个微笑,一句关爱的的话!”
The kite flew away, my mother ran to chase, but ran a few steps to stop the footsteps. We watched the kite flying higher and higher, farther and farther, gradually became a small black spots. I can not help but think: the strength of the kite is so big!
At this time, my mother gave me to see her hand, the original is to fly a kite when the line was a small wound. I said to my mother, "be careful next time I fly a kite!" Mother said: "the next time we fly a kite to do adequate preparation, could not help but want to prepare a nice kite discs, but also to bring gloves, so that a foolproof." It turned out that there are so many exquisite kite ah. I'm looking forward to the next time I fly a kite!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
这天上午,我们学校组织同学去观看《愤怒的小孩》这部电影。影片讲述了:孙小傲因为父母在国外打工,他跟爷爷一块生活,他的父母答应暑假的时候一块回来给小傲过生日,但是因为工作忙,没回来,小傲一气之下就离家出走,一个人在外面过着流浪的生活。一天,他遇到了一个小女孩。小女孩的命运也很悲惨,她是刚刚从一个拐卖小孩的坏人手中逃出来,而那个坏人一向在追踪这个小女孩。他们两个相依为命,互相帮忙,一次次的从坏人的手里逃脱出来,这两个小孩机智又聪明,不但从容逃脱,而且还作弄对手,让人捧腹大笑。他们勇敢又善良,最后被一个面点老板收养。
每每看到那些留守儿童期盼父母的眼神,内心中都为之震颤。同样的童年,却有着截然相反的生活。城里的孩子能有父母陪在一齐欢乐地过新年,而农村的孩子却不能跟父母团聚显得是那么的令人心疼。同一片天空下不同孩子的命运,这个命运从一出生就开始注定。出身不同人生际遇就大不相同,本片便是物质极其丰富但却缺乏亲子之情的逆反孩子选取逃跑的故事,(影片的主创却让孩子在广阔的世界里,找到了同伴,寻回了父母,也理解了诚信考验,更不要说挫败坏人那种成就感和满足感,绝对对得起孩子们的期盼。
对于新时代的父母来说,工作的压力越来越大,而儿童虽然在物质上是丰裕的,然而却离父母越来越远。成长需要的并不只是物质,在很大程度上关爱在一齐比物质更重要。因此,哪怕父母已不在,可兰兰却任仍然执着地想要回到当初的家。那张埋在匣子里的照片,这不仅仅是一种思念,而是一份很久以前就被抛弃的亲情。有些成年人以为孩子只需要必须的物质条件,便会开心,这样的想法往往错的离谱。
只但是我们作为孩子的也要体谅父母的用心良苦。父母不但给予了我们生命,使我们快乐的成长,工作再累还要照顾号我们。父母的工作也是为了自己孩子更好的生活才不知疲惫的干。如果没有他们在外一天又一天、一年又一年的辛苦工作,我们的生活会如此幸福吗?父母们总是期望望子成龙,望女成凤。作为父母的都时时刻刻爱护着自己的孩子,怎样可能不关心我们呢?
看完《愤怒的小孩》这部电影,我想对天下所有父母说:“爸爸妈妈,期望你们能抽出时间多陪陪我们,我明白你们工作很忙,但也必须不要忽略我们。”我还要对孙小傲说:“即使爸爸妈妈不能陪你,你也要体谅父母,不能私自离家出走哦!”
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
© 2022 xuexicn.net,All Rights Reserved.