初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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今天,我们小组又要值日了,早上我们早早的来到学校,有的同学擦桌子,有的同学拖地,有的同学擦玻璃,还有的同学打水。大家***非常好,教室被我们打扫的非常干净,胡老师表扬了我们,我们非常高兴。
今天我就领大家参观一下我的小卧室。我的小卧室可雅致了。大家快点跟我来吧!
穿过我家的客厅,就来到了我的小卧室。
小卧室东边的墙上挂着一张世界地图和中国地图,地图下方是一张小床,别致的小床上铺着漂亮的绿色床单。床单上的图案是我和妈妈专门挑选的,样子很逗,也很有趣,你看:唐老鸭和米老鼠在打篮球,唐老鸭戴着一顶蓝色帽子,它嘴巴张得大大的,飞快地跑向米老鼠,阻止米老鼠向篮球筐里投球。米老鼠的圆耳朵又黑又亮,眼睛又大又圆,穿着很“酷”的运动服,背上写着醒目的“8”号,它一跃而起,正奋力把球投向篮里。床单平平整整的,和方方块块的被子很协调,看起来,整洁明快。
卧室的南侧是阳台,拉开窗帘,透过玻璃,能清楚地看到外面美丽的街道,和热闹非凡的市场。晚上拉上窗帘,窗帘上的每一个图案都是有趣的童话:有精彩的小猫钓鱼,有可爱的蓝精灵住在膨大的蘑菇房里,正忙着收拾房子呢!,还有聪明的小老鼠正在大象鼻子底下,美美享受“淋浴”。假如要是你也睡在这里的话,也保你天天做美梦!
卧室的西边放着我的书柜和写字台,写字台上东西摆放有序整齐,能说,一尘不染。左侧放着一盏兰色的护眼灯,它的底座上坐着一只活泼的小狗,顶着大大的礼帽,穿着黄色的小上衣,兰色背带裤,手里抱着桃子钟表,样子可笑吧!台灯旁放着墨水和一个小小地球仪。写字台的旁边那就是书柜了,书柜分上中下三层,上层主要是放少儿图书类,中层放学习和参考书籍,下层是报刊和常用资料。不管什么类的图书,有时间我总是拿出来看上几页,挺方便的。
卧室的正中墙的中央,贴着一幅动画形象图:米奇,手里拿着一个红红的“副”字,好象在祝福我愉快成长呢,下方摆着一台电脑,我每天都要抽出时间来玩会儿电脑,有时候打会儿字,有时画会儿画,还有时看看动画片,很自在。
我的小卧室虽然不大,却很温馨舒适,我喜欢它,爱护它。
今天下午,老师说要大扫除。于是,同学们纷纷拿着擦布、扫把打扫卫生了。他们擦桌子、擦黑板,***可努力了。
突然,小红不小心把桌子上的墨水瓶打翻了,她着急地说:怎么办呢?小兰急忙说:没关系,咱们一起把它擦干净。小明看了连话也不说,立马跑出去了。
过了一会儿,老师和小明回来了,老师夸小红和小兰是好样的,还说:小明你不跑出去,要和她们一起,齐心协力。小明听了,低下头,觉得很惭愧。
同学们,我们也要向小红和小兰一样,互相帮助,不能学习小明的自私。
每个人都有一个温暖的家,在家中有我们最喜欢的角落,我最喜欢的角落是我的房间,我的房间跟别人的不太一样,我的房间才刚刚兴建好,小小的房间,我布置得很有个人独特的品味,我在墙壁上贴许多图案和诗句,我喜欢古典又夹杂着现代的时尚。
房间里面有爸爸买给我学习更便利的物品,像是笔记型电脑、书籍、字典、百科全书等工具书,我喜欢在房间学习我有兴趣的科目,查询我有兴趣的资料,所以房间是我成长的充电站,我能一天天的成长,我在房间里发挥想象力统整我所学的知识,在小小的房间,把我所查到的资料分享给同学和师长,把我所会的去帮助更多需要的同学,所以这间房间是我的好帮手,可说是“麻雀虽小,五脏俱全”!房间给我很多的帮助呢!
我常常在这房间写功课,安静的房间,我会把它装饰得更有生命,所以我会放歌来哼个几声,我有时候需要音乐来放松,我也需要音乐来帮助我集中精神写功课更加专注,学习效果也更加事半功倍。我现在就睡在我的房间,我小时候总是怕黑,黑夜的来临让我没有安全感,需要家人陪伴我慢慢入睡,但是我已经长大了,我能够学习自己独立,偶尔也有家人会来陪我看看书、画画和玩电脑游戏,房间是我学习和休闲的好地方,也让家人有情感交流的地方!
我要好好珍惜我的房间,因为那里是我最喜欢的角落,是我可以真正放松的地方,所以我总不能让房间凌乱不堪,没有我休息的位置吧!我的书桌要每天用抹布擦,还有我的床也要每天整理一次,我要做好这个房间的好主人,这样房间也会开心的让我使用!
在家中我最喜欢的角落是我的房间,我的房间带给我很多隐私的空间,爸妈的房间也是他们个人的空间,我的房间才刚刚兴建好,小小的房间给我很多的帮助呢!我现在更要学习独立把这房间维护得一尘不染,房间也会开心的欢迎我这位主人!我更希望在这房间能学到更多知识,去发现更多人的需要,长大后有能力去帮助更多的人!
今天晚上,妈妈围着围裙在房间里抹小红的桌子。小红看见妈妈干得满头大汗,小红马上跑过去帮妈妈打扫卫生。小红先把垃圾扫在一起,再把垃圾扫进畚斗。妈妈看见小红那么能干,说:“你扫得真干净!”她伸出左手翘起大拇指,表扬了她。小红心想,帮妈妈做事很快乐,以后要学会做事,打扫房间……。小红看看挂钟,说:“已经七点了,我该睡觉了。”
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