怎么样修改推荐一个好地方的作文【一】
One of the most crucial reasons for my view is that we could (canhave more opportunities to realize our dreams in the process of moving between places. As a young man(young men, we are all eager for success. However the road to (approach towardsuccess is so hard that we have to make great efforts. We must possess many aspects, including(去掉 outstanding intelligence, excellent education, rich experience and certainly good luck, most of which are acquired only by insistently pursuing, besides (andstudiously striving in different cities(if necessary. I can take one of my friends for instance. In order (toreceive the best education, after graduating from the senior school, he left his hometown to a remote city, BEIJING. But four years later, to looking for a better job, he left BEIJING and come to SHENZHEN, a beautiful city in his dream. Now his new goal is to enter American B-School to acquire (ofmore advanced knowledge in financing. We can see, in just about ten years, he has moves three times, and what is more(more importantly, this moving sill continue. Actually, in contemporary society more and more people are as this(act like him .
Another essential fact why (reason whyI hold my view is that we can enjoy a more rich and colorful (richer and more colorfullife, as we change places we live in. For my part, enjoying life is as important as, if not more important than, devoting work(hard working. It is a pleasing thing in the holiday to visit beautiful sceneries in different places. My friends mentioned in the last paragraph(before, has visited the snow scene in the north, and the widely (widesea in the south.
Admittedly, we cannot neglect the virtues (ofspending the entire life in one place. People can attained (attainthe feeling of family to their community, and the relationships between people are closer. Nevertheless moving between cities perhaps is more attractive to young persons than staying in one place thorough their lives.
From all the reasons mentioned above, it is not difficult to get the conclusion that if it is possible, I would move a number of times throughout my lives to look for the best job, house or climate I am eager for.
怎么样修改推荐一个好地方的作文【二】
今年八月的一个星期天，我和妈妈，姨娘、辰辰、还有姨夫一起去了石浦老街。
半个小时后，石浦渔村到了。我和弟弟抢先一步，蹦在前面。渔村的小港都是用鹅卵石铺的，面路像宽宽的梯子，在慢慢变高。两旁的房屋都是用木头建成的，沿街的屋子里开满了小卖部。小卖部里有用海螺做的喇叭、还有用海螺做成的项链或耳环等很多东西。最好看的要数那个“鬼鱼”，胖嘟嘟的身子像个圆溜溜的皮球，皮球上长满了尖锐的刺。我一看就好奇。可惜那只是只假鱼。
后来我和弟弟有点渴了，我们就在路边找家小店买了两瓶饮料。小店里有鱿鱼干、小黄鱼干、还有很多海鲜产品。我们又买了鱿鱼干和小黄鱼干，大家都吃得津津有味。
到了下午4点左右，我们就回到家里了。今天真开心，那儿真是一个好地方！期待大家去玩！
怎么样修改推荐一个好地方的作文【三】
大家好，我叫赵啓焱，今天先来给大家分享一个好玩有趣的地方，也是我和爸爸妈妈经常晨起锻练的地方，它就是长白岛森林公园。
假期的时候我们一家经常早起到长白岛公园去锻炼，一般我们会先沿着长白岛公园骑行一段时间，一路上风景非常美丽，我们会经过一片绿色的草地、拱门似的大桥和美丽的天鹅湖。长白岛的环境很好，一路上我们听见小鸟在枝头歌唱、到处充满鸟语花香。
骑着骑着，我们就来到小动物园，这也是今天我主要给大家介绍的。小动物园里有爱吐口水的羊驼、孤独的猴子、美丽的天鹤、惊艳的孔雀和强壮作文的牦牛……不过我最喜欢的还是礼貌的小鹿。为什么我喜欢它呢？因为它不但美丽，还很有礼貌，它的眼睛大大的，上面还有许多长长的睫毛，头上长着两个角，像两根树叉一样，它的皮毛是棕色的，还带有白色圆点，看上去特别美丽。
那为什么说它很有礼貌呢？因为我喂它胡萝卜的时候它都慢慢地嚼，吃完了以后就会向我弯弯脖子点点头，好像在说：“谢谢你，谢谢你”。
怎么样有趣吧？
我相信一定还有许多好玩美丽的景色等着我们大家一起去发现呢！
也期待小朋友们跟我一起来欣赏美景，逗逗有趣的小动物。
怎么样修改推荐一个好地方的作文【四】
在五月的一天，妈妈和我骑着自行车来到了沈水湾公园。下了三好桥，刚停完车，远远的就闻到了淡淡的花香，再走近一些，一股浓浓的花香更是扑面而来。
绕过一片小树林，突然一片郁金香的海洋展现在在我眼前，有红色、白的、紫色、还有黄色的……五颜六色好看极了！
每一种颜色都分别被种在不同的花坛里，显得整齐又纯洁；而各种颜色的花又巧妙地搭配在一起，像色彩斑斓的图画。它们各有各的姿势，各有各的芬芳，但我还是最喜欢像荷花那样白的一片郁金香！
那一朵朵傲立枝头的郁金香洁白如雪，它的形状像一只只洁白无瑕的风铃在风中摇曳，侧耳倾听，好像风中正夹着悦耳的铃声。娇嫩的花朵有的含苞欲放，有的已经全部绽开，真是迷人极了！
再看它们站成一边，一列，一片，每一株之间的距离都是那么整齐，远看就像仪仗队的士兵在列队欢迎一样！每一株花朵的大小都是那么均匀，看起来是那么的精致！
这里的郁金香展是沈阳一道独特的风景，郁金香花只在每年的五一前后开放，花期只有15天左右。
所以我推荐大家每年的劳动节前后，来沈水湾公园观赏这一片郁金香花海。相信大家一定会被它的美丽和壮观所打动而流连忘返的！
