那是开学以来第一次写作文,作文题目多样,可我选择了《我的理想》这一篇作文。我开始自己写真实的作文,但这么一想:如果你这篇作文写得好,说不定给老师留下好的印象。我的心里这么一想,就有了主意抄作文书上的。
晚上,我将作文书上的《我的理想》这篇范文抄了下来,不过中间有些改动,作文抄好后,我的心里有些害怕,老师在课堂说过,我们可以看作文怎样写,但不可以抄。想到这,我的脸上感觉到有许多小蚂蚁在爬来爬去。可我自己一直在安慰自己:抄,又没有什么关系,又没人知道。因为我将中间人名改了,不会有人知道。即使老师知道我就不能撒谎吗?说我爸爸指导我写的不可以吗?我的这么一想,心才慢慢平静下来。
第二天,鲍老师走到讲台说:“我们哪位同学上来把他的作文念给大家听” 。开始谈颜妍上去读了,同学们用热烈的掌声鼓励了他。我心里想:如果我把这篇作文念给同学们听,他们一定会用更热烈的掌声鼓励我。这股擎天撼地的力量使我举起了手。我在读的过程中,心里直发抖。可读完了同学们真的用热烈的掌声鼓励了我,我高兴得像一只小鸟一样一下飞到位子上。“同学们,她的作文写得好不好。”老师带着赞许的目光问。我的心里更加高兴,像吃了蜜一样甘甜,我高兴太过份了。“她的作文是作文书上的范文,我曾经看过这篇作文”。同学们七嘴八舌地说。我的心里像打了十五桶的水——七上八下。我紧张地回了一句话:“那是我的爸爸指导我写的。”我不知道老师信不信我的话,不敢抬头看老师。可我的眼前立即出现了老师严肃的目光,好像在说:“你怎么可以抄作文,不是不准抄作文的吗?你一点儿也不诚实,我讨厌你这样的学生。”也好象许多同学不停地说:“你这个骗子,竟然用范文当作你的作文来唬弄我们,我以后再也不理你了。”我的心咚咚咚地跳个不停,大概连我同桌都听见我的心跳声。
第三天,老师讲了关于昨天演读作文的事,老师虽然没点我的`名子,可老师说的一些话直往我的心里钻。这时候呀,我恨不得找个地缝钻进去。我一直责备自己:“你怎么这么笨呀,连自己写的作文和抄的作文难道老师都分辨不出来吗?那么老师还当什么老师,不如回家做农民罢了。”
这件事发生后,每当碰到老师看我的目光,我就十分害怕。还有,每当下课,同学们就问:“丁新欣,上月球做宇宙飞船怎样感觉,跟我们说一说呀,说不定我以后还有可能坐宇宙飞船上月球呢,看一看是不是你说的那样?”他们都在嘲笑我。我想:不诚实的孩子就是这样下场吧!我以后一定要做一个诚实的孩子。希望同学、老师原谅我的过错,我多么想还能和以前一样做他们的好朋友啊?
我一想起第一次走玻璃桥,心儿就怦怦跳,真是令人害怕。
星期六,风和日丽,我们一家人去体验一下走玻璃桥。我们来到山前,只见玻璃桥横跨在两座山峰之间,晶莹剔透,在阳光下闪闪发光。
我们登上台阶,穿好专用鞋套,踏上玻璃桥,我低头一看,桥面离河面有几百米高,下面有波涛汹涌的河流,我想:“万一掉下去,马上就会被波浪卷走,带去见海龙王,那就死定了。我双手紧紧抓住栏杆,小心翼翼地挪移着脚步,心里像揣着一只兔子在蹦蹦跳跳。爸爸妈妈已经走在前面了,爸爸大声喊:“孩子,别害怕,你看看大家都在桥面走,难道有人掉下去吗?是啊!大家确实平安无事,是我自己在吓自己。于是,我壮着胆子走了几步,忽然玻璃碎裂了,我吓了一大跳,我的心像提到了嗓眼儿,怦怦直跳,我连忙抓住玻璃栏杆,生怕掉下万丈深渊,我蹲着不敢走。这时,工作人员叔叔和蔼地说:“小朋友,别怕,那些玻璃裂痕其实是玻璃中的小灯泡感应到脚步声而发光,让人产生错觉,误会是玻璃破碎。我听了,心渐渐平静下来了,原来是这样,让我虚惊一场。我继续过桥,玻璃桥跨过河流,再跨过一片树林。我往下一看,树叶在脚底下左右摇摆,我感觉玻璃桥也在摆动,此时我心惊肉跳,没走几步,急忙抓着玻璃栏杆,全身瑟瑟发抖,双腿发软,脊背冒汗。我定了定精神,咦!桥是不会晃动,是下面的树叶在摆动,让人产生幻觉,没什么可怕的。我要勇敢走过桥,不要让家里人笑我胆小鬼,别人行,我就一定能行的'!这时,只剩下我一个人还没到终点,家里人都到终点了。我闭着眼睛,一步一步向前移,我的耳边响起了,爸爸的声音:“孩子你要坚持住,离终点只剩一步之遥了。我一下有了信心,快步地走,当我睁开眼睛时,发现到终点了。我一蹦三尺高,大声地喊:“耶!我成功了。
这次走玻璃桥的经历让我终生难忘,它让我明白了人要有克服困难,战胜自我的勇气!
So people call it Mountain City。 In Chong Qing,I went to the Red Stone Center, to see the places which the prisoners lived in the past。 It is a terrible and awful trip。 There are a lot of dogs, and soldiers with guns near the prisons。 And most of the prisons are good, they didn't want to tell the bad people where the other people were。 They lived in very small houses。 No good food to eat, no good water to drink。They had only twenty minutes to stay out side per day but they still said nothing。
I think they are the heros in that century。 I will follow their spirit。
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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今年,准备钢琴十级考试的时间只有一个月。开始时,我有些着急,又有些不自信,担心在这么短的'时间里,我不能把十级的曲目弹奏地很出色。于是,我制定了详细的练琴计划,每天都要认真练习六个小时以上。在练习中,从认音到体会曲目的意境,我都认认真真,不敢有一点儿马虎。通过半个月的努力,在第一次模拟考试中,我演奏得不错,受到了老师表扬。我有些沾沾自喜,回家之后,练琴就有些放松了,每天只练习几遍,自我感觉还不错。可是,到了第二次模拟考试时,我弹奏的水平明显退步了。我有些懊悔,回家之后,重新安排了作息时间,并暗暗下定决心,一天必须坚持弹够六个小时的钢琴。乐曲《船歌》有四个声部,有时为了弹准确,一小句我都要练习一个半小时。几天后,我的手腕都练疼了。可是,我并没有因此偷懒,而是更努力更认真地练习。在那几天里,我天天只想着弹琴。有时候,晚上睡觉都梦见自己在弹琴。
我坚持着、努力着,直到考级前一天晚上我还练习到十点半。终于,我的付出没有白费。在考场上,我发挥得特别出色,一个个音符被我演奏得流畅、优美,我自己也完全沉浸在了弹奏的乐曲之中。考官露出了满意的笑容。走出考场,我的指导老师也对我竖起了大拇指。这时,我才真正放松了下来,觉得自己的付出是值得的,我也开心地笑了。
这段难忘的经历使我明白了一个道理:无论做什么事情,必须全神贯注、坚持不懈,只有付出了才会有收获。
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