五年级的写山的英语的作文【一】
老家到处是连绵起伏的山，山上有一年四季绿油油的松树，但更多的是苍翠挺拔的竹子。茂密的.竹叶连成了一波波绿色的海涛，在清风中吟唱着山歌。春天苍翠挺拔的竹子上碧绿碧绿的竹叶，像一片片晶莹剔透的绿色的翡翠片。竹子的脚边，一个个小笋偷偷地探出小脑袋，好奇地看着养育自己的高山和竹林。满山遍野的竹子郁郁葱葱！近看有的修直挺拔，直冲云霄，有的弯着腰，好像在和小小笋打招呼，还有的刚出世不久，也亭亭玉立，别有一番神气。令人陶醉的绿色竹海把大山装扮得更加富有生机。
老家的山脚还有唱着歌儿的泉水、小溪、小河，里面有被水冲洗得干干净净的鹅卵石，小鱼、小虾在快活地玩耍。每次上山，我都要带上小工具去小溪、小河里捉小鱼、小虾玩儿。爸爸告诉我，老家山上本来有做得整整齐齐的石头台阶，可是，时间久了，人来去的也少了，山上的泥石滚下来，把石头台阶给撞坏了。
可能在其他人的心中，我老家的山不是最美的，可是在我心中，老家的山是世界上最美的山！
五年级的写山的英语的作文【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级的写山的英语的作文【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级的写山的英语的作文【四】
来到山脚，你就会看到一条无名小溪。河水很清澈，连·河底的小螃蟹小虾和小鱼等都看的一清二楚。夏天我们还经常在河里玩耍。
从山脚向上爬，就来到山腰。 这里有绿油油的梯田和花，时时会飘出淡淡的花香。梯田旁就有一片向小竹林，竹林住着外婆和外公，竹子一棵比一棵坚固，一棵比一棵笔直，好像一个个小士兵在保护外公外婆。
来到山顶，就是一座小树林，树林里面的'鸟的歌声非常还好听，你听了肯定会陶醉在里面。树林前面有一个小平台，树天然的石头形成的，早上向前远眺的时侯，你 会隐隐约约的看见几座 古老的房子和白塔。中午向前远眺的时候，你会看见许多人在赶集市，非常热闹晚上向前远眺，你会看见五颜六色的灯在闪烁，还会看见明亮和北极星。
家乡的山是不是很美呢？
五年级的写山的英语的作文【五】
天气变冷的时候，就是家乡爬山的火热时期。
小时候，我无论对什么山都不感兴趣，爸爸总是像一个导游，说“这个是鲸鱼喷水，那个是夫妻峰，……”可我都是一点也在意。
后来，我长大了，爸爸趁天气转凉了，就带我去爬山。
我第一次爬山时，我十分害怕，生怕自己会摔下去，我走累了就会蹲在石阶上休息一下，喝点水来补充水分。非常热的时候，就把一件衣服脱下来系在腰间。当然在休息的同时，我们会欣赏山上的美景。
后来，我爬山爬多了，我一上山就横冲直撞，好似一头眼红的公牛。
有一次，我们要到一座山上摘野果子，爬到半山腰也没有看见一棵果树，我看见如此局面，我就直冲到一座电线塔那，果然让我看到了一棵果树，我马上下去通报情况，爸爸妈妈马上冲上去，把那棵果树的果子一扫而空，然后捧着一袋子收获下山请功去了。
后来，我们全家去了广西的桂林旅游，我拍了一些照片给爸爸看，说我拍得很美，可爸爸却又说:“这里的山再美也美不过咱家的山。”
听到这句话，我便想起在家乡爬山时的快乐。
