初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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今年国庆,我跟妈妈一起去九寨沟旅游。以前曾听妈妈说九寨沟的景色很美,而且春、夏、秋、冬四季各有特色,我好期待。
到了九寨沟景区,就好象进入了童话世界。首先看到的是湛蓝的湖水,当地人把它称为“海子”,第一个印象最深的是湛蓝的湖水里居然生长着茂盛的树木,其中一个海子因为生长着很多灌木和植物,一丛丛的.,就像盆景一样,淙淙的水流悠闲地从它们身边流过,被形象的叫做“盆景滩”,一直很惊奇,长期生长在水里的树木不会淹死吗?可是它们已经在那里生长了好长时间,有的甚至几百年。
九寨沟的芦苇海是也给我留下了深刻的印象,初秋的芦苇满眼都是金黄的,配上湛蓝清澈的湖水,黄绿相间、非常漂亮。
走到九寨的长海,湖水很深,但清澈见底,水面很平静,像一面大镜子,长海被夹在山的中间,山水相映,还能看到远处的雪山。
九寨沟最具特色的应该是熊猫海、孔雀海、五彩池和珍珠滩,每一个海子,因为水的深浅不一,所含的矿物质不同,所以呈现出不同的颜色,有深蓝、浅蓝、淡绿、翠绿、黄绿,像美丽的孔雀穿上华丽的衣服。妈妈说今年的雨水比较大,不然呈现的颜色更漂亮,水少的时候还能看到熊猫海漂亮的岩石。珍珠滩是电视剧里西游记中孙悟空和妖怪打斗的地方,每一次看到这一集的时候我都好想看个究竟,今年比较幸运的是,今年瀑布很大、水流湍急,尽管人们从那儿经过时都会有很多水花浅到身上,可是大家还是很乐意跟它亲近再亲近。
九寨沟的风景很多,真是不胜枚举。我好想重游九寨沟,冬季游九寨,可以感受到高原冰天雪地的感觉;春游九寨可以感受到冬去春来,万物复苏、百花胜开的景象;深秋的九寨,金黄、火红的红叶、湛蓝的湖水、远处的雪山,让整个九寨色彩斑斓、美不胜收。有机会我一定要多去几次九寨沟,饱览四季不同的景色。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
每一天都在家里好无聊的,我真的想出去旅游,爸爸答应了,我高兴的乱蹦乱跳,我换好了衣服带好了水壶,我们就出发了。
在路上我无数次的问爸爸怎么还没有到啊?车开了好久,终于到了第一站--南京,后来又去了苏州,我遗憾没有去电玩世界,不过没有关系,我去了游乐园就足够了,我在那里玩得太高兴了,我玩的东西数也数不清,看我玩得东西总会比你们多些吧!我也去了杭州和上海,都被那里的风景迷住了,然后我们就回家了,回家之后,我告诉我没有去的家人,我去了哪里,玩了什么,学了什么!我还写了一首诗,你看写得怎么样?
《游玩》
赴远去游玩,
乐事不胜举。
玩得正开心,
回家舍不得。
4五一旅游
“五一”节到了,姐姐一家带我去平谷区玩。那天是5月3日,天气晴朗,阳光灿烂,太阳暖暖的,小风飕飕的。我们原计划去京东大峡谷玩儿,可是那里的车排成长队,游人如织,根本进不去,所以我们只好改道去石林峡。
石林峡这个地方知道的人不多,但是游玩的人却并不少。这里有一条类似《西游记》里面描述的狭长的山谷,谷里有许多古老的、造型奇特的大石头。大大小小的瀑布分布在山谷的各个角落,最有名的是“九天飞瀑“,好象真的从天上飞下来一样。石林山的峰顶上有两座小庙,因为太高,很少有人能爬上去。
据说,在英国的荒原上有一个很著名的名胜古迹,也叫“石林“,那里竖立的巨石都是有宗教意义的,也是人工建造的。而北京石林峡的石头大部分却是纯天然形成的。我远远看见峡谷悬崖最高处有一座天然形成的小石桥,长度大概只有几米,因为很陡,所以没人敢冒险上去。
我们顺着峡谷走,来到一个岩洞口,洞里有一个很小的瀑布,瀑布里面有几块大石头,石头上蹲着三只青蛙,我称它为“石头青蛙洞“。离青蛙洞不远,有一座铁索木桩桥,铁索是扶手,木桩是桥面。每个木桩中间大约隔了30厘米,下面全是水。我走过去时一点都不害怕,因为水深只到我的腰。
快乐的一天很快就过去了,可是我还没有玩够,我在想:“明天要去哪里玩儿呢……”
走进房间以后,我正“沙沙”地写着作业,胳膊不小心碰着了橡皮,橡皮随即掉在了地下。当时,作业就快要写完了,也没顾得看,“哎呀,写错了。”我自言自语道,于是我开始找我的橡皮。
橡皮是绿色的,我的眼睛在急速的寻找着房间一切绿色的东西,我看见了灯台旁边那个绿色的`小东西,手伸去一拿,发现自己找错了,那是一个青蛙型的小钱包。心情失落极了,便去寻问妈妈:“妈妈,你有没有看见我的橡皮呀?”“你看,我叫你天天收拾东西,你就是不听,你现在东西丢了,我怎么可能看见……”哎,早知道就不问***妈了,又要听一阵唠叨,于是,我不耐烦地走进了房间,关上了门。我找来找去,找到了一堆带有绿色的物品,但都不是小橡皮。我头晃来晃去,一不留神,发现了掉在地上的小橡皮,把那个错字一改,作业就写完了。
以后,一定要注意整理东西呀!
有一次,在一个明媚的早晨,我和书法室的朋友们一起早早的去到了书法室,正当我们拿起毛笔准备写字的时候。邓老师,也就是叫我们学习书法的老师踏着沉重的脚步走了进来,我们都惊讶地望着老师,毕竟,老师在我们的'眼里都是幽默的,很少会露出这样沉重的表情。
“老师,出了什么事情?”书法室的一个比较胆大的女生小心翼翼的对着老师说道。
“同学们,今天我要宣布一件事。”老师听了那位同学的话,有些犹豫地说道。
我和在座的书法室的同学相视一望,那轻松的微笑也随着老师的沉重而消失了,留下的都是我们大家那严肃的表情。
“这一次的书法比赛,唯一获得书法现场比赛的同学只有一位,并且,县里的书法比赛也就只有一位同学获得了奖——二等奖。唯一的一个啊!你们知道这位同学是谁吗?”老师严肃而沉重的望着我们。
我们一并摇了摇头,不知是何时,我的头有些沉重了,眼睛也一酸。因为我知道,唯一得奖的不是我,而是——“张振浩同学,你看,这一次的比赛一位都是张振浩同学啊!老师告诉你们,以你们现在的水平,完完全全是可以获得奖的。现在老师告诉了你们,你们以后会不会选择放弃学习书法。”
“不会”我和书法室的同学一并齐声吼道。是的,不会,因为这一次没有获得奖,是因为我们大家都没有张振浩同学那么努力,所以我们没有得奖,到了下一次的比赛,我一定会得奖。加油!我在心里安慰着自己。
回到家,我把这一件事告诉了母亲,妈妈语重心长的对我说道:“虽然你这一次没有得奖,但是这并不表示你下一次不能得奖啊,加油,相信自己下一次能够得奖,给自己选择一个目标。你要记住,人生所发生的挫折,就要努力去打败它,不要让它再继续将挫折延续下去。
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