去海洋馆的英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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去海洋馆的英语作文五年级【二】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
去海洋馆的英语作文五年级【三】
在香港的每一天，都是那么令人惊喜，迪士尼、杜莎夫人蜡像馆、香港大学囊括了很多快乐的元素，其中我最喜欢的就是香港海洋公园了。
天空蓝蓝的，万里无云，听说这里的天气说变就变，一片云飘过来就是一场雨，在这个天气非常晴朗的日子里，鲁老师带着我们来到了海洋公园，看来连上天都为我们提供了一个上好的条件。从旅馆里出来，一路上，小记者们叽叽喳喳说个不停，有的还没从昨天的兴奋中缓过劲来，有的在期待着今天会有什么新收获，我也和朋友们一起开心的大声说笑着。
终于到了海洋公园，哇！真是大开眼界，那里有过山车、摩天轮、鲨鱼表演……种类繁多，数不胜数。
我朝着摩天轮的方向窜去，摩天轮非常高，高的不得了，终于排队坐上了，我和高嘉梓同坐一个舱，摩天轮越升越高，环顾四周顾，三面环海，看不到边际，只隐隐约约看到远处海岛上几座房子，我把目光收回，又看到过山车，刚刚看到近处，便吓得我赶紧闭上了眼睛，可是很想看风景，就又偷偷的睁开眼睛，下了摩天轮，我说：“摩天轮治好了我的恐高症。”同学哈哈大笑。
我抓紧时间来到我在摩天轮上确定好的下一目标--过山车，我准备上过山车的时候看见一个要下车的人在车上非常淡定，看来没有传说中的那么玄乎呢，就信心满满的上去了。过山车一启动，我就知道他为什么淡定了那是吓得，风驰电掣般的速度向飞起来一样，忽上忽下，忽左忽右，忽高忽低，让我们的神经紧张到了极限，同学们都大声喊叫着来缓解刺激与惊吓，即使这样，一趟过山车下来，仍然有许多同学大呼：好过瘾啊！再来一次。
很快，一天的行程就要结束了，我恋恋不舍的离开海洋公园，我喜欢海洋公园，喜欢香港，如果有机会，我还想再来。
去海洋馆的英语作文五年级【四】
现在已经是2060年了，因为人口的增加太快，所以陆地上，几乎没有可以让人居住的地方。
作为一名科学家，我有责任所以就让改善我们人类的生存空间。十年来，我一直致力于拓展人类生存空间的研究工作，到今天，总算是如愿以偿了。未来的海洋里，到处都可以见到我设计的房子。这些房子的外面是用超合金做的，为了能在室内欣赏到五彩缤纷的海底世界，所以我采用了透明的超合金。你不用担心里面会没有氧气，房子里面装有氧气转化器，可以把海水改变成氧气;有人还会担心有海啸，住到这样的房子里大可放心，因为我采用的超合金是用世界上最坚硬的物质，无论什么东西都摧毁不了。 你还可以看到许多人都骑在大鱼的背上，让大鱼带他们想去的地方，那是因为人们给鱼吃了 我发明的“奇迹二号”，只要那都是我精心发明的一种可以给宠物或者动物吃的药，只要吃 了这种药，无论多么凶残的动物，都会像小绵羊一样温顺，还可以把海里的小动物当做宠物 养。你一定会奇怪，这人身上怎么不背氧气瓶呢?不用大惊小怪，如果人你仔细一看，一定 可以看出人的头部有一个透明的氧气罩，氧气从哪儿来呢?这还得说说我发明的这种有夹层 的衣服，夹层里有一个小型的氧气转化器，背部连着氧气罩，穿上这件衣服，就会像在陆地 上呼吸空气一样舒畅。另外手腕上安了一个遥控器，如果你想在海面上晒太阳，你就按“上 浮”键，你立即就浮在海面上晒太阳，如果你想游泳，就按“游泳”键，便能像游泳运动员 一样游泳。
这就是我想象中的未来的海洋，希望我的梦想能够成真。
未来人们接受了大陆上的教训，不再无限制的开采矿产资源，而对此加以保护。人们再也不会浪费世界上任何一种矿产资源。
未来的海洋是人们的生存地，也是人们的休闲度假地。我们现在要保护海洋，珍惜海洋资源，才能有这么美好的海洋，如果我们糟蹋海洋，它就不会给我们人类一点点资源，所以我们要珍惜海洋资源，它才会乐于做出它的奉献。
