Dear English teacher,
I went on a trip to Hainan today with my family .We went there by plane. After we got off the plane, we went to the beach to see the beautiful sand and swim there. There were other people there too. Some people were surfing and some people were diving in the deeper part of the sea. Afterwards we had lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach. We ate seafood like shrimps and craps, and drank some abalone soup.We all didn't want to go home because the scenery was so beautiful, and there were so many other exciting things to try,but sadly it was time for us to go. It was definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance to go there again, i will be more than happy to visit the place again.
Best wishes for you!
yours,
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
放暑假了,爸爸计划着带我们进行一次旅行。他问我喜欢到什么样的地方玩,我脱口而出:“有大海的地方!周未,爸爸回来了,说:“明天,我们去宁波玩吧!我问:“那儿有大海吗?“有啊,爸爸说。我高兴地跳了起来,“好啊,好啊!终于可以出去玩喽!可以到海边游泳了!
第二天早上,我们收拾好旅游用品,有防晒衣,有防虫喷雾,当然少不了游泳装备啦。我们高高兴兴地出发了。下午一点多钟,我们到了宁波。我们决定先到海边玩。
这时的海面非常美,一望无际的大海碧波荡漾,天上的朵朵白云就像漂浮在海面上似的,海风吹过,海浪裹着白云不断地向海边涌来,我多么想立即跳入大海捧上一朵洁白洁白的云啊!在更衣室里换好泳衣,我和弟弟就迫不及待地跳下海去游泳。我们像一条鱼儿,在大海里尽情地游玩。我把刚学会的.蛙泳,仰游,自由泳都用上了。海浪一个接一个地涌来,一会儿把我推上峰顶,一会儿又把我打入谷底,有趣极了。真是“不管风吹浪打,胜似闲庭信步!
游泳游累了,我们来到沙滩上。我和弟弟一起挖沙坑,垒沙堡。这时,我看见一片沙地上冒出了一个个水泡泡,用手一掏,竟然掏出了一个紫色的小海贝来,把我高兴坏了。于是,我们拿着水桶又开始捡贝壳。一分钟过去了,五钟过去了,十分钟过去了……我们捡了半桶海螺,海贝和五彩斑斓贝壳。我们玩得十分开心。转眼间,太阳就要落山了,妈妈和爸爸给我们拍了照片留作纪念。
我们高兴地回到了宾馆。晚上,我兴奋得睡不着觉,一闭上眼睛就仿佛躺在蔚蓝色的大海上,海浪把我荡来荡去……我做了一个奇怪的梦,梦到我已经长大了,正在探索大海深处的秘密。
这次旅游让我难忘!
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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今天,风和日丽。爸爸开着汽车带我们一家人去游玩。在路上,我们乘的车子转了好几圈,觉得山路十八弯,头晕得很。过了一会儿,我们就看到茂密的树林,又听到一只只虫子的叫声,觉得很有趣。
下车了,我们来到一个风景秀丽的旅游地点,这里有碧绿的草地,芬芳扑鼻的鲜花,高大的佛像,真是多彩多艺啊!我们爬上楼梯,来到两间有佛像的房子里,拜了拜菩萨,保佑平安。然后我们上楼了,一直爬到顶端,到了上面,我们吸着新鲜的.空气,望着远方的美景,接着我们就聊起天来,聊着聊着我们又要到下一个旅游地点了,我看着这里依依不舍的走了,我们下了楼乘着车子开走了,这次除了爸爸在开车,我们都睡着了。
过了一会儿,到旅游地点,爸爸把我们给叫醒了,我们下了车,看见这里是一片树林,然后我们一个接一个的走了上去,看见了许许多多的虫子,我们走到了最上面,看见以前古人的石像和房子,我们又来到一个满是紫兰香的公园,闻着有香味的紫兰香,聊起天来,真是舒适啊!接着我们又看见一条长长的瀑布,觉得很状观,我被深深的吸引注了,但是今天的旅游要结束了,我觉得这是最难忘的一天。
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