二年级学生作文存在问题【一】
今天，我看了一本《四个调皮蛋》，主要是讲唐飞上课爱吃东西，他把好吃的东西放在上课吃，把不好吃的放在下课吃，因为每次下课的时候，马小跳、张达、毛超都会抢他的'零食吃。
我看了之后觉得唐飞真有点儿小气，有好吃的东西朋友们应该分享，这样吃起来才会有滋有味，而且上课吃零食是非常不对的，我希望唐飞能改掉这个坏毛病。
二年级学生作文存在问题【二】
今天,我读了著名作家老舍先生的文章——《济南的冬天》。我觉得在作家的笔下,那么美,那么生动,仿佛是一张小水墨画。
最妙的是下点儿小雪呀。越发青黑的矮松,全白的山尖,穿着花衣的山坡,微黄的阳光,使济南的冬天越发秀气。
济南的水不但不结冰,倒反在绿藻上冒着点儿热气 。澄清的河水往上看,自上而下全是清亮亮、蓝汪汪的,像块空灵的蓝水晶。 济南的冬天真美啊!
二年级学生作文存在问题【三】
Emerging from the cartoon is an eye-catching scene that the parents are willing to have a second child, while their only child do not agree because of his worry that he doesn't want to have another child, even his own sibling, share toys with him. Simple as it is, the symbolic meaning revealed is profound and thought-provoking.
We are supposed to place our attention on, instead of its funny appearance, the implied meaning of the cartoon: as the overall second-child policy expands throughout China, some only children are so selfish that they cannot accept the second child in their family. What can account for this undesirable situation? For one thing, they, as the only child at home all the time, have no awareness of sharing what they like with others due to the fact that all the family members give their love to the only child. As a result, when faced with the problem of whether they are willing to have a sibling, their first response is to refuse it. For another reason, some couples are eager to have a second child as soon as possible, which makes them neglect to communicate with their only child to let them realize the advantage of having a sibling companion in their childhood.
From what has been discussed above, it's safe for me to conclude that it is urgent to take some immediate and effective measures. What I recommend is that parents should let child know the importance of sharing with others, which is beneficial for them in future life. In addition, it's better for parents to have more communication with their only child once they want to have a second child.
