夏天的炎热是避免不了的,人人都躲不开炎热,而我和爸爸却躲过了几天炎热,在哪儿呢?大家肯定都想知道,知道了好去避避暑,那儿就是——咸宁的九宫山。
咸宁是南竹之乡,不管你走到哪里,处处都可以见到南竹,咸宁还是温泉之乡,你一到水里去别提有多舒服。
九宫山上十分的凉快,到了晚上甚至还会感觉到很冷,山上有铜鼓包,又好玩、又惊险的地方就是一线天,下台阶的时候要像螃蟹一样横着走,有的'地方还有流水缓缓而过,山上还有云中湖,云中湖里大鱼、小鱼、红鲤鱼、锦鲤多得数不胜数,山下有金鸡谷,金鸡谷里玉龙、玉龙相抱这两条瀑布长得像条玉龙一样,正像唐朝的大诗人李白在诗中写到的“飞流直下三千尺,疑是银河落九天。”
不过山上最为壮观的还不是这些,而是山顶上那巨人般高大的16个风车,风车的半径是32米,它每转一圈发0.4度电。
九宫山上的风力发电场是湖北省唯一的一家风力发电场,而且还是无污染的呢!
如果我们这儿还多几家无污染的风力发电场就好了。
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
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导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
我的家乡在湖北咸宁,这里山水环绕,空气清新,历史悠久,有很多自然和人文景观。我经常会和爸爸妈妈回老家看看。
我的家乡是著名的楠竹之乡,每年的春天回家乡在山间和公路的小山都能看到一片片翠绿的竹海,微风阵阵吹来,它们就象跳舞的人们,左右摇摆,还发出沙沙的声音,坐在车里,一路欣赏美景,让我回家心切,回到老家时还能能吃到新鲜的竹笋。我已经在想奶奶炒的竹笋,好想早点到家。
我的家乡是桂花之乡。走在马路上都随处都能看到高大的桂花树,秋天是黄金桂丰收的季节,走在路上金灿灿的桂花随风飘舞,有的落下来,象一只只蝴蝶翩翩起舞。有桂花就有特产,有又香又甜的桂花糖、桂花蜜、桂花酒、桂花羔,一定要带点回去慢慢品尝。
我的家乡是温泉之乡,有悠久的历史,是个天然的泉眼,泉水是淡黄色,水中含有很多矿物质,可以治关节炎和皮肤病。来咸宁的朋友不要错过我们的温泉。
我最喜欢家乡,那是我爸爸成长的地方,还有我喜欢的爷爷奶奶。每年回老奶奶都为我准备了很多好吃的,全是绿色食品,在城市是吃不到的。我在过年时还可以看雪景,堆雪人。这就是我的家乡。
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