How bright the June sun is, and the bright sunshine brings us to the same heart. It's like this: Dad took a camera from school and took pictures for us these days. Dad organized us to play together today. In the afternoon, we rode on motorcycles and walked on the same road.
On the way, I was in a good mood when I suddenly saw a blue sea, the sea breeze blowing my body, comfortable, the sea breeze seemed to blow into my heart, blowing out all the unhappiness in my heart.
Soon we came to Shiyuan. We just walked into the poetry garden. Before I took the two step, I came to the gate. I thought, "Oh! How nice it is to take a picture here, so I hastened to shout, "Dad, please come and take Zhang Xiang to me." Dad hurriedly came over and took a picture of me with a click. Then we went on, when I found one of the rocks, just one that could make me do something, and when I was sitting, my father came over to give me a picture. We ran to the place where there was water and came to the side of the sea. I thought, why not take a picture with the sea? I put my posture ready for a picture. Dad came over again and gave me a picture.
At this time we came to the place where there was a pavilion, and everyone was ready to see this good place. You see your sister's posture so beautiful, and the brother also put a posture in the mother's arms. I started to prepare, when I suddenly saw a stone made goose. What I want to ride on it, how impressive and impressive. I got on the goose on top of it. Dad came to take a picture of me. My sister came to take a picture of the little fish next to him.
Then we came to the mosque, because we didn't have enough time, so we hurriedly made several photos.
When Dad took us to a place, there were two ships, and I wanted to experience the experience of the ship as a ship, but the steamer was not there. So we don't have a steamer.
I am very happy today.
四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。此外,在本次四级考试的三道写作题中,Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
This may day Dad took me to climb Huashan, where all the plants and trees were unforgettable.
I have been to Jincheng Mountain in Yilong, where fruit trees are everywhere and green grass is everywhere. But I can't compare to the beauty of Huashan; I have been to the east mountain of Deyang, where the mountains are green and green, but they are still not as strange as Huashan; I have also been to the Zhongjing Pingshan, where there are many places of interest, but not in Huashan.
As soon as I set foot on the Huashan Road, I saw a mountain peak rising from the ground, and a dark green light on the mountain. I looked at it. Dad said, "Hey, go." I went up and said, "Daddy, look, what a beautiful view!"
As I walked, I saw that the mountain peak was bare and grotesque. Under such conditions, trees were still growing. There is a mountain with these one or two trees long, far from seeing, the mountain is different, the mountain is like the tota Li, the tree is the tower, how angry! We see a national protection tree - the Sophora japonica, more than 500 years history. The tree is thick and oval - dense and oval, and the more I climb, the more scared it is, but the joy is my motivation, and my family and I continue to climb and climb higher. I saw Xifeng. It was the place where incense sticks to save the mountain. I jumped up with joy. Then I walked a long way, and I saw the long sky plank road, which was connected by a plank on the edge of the mountain. Look at that 1000 foot building, straight up 87 degrees slope, straight into the sky.
The listens say: the sunrise in Huashan and the sea of clouds are also beautiful. The sun just rose from the horizon, the first to show a lovely smiling face...... Hey, down the mountain, ride the cable car, so high! On the cable car to see this side of the mountain is different. How fast can I believe that every passing pile on the cable car is very fast, and when it reaches the foot of the hill?
Time is too fast, or I'll conquer it again.
在把握文章的主旨之后,考生就可以构思整篇文章的架构了。四级漫画作文的写作可以分为下面三个段落。
第一段:开门见山,简要描述一下漫画内容,并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意,是手段而不是目的,所以描述要简洁明快,一般来说一句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是,写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述,因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。
第二段:表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的重心所在。比如,就第一道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。
第三段:指出漫画的寓意对大学生的`教育意义,或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是,结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析,其主要作用是总结和升华,使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要,点到即止。
Directions: For this part, you’reallowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with abrief description of the picture and then express your views on the importanceof learning basic skills. You should write at least 120 words but no more than180 words.
审题:在本题的漫画中,一位老师正在教一群小学生乘法表,孩子们却面露疑色,其中一个学生向老师表达了大家心中的疑虑:“No offense, but by the time we’re in the job market, won’t that stuff be outdated?”结合写作指令(express your views on the importance of learning basic skills),考生不难看出这幅漫画意在强调学习基本技能的重要性。
我的家乡是中国五大经济特区之一――汕头,它是一颗璀璨明珠。常听大人说:“汕头这几年发展快,天天都在变。”的确,在党的带领下,在党的带领下,汕头的变化确实日新月异。改革开放后,汕头有了变化,搞了饮水项目:打井、建水池、开水渠……解决了许多人的饮水问题。以前的楼房,都是木房。瓦房,破破烂烂的,而现在汕头的楼房,都成了一栋栋漂亮楼房,别墅,那些平房。瓦房都没有了!
以前的道路是坑坑洼洼的,现在都变成了水泥路,柏油路,非常平坦整洁!由于经济的发展,现在的环境也越越来越好了,不少景点有很大的改变!如:人民广场、中山公园……海滨长廊也随之改变。10年前的海滨长廊的是一片泥泞的海滩,海水中漂浮着许多垃圾,真臭!海面上也很冷清,只有几条小渔船。长廊上长满杂草,丢满垃圾,蚊子苍蝇满天飞,没有石雕,更别提有旅客来参观啦!
昔日的荒凉之地,起了翻天覆地的大变化,成了今天闻名的潮汕八景之一。现在的海滨长廊是一条沿海的漂亮长廊。漫步在海滨长廊,静静地看着海,湿润的雾气萦萦环绕,模糊看见远处那秀丽的\'山在朦胧中探头,山头还依着云层叠叠的天。近处,忙碌着捕鱼的渔船与群山远近相映,这不是大自然潜心绘出的杰作吗?
今日的海滨长廊真美啊!长廊上的石雕可闻名了,也使观光者大饱眼福。看,那是一个母亲正在微笑着看着孩子吃母乳!这石雕不就是母爱吗?长廊长满了翠绿的草与花香扑鼻的鲜花,那绿得鲜亮,那花香得沁人心脾,布满了生命力!轻柔海风迎面扑来,还带着海姑娘的芳香,使人神清气爽!
家乡的变化使我们感到骄傲和自豪!这一切变化都离不开党的英明领导、离不开改革开放!我们得好好学习,把未来的家乡――汕头建设得更加美好!
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