春天,微风吹拂着千万条带黄色的嫩叶的柳丝,青的草,绿的叶,各色鲜艳的花,都像赶集似的聚拢起来,形成光彩夺目的春天,小燕子从南方赶来,叽叽喳喳的`说:“春天来了!”给奥林匹克公园增添了无限生机。
夏天到了,公园里的树木变得更绿了,葱葱茏茏,密密层层的枝叶相互交错,就像给公园里的人行道搭起了绿色的帐篷,给来公园散步的人们带来一片阴凉。
一阵秋雨过后,公园里红色的枫叶仿佛一只只红色的蝴蝶,飘啊飘啊,在秋风中翩翩起舞;黄色的银杏树叶像一枚枚精致的书签,在秋的阳光中,仿佛镀了一层耀眼的金光,黄灿灿的,我和妈妈走过去,轻轻地拾起一片银杏叶夹入书内做书签。
冬天,大雪纷飞,一朵小雪花仿佛在说:“冬天来啦!”整个世界白茫茫的一片,公园也披上了一层厚厚的银装,此时冠军林前的广场上则成了小孩们打雪仗、堆雪人,滚雪球的乐园,到处是孩子们的欢笑声。
公园里还有很多健身设备,每天一到傍晚,人们便从四面八方来到这儿散步、健身……热闹极了。
我爱去奥林匹克公园,更爱公园一年四季的美。
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
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The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
我的故乡在湖南省益阳市,这里有我年少的懵懂和无知;这里有我成长的甜蜜与温馨;这里还有我的青葱岁月与脉脉温情。我爱我那美丽的故乡,接下来,我就跟你们介绍一下吧!
首先,益阳有许多风景名胜,如,茶马古道风景区是一处融山水风光和历史文化于一体的风景区。在这里,您可以体验骑马观光的乐趣,也可以探寻马帮文化的历史遗存。景区内,林秀水美,山高谷深,集“雄,奇,险,秀,幽”等风景特色于一身。
还有洞庭湖的美景呢!洞庭湖是著名的鱼米之乡,其物产极为丰富,湖中的特产有:河蚌,黄鳝,洞庭蟹,财鱼等珍贵的河鲜,还有君山名茶、罗汉果、方竹、实竹、紫竹、斑竹、毛竹等竹类产品,种类繁多。洞庭湖的意思就是神仙洞府,可见其风光秀丽迷人。其最大特点便是湖外有湖,湖中有山。
还有会龙山,它是湖南省益阳市最高的山,不但有树有草,有坡有坪,也有石有崖,所以它也是益阳的名山。会龙山座落在市区西部,资水南岸。它蜿蜒临水,远望如龙骧首,因而得名。此山名字的来历不像益阳其他名胜古迹一样有典故和原因,就连它的名字都有不同的说法,写的是会龙山,说的则是回龙山。
再为大家介绍一下益阳最有名的两个特产吧!第一个就是益阳松花皮蛋,据传已有500多年历史。剥开蛋壳,只见晶莹碧透的蛋白表层,松花朵朵,若隐若现,茶色蛋白,橙色蛋黄,如琥珀含珠。这是以特有的东方食品风味,饮誉中外的益阳松花皮蛋。
还有一个特产就是竹凉席,它历史悠久,明清时期,竹凉席就被列为贡品。这种凉席篾丝纤细光亮,色泽青绿油润,十分美观。“三伏”盛夏,人睡席上,体温随之下降,有清风徐来之感,故深受欢迎。
这就是我美丽的故乡,承载温暖与甜蜜的故乡。希望你也喜欢我的故乡。
端午节吃粽子,是我们的一个习俗。但是,吃粽子的人不一定包过粽子。而且,各地粽子的制作工艺与粽子的风味还不尽相同呢。
下面,我向大家介绍一下我的家乡湖南益阳的粽子是怎样包的吧。
包粽子至少要准备三种原材料。一是糯米;二是粽叶,洞庭湖的滩地上长着茂密的芦苇,采用苇叶来充当粽叶,包出来的粽子同样色香味俱佳;三是结实的细绳子。
我们将魚米之乡自产的优质糯米用清水淘洗两回,把一片片新鲜的粽叶的两面都仔细地洗刷干净,用洞庭湖盛产的芋麻搓一团结实的细麻绳。这样,包粽子的准备工作就做好了。
第一步,拿起一片或两片粽叶,卷成一个锥形。第二步,把珍珠般的糯米粒填进锥形的'空腔里。第三步,把装够了糯米的锥体的头部露出的粽叶折叠成三角形,把锥体的口封闭并用细麻绳捆紧。这样包出来的粽子头部是三角形,主体是圆锥形,扎实而且美观。如果在糯米中加入绿豆、莲子或者其它材料,还可以包出各种品味的粽子来。
把包好的粽子放进锅里,加盖煮沸一个小时。熄火后,把熟透了的香喷喷的粽子拿出来就可以吃了。
让我们一边吃粽子一边猜个谜语吧。“一身绿衣冠,珍珠腹里藏。要想吃美味,解带脱衣裳。”我想,此时此刻,你一定能够把这个谜底说出来。
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
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