作文里优美的句子及赏析【一】
按要求改写句子知识点梳理
一、概述
按要求改写句子主要考查学生对句子结构的掌握以及用不同句型表达同一意思的能力。考查所涉及到的句子类型有一般疑问句、否定句、反意疑问句、选择疑问句、对划线部分提问、感叹句、保持原句意思、合并成一句、简单句和复合句之间的互换以及改为被动语态等。
二、解题时需注意的几个要点
1、时态：不同的时态相对应的助动词
一般现在时：谓语动词用原形（主语为第三人称单数时，动词加s或es，变否定句、疑问句时助动词为do或does）
一般过去时：谓语动词用过去式，变否定句、疑问句时助动词为did.
现在完成时：助动词have/has+动词的过去分词
过去完成时：助动词had+动词的过去分词
一般将来时：will/be going to +动词原形
过去将来时：would/was or were going to +动词原形
现在进行时：am/is/are＋动词的现在分词
过去进行时：was/were＋动词的现在分词
2、语态：主动语态变为被动语态的谓语结构
一般现在时：am/is/are＋动词的过去分词
一般过去时：was/were+动词的过去分词
一般将来时：will be+动词的过去分词
情态动词：can/may/must/need等情态动词＋be++动词的过去分词
3、改反意疑问句时注意hardly, never, seldom, few, little, no等词表达的是否定意义，变反意疑问句时用肯定形式。
4、在合并句子时，有些连词如not only…but also…, neither…nor…, either…or…是就近原则，连接两个主语时动词形式取决于与动词邻近的主语。而both…and…连接两个主语时,主语是复数。
5、简单句和复合句之间的互换常见的有：带有疑问词的宾语从句改为特殊疑问词＋to＋动词原形的不定式；结果状语从句so…that…改为enough to或too…to…的简单句。
6、保持原句意思改写句子时注意时态不变。
三、习题
练习一
1. We do our homework every evening. （改为否定句）
We _________ ________ our homework every evening. 对划线部分提问
________ ________ do they have a class meeting?
3. She could hardly understand this passage. (改为反意疑问句
She could hardly understand this passage, _________ __________?
4.The manager told him how to get useful information. (改为否定句
The manager _________ _________ him how to get useful information.
5. Tom’s sister can speak English and Japanese very well. (改为反意疑问句
Tom’s sister can speak English and Japanese very well, _________ _________?
对划线部分提问
_________ _________ he live twenty years ago?
7. Sam does some cleaning in the morning. (改为否定句
Sam _________ do _________ cleaning in the morning.
对划线部分提问
_________ _________ have the students worked on the survey?
9. Your father used to ride a bike. （改成反意问句）
Your father used to ride a bike, _______ ________? （对划线提问）
__________ ___________ the population of Germany?
11. Mr. Wang washes his car once a month. （改为一般疑问句）
Mr. Wang (对划线部分提问
will Susan come back from Athens?
13. My friends lost their way when they were traveling in Hong Kong. (改为一般疑问句
________ your friends ________ their way when they were traveling in Hong Kong?
14. 对划线部分提问
________ ________ has Yao Ming been in the Rocket Team?
15. She put the digital camera on the bed just now. (改为否定句
She _________ _________ the digital camera on the bed just now.
16. Mark's flown to Hainan Island for winter holidays. (改为反意疑问句
Mark's flown to Hainan Island for winter holidays, _________ _________?
(专辑. (划线部分提问
_________ did Super Girl Zhou Bichang _________ to Vienna?
18. I’ve already saved enough money to buy a new car. (改为否定句
I ________ saved enough money to buy a car ________.
19. Lily used to have long straight hair. (改为反意疑问句
Lily used to have long straight hair, ________ ________?
20. He has already been there .(改为一般疑问句
__________ he been there __________?
21.They decided that they wouldn't have the picnic because of the bad weather. (改为简单句
They decided __________ _________ have the picnic because of the bad
weather.
22. The English people hardly ever shake hands between the strangers .( 改为反意疑问句
The English people hardly ever shake hands between the strangers, __________ __________?
23. They grew some sunflowers in their garden last year.（改为否定句）
They __________ __________ any sunflowers in their garden last year.
24. Jane drinks milk every morning.（改为一般疑问句）
_________ Jane ___________ milk every morning? （就划线部分提问）
___________ map ___________ to Class 4?
26. You can choose only one of the two: a mini-TV or a DVD player. (改为选择疑问句
you want a mini-TV a DVD player?
27. That detective film is so amazing. （改为感叹句）
___________ ___________ amazing detective film!
28. He has some money left.（改成否定句）
He money left.
29. （划线部分提问）
do the members of the film society meet?
30. His mother knew why the little boy was unhappy all day. (改为一般疑问句
_______ his mother _______ why the boy was unhappy all day?
31. He looks very funny with that hat on. (改为感叹句
_______ _______ he looks with that hat on!. 对划线部分提问
_______ _______ they build this factory?
33. I have already finished the test paper.（改为否定句）
I ________ finished the test paper ________.
34. Johnson denied cheating in the competition.（改为反意疑问句）
Johnson denied cheating in the competition, ________ ________? （对划线部分提问） ________ ________ the story need to be funny?
36. Sam does some cleaning in the morning. (改为否定句
Sam _________ do _________ cleaning in the morning.
对划线部分提问 _________ _________ have the students worked on the survey?
38. （对划线部分提问） _________ _________ has he been a top fashion designer?
39. 对划线部分提问
________ ________ will they move into the new school?
40. to go to the People’s Square by underground. (对划线部分提问
________ _______ did it take you to go to the People’s Square by underground?
练习二：
1. Gold is less valuable than diamond. (保持句意不变
Gold is ________ ________ valuable as diamond.
2. He told the children to go and watch his tank of Ghost fish. (改为被动语态 The children ________ ________ to go and watch his tank of Ghost fish.
3. Unless I have a quiet room, I cannot do any work. （保持句意不变）
I cannot do any work ________ I _________ have a quiet room.
4. The manager arrived here a few minutes ago. （保持句意不变）
The manager has _________here ________ a few minutes.
5. They will send him to work in Japan for one year. (改为被动语态
He will ________ _________ to work in Japan for one year.
6. The words on the notice board are very small. I can’t see them clearly.(保持句子原意
The words on the notice board are small I can’t see them
clearly.
7. We can solve the problems with the help of the teacher. (改为被动语态 The problems can _________ _________ with the help of the teacher.
8. We can’t finish the work in such a short time. (保持原句意思
It’s _________ _________ us to finish the work in such a short time.
9. We must keep the noise under 50 dbs.(分贝（改成被动语态）
The noise must ________ _______ under 50 dbs here.
10. Mike doesn’t like classical music. Billy doesn’t either. （合并成一句） _________ Mike nor Billy __________ classical music.
11. The room is so dirty that we can’t live in it.（保持句意不变）
The room isn’t __________ _________ for us to live in.
12. No one knows when we will start tomorrow. （保持原句意思）
No one knows start tomorrow.
13. The Smiths will invite the professor to take part in the party. (改成被动语态 to take part in the party by the Smiths.
14. If you are not brave, you’ll lose your last chance.（保持原句意思）
you are ’ll lose your last chance.
15. They store much information in the computer. (改成被动语态
Much information ________ ________ in the computer.
16. Don’t throw rubbish here and there. Our teacher said to us. (合并为一句
Our teacher told us ________ ________ throw rubbish here and there.
17. If John doesn’t apologize for what he did, I will tell the teacher about his bad behavior.
（保持原句意思）
_______ John _______ for what he did, I will tell the teacher about his bad behavior.
18. I don't know where we can grow vegetables in the city. (改为简单句 I don't know _________ _________ grow vegetables in the city.
19. People used to enjoy themselves chatting on MSN when it worked well. (保持句意基本不变
People used to _________ a lot of _________ chatting on MSN when it worked well.
20. If you don’t improve your handwriting, you will lose marks in the exam. (合成同义句
You will lose marks in the exam ________ you ________ your handwriting.
21. To go fishing is fun. （句意不变 ）
_____ is fun _____ ______ fishing.
22. Dick was so short that he couldn’t touch the top of the bookshelf.（保持句意基本不变）
Dick wasn’t __________ __________ to reach the top of the bookshelf.
23. “Can I borrow your bike for a while or not?”（ 保持句意基本不变）
Tom asked his sister __________ he __________ borrow her bike or not for a while.
24. The couple couldn’t decide which flat they should choose at first. （保持原句意
思）
The couple couldn’t decide which flat at first.
25. Meaningless information is difficult for the little boy to remember. （保持原句意思）
is difficult for the little boy remember meaningless information.
26. People throw away millions of plastic bags in our city every day. （改成被动语态）
Millions of plastic bags away in our city.
27. She was so careless that she couldn’t find the mistakes in her test paper. (保持句意基本不变
She was _______ _______ to find the mistakes in her test paper.
28. We will hold the next Olympic Games in Beijing in 2008.（改为被动语态）
The next Olympic Games will _______ _______ in Beijing in 2008.
29. The elderly man pushed the birds into the river.（改为被动语态）
The birds ________ ________ into the river by the elderly man.
30. Dolphins are so clever that they can follow the instructions.（保持句意基本不变） Dolphins are ________ ________ to follow the instructions.
31. We can’t finish the work in such a short time. (保持原句意思
It’s _________ _________ us to finish the work in such a short time.
32. They invited the astronaut and his wife to the party on Christmas Eve.(改为被动语态
The astronaut and his wife _________ _________ to the party on Christmas Eve.
33. The little girl didn’t go to bed unless the grandmother told her a story. (保持句意基本不变
The little girl didn’t go to bed _________ the grandmother _________ tell her a story.
34. The plane is so big that it can carry 300 passengers at one time. （改为简单句）
The plane is big _________ _________ carry 300 passengers at one time.
35. Did they know the answer to the question? Ididn’t know… (合并为一句 I didn’t know ________ they had ________ the answer to the question.
Keys
练习一
1. don’t do 2. How often 3.could she 4.didn’t tell 5.can’t she
6.where did 7.doesn’t any 8.How long 9.didn’t he 10.What is
作文里优美的句子及赏析【二】
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作文里优美的句子及赏析【三】
（一）要交代清楚事情发生的时间、地点；要把事情的经过、因果写明白。一件事，总离不开时间、地点、人物、事件、原因、结果等六个方面的内容，因此，必须把这六个方面 都写清楚了，才能使别人明白你写了一件什么事情。交代这六个方面的内容不应该呆板，要根据文章的需要灵活安排。时间、地点也并不是非要直接点明不可的，有时候可以通过描述自然景物的特征及其变化，将它们间接表示出来。如“公鸡唱歌了”，就是指天将亮了；“西边的太阳就要落山了”，指的是傍晚，等等。
（二）要把事情经过写具体，并做到重点突出。在记叙文六个方面的内容中，起因、经过和结果，是构成事情最主要的环节。为了把事情写得清楚明白，在叙述中一定要把这三方面写好，特别要把事情的经过写具体，给人留下完整而深刻的印象。
（三）记叙的条理要清晰。每一件事都有发生、发展和结果的过程，按照事情发展的顺序记叙，文章的条理就会清楚明白。确定记叙的顺序以后，还要安排好段落层次，适当地分段，可以使文章眉目清楚。在动笔之前仔细地想一想，文章应该先写什么，再写什么，然后写什么，把记叙的轮廓整理出来。
二、怎样安排记叙的顺序才能使文章条理清楚。
(一运用顺序
顺序，是按照事物发生、发展的先后次序进行叙述。这样写，可以将事物的发展过程，有头有尾地叙述出来，来龙去脉都写得十分清楚。顺叙有以时间为顺序的，有以事物的发展规律为顺序的，也有以空间变换为顺序的。在叙事性的文章中，大多是以时间为顺序和以事物的发展规律为顺序的。按时间顺序进行叙述时，必须严格地按排好顺序，写清楚叙述的时间。任何事情的发生，它总有一个发生发展的过程。因此在叙述一件事时，常常要根据事情发生、发展、高潮、结局这一事情的发展规律来进行叙述，这样写能使文章的层次清楚明了。当然，有的文章事情比较简单，因而不一定非要写出事情过程的四个层次。
（二）运用倒叙
倒叙，就是把事件的结局或某个最突出的片断放在前面叙述，然后再从事件的开头进行叙述，需要注意的是，运用倒叙的写法，必须交代清楚倒叙的起止点，顺序和倒叙的转换处要有明显的界限，必要的文字过渡。这些地方处理不好，会使文章脉络不清，影响内容的表达。
（三）运用插叙
插叙是指在叙述中心事件的过程中，由于某种需要而插入的关于另一件事情的叙述。需要注意的是，在运用插叙时不能打乱原来的叙述线索，要注意与上下文的衔接。这样文章的结构不仅富有变化，而且叙述事情的条理也非常清楚。
三、怎样从小事中写出深意呢？
（一）提高思想水平，训练一副见微知著的好眼力。
（二）深入思考、分析、挖掘，寻找出事情所蕴含的深意。
（三）把事情放在一定的背景中去写。
背景就是时代环境，指的是社会变迁和政治动态等。一件小事，孤零零地看是不起眼的，如果把它放到一定的背景中去写，那就不寻常了。“事”与“意”之间要对的合适我们所要写的那件事情，所要表达什么样的意愿，必须要仔细地分析它们之间能否对得上号，能否从这件事中感悟出这样的深意来。
四、怎样才能选择到新颖、独特的材料？
（一）从自己的生活中去找。
（二）做生活的有心人。
（三）选择新角度，让常见的材料放出异彩。
（四）打开思路，扩大视野。
五、在记叙的过程中，怎样妥当地安排详写和略写呢？
事情的发生和结果要略写，事情的发展过程要详写。
有点有面地叙事，“面”要略写，“点”要详写。
有点有面地叙事，“面”上的内容往往是渲染气氛，交代背景，起烘托作用的。“点”上的内容往往是文章的重点，直接体现中心思想的，所以要详写。
六、写文章时，一定要注意段与段之间的过渡和照应。
一般来说，记叙文在下面几种情况需要过渡：
（一）由这件事转到另一件事时需要过渡。
（二）记叙的时间发生变化时需要过渡。
（三）由倒叙转入顺叙时需要过渡。
（四）运用倒叙时的起止处需要过渡。
叙事中的照应有三种情况：
（一）文题照应。
在叙事过程中，我们所写的内容务必切题，要和文章的标题相照应。
（二）首尾呼应。
文章的开头和结尾遥相呼应，可以使文章结构紧凑。
（三）前后照应。
在一篇文章中，前面的内容要和后面的内容互相照应。总之，过渡和照应是记叙文中必不可少的，我们在写记叙文时一定要加以重视。
七、如何才能做到一个“漂亮的开头”
可以采用以下的几种写法；
（一）叙述好事件的起因。
在文章开头时就把整件事情的起因交代清楚了，让人一看就情不自禁地进入状态之中。
（二）描写环境，烘托气氛。
在文章的开头交代了事情所发生的环境，正是为了适应表达中心思想的需要，也增强了文章的感染力。
（三）激人兴趣，引人入胜。
在文章的开头采用一些奇特新颖的语句，让人感到好奇和疑惑，迫切地想知道下面将要发生的事情。
（四）开门见山，点明题旨。
在文章的开头用简明的语句就把文章的主要事件表达出来，这样直截了当地，一下子把读者注意力吸引到中心思想上来，起到总领全文的作用。
八、如何才能做到“结尾有力”
可以采用以下的几种方法：
（一）把事件的结局交代清楚。
在文章的结尾用简明直接的语言把事情讲清楚，让读者知道整件事情的结果。
（二）语言含蓄，发人深思。
有的记叙文在结尾的时候作者以独特的认识和理解写下深刻含蓄的结语，力求意味深 长，发人深思。
（三）结尾同开头相呼应。
结尾照应开头，能使文章结构严谨，浑然一体。
（四）篇末点题，突出中心。
篇末点题，犹如画龙点睛，这“睛”点得好，会使全篇顿生光彩，画龙点睛式的结尾，
能帮助读者悟出全文的深意，给人留下深刻的印象。
把事情的六要素交代清楚这是叙事的最基本要求。任何一件事情，都是由时间、地点、 人物、起因、经过和结果等六个要素组成的。在叙述的时候要把这些要素交代清楚，一般不要省略，这样才会使读者对事情有一个全面的了解。
