暑假里,爸爸妈妈带我去宜昌玩。一仓是一个很有名的旅游胜地,那里山青水秀,景色宜人,四暑期度假的好去处。
来到宜昌,我们第一站就是去著名的三峡帕大瀑布。那里的山很绿,而且山都是连在一起的,像骆驼的背一样,来到大瀑布旁边,我看见,大瀑布的水,是从山壁崖上流下来的,水流下来的时候发出哗哗的巨响,大瀑布的水很凉,我把脚伸进去,我感觉,好凉快啊!我还在水里发现许多小螃蟹,小螃蟹披着墨绿色的盔甲,长着四对长长的脚,两只像两把大剪刀,威武极了!我连忙拿起渔网捞起来,可是我捞了半天,怎么也捞不到一只小螃蟹,真是太奇怪了!我离开了小溪,就和爸爸妈妈来到大瀑布,我们立刻拿出刚买的雨衣,做好穿越瀑布的准备。我们穿好雨衣就走近大瀑布,我刚进去,一会儿就大叫了起来,因为风太大了,把水都吹到我身上了,爸爸带着我走了两次,这种感觉真是太刺激了!
看完瀑布,我们又去参观了一个叫“金狮洞”的溶洞。走进溶洞我看见了很多我从来没见过的钟乳石,这些钟乳石各式各样的,有的像一只大狮子、有的像孙悟空的定海神针、还有的像武松打虎;这些钟乳石形态各异,千姿百态,让人看得眼花缭乱。
啊!神奇的宜昌风景令人难忘,在这青山叠翠,万木峥嵘、鸟雀鸣唱、瀑布声喧的童话世界里更让我到了宜昌的美丽。
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
暑假里,爸爸妈妈带我去宜昌玩。一仓是一个很有名的旅游胜地,那里山青水秀,景色宜人,四暑期度假的好去处。
来 到宜昌,我们第一站就是去著名的三峡帕大瀑布。那里的山很绿,而且山都是连在一起的,像骆驼的背一样,来到大瀑布旁边,我看见,大瀑布的水,是从山壁崖上 流下来的`,水流下来的时候发出哗哗的巨响,大瀑布的水很凉,我把脚伸进去,我感觉,好凉快啊!我还在水里发现许多小螃蟹,小螃蟹披着墨绿色的盔甲,长着四 对长长的脚,两只像两把大剪刀,威武极了!我连忙拿起渔网捞起来,可是我捞了半天,怎么也捞不到一只小螃蟹,真是太奇怪了!我离开了小溪,就和爸爸妈妈来 到大瀑布,我们立刻拿出刚买的雨衣,做好穿越瀑布的准备。我们穿好雨衣就走近大瀑布,我刚进去,一会儿就大叫了起来,因为风太大了,把水都吹到我身上了, 爸爸带着我走了两次,这种感觉真是太刺激了!
看完瀑布,我们又去参观了一个叫“金狮洞”的溶洞。走进溶洞我看见了很多我从来没见过的钟乳石,这些钟乳石各式各样的,有的像一只大狮子、有的像孙悟空的定海神针、还有的像武松打虎;这些钟乳石形态各异,千姿百态,让人看得眼花缭乱。
啊!神奇的宜昌风景令人难忘,在这青山叠翠,万木峥嵘、鸟雀鸣唱、瀑布声喧的童话世界里更让我体会到了宜昌的美丽。
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