2016宜昌中考英语作文(宜昌英语中考作文评分标准)

2016宜昌中考英语作文(宜昌英语中考作文评分标准)

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2016宜昌中考英语作文(宜昌英语中考作文评分标准)

2016宜昌中考英语作文【一】

长假,一个难得的休息机会。说是休息,第一念头还是想到应该怎样去玩。

今天,朋友约我出来一同去山上野炊。起着单车,在旭日的辉光照耀下,在微风与雾的朦胧的迷茫世界里任我飘荡。朋友提议与树奔跑。我们欣然同意。在湖堤上,一棵棵小树上的露珠被光反射的淋漓尽致。一棵树顺着风跑到我面前,转眼间又被稍纵即逝的风给带走了。就这样,我们不知疲倦地在湖堤上奔驰着。终于,阳光的暖意取代了快乐――日出。刹那间,一股刺眼的力量在东方一瞬间夺占了大地。停在那里,没有了在耳边呼呼作响的风声,没有了湿润的露珠,没有了朦胧的雾。取而代之的是砰砰的心跳,豆大的汗珠,在血管里奔腾的沸滚的热血。

现实与朦胧的对抗。

不久,我们租了一只船,每个人都静静的坐着,静静的思考着什麽。湖面上一片宁静。一改往日的嘈杂,少有的宁静。清风不知疲倦的与湖水嬉闹着。刹那间,那清风与清水带走了以往的怒忿,一种从未有过的人生感慨冲击着心田与思维的灵魂。

人生需要宁静。

宁静的人生!

2016宜昌中考英语作文【二】

暑假里,爸爸妈妈带我去宜昌玩。一仓是一个很有名的旅游胜地,那里山青水秀,景色宜人,四暑期度假的好去处。

来 到宜昌,我们第一站就是去著名的三峡帕大瀑布。那里的山很绿,而且山都是连在一起的,像骆驼的背一样,来到大瀑布旁边,我看见,大瀑布的水,是从山壁崖上 流下来的`,水流下来的时候发出哗哗的巨响,大瀑布的水很凉,我把脚伸进去,我感觉,好凉快啊!我还在水里发现许多小螃蟹,小螃蟹披着墨绿色的盔甲,长着四 对长长的脚,两只像两把大剪刀,威武极了!我连忙拿起渔网捞起来,可是我捞了半天,怎么也捞不到一只小螃蟹,真是太奇怪了!我离开了小溪,就和爸爸妈妈来 到大瀑布,我们立刻拿出刚买的雨衣,做好穿越瀑布的准备。我们穿好雨衣就走近大瀑布,我刚进去,一会儿就大叫了起来,因为风太大了,把水都吹到我身上了, 爸爸带着我走了两次,这种感觉真是太刺激了!

看完瀑布,我们又去参观了一个叫“金狮洞”的溶洞。走进溶洞我看见了很多我从来没见过的钟乳石,这些钟乳石各式各样的,有的像一只大狮子、有的像孙悟空的定海神针、还有的像武松打虎;这些钟乳石形态各异,千姿百态,让人看得眼花缭乱。

啊!神奇的宜昌风景令人难忘,在这青山叠翠,万木峥嵘、鸟雀鸣唱、瀑布声喧的童话世界里更让我体会到了宜昌的美丽。

2016宜昌中考英语作文【三】

导入:

第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文:

第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势

结论:

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ

2016宜昌中考英语作文【四】

你拍一,我拍一,幸福快乐每人行;

你拍二,我拍二,国泰民康事业兴;

你拍三,我拍三,歌唱美好展飞鹰;

你拍四,我拍四,校园和谐在前进;

一幅美丽的画卷,一曲悠扬的歌,伴随着歌声,唱和着乐曲,五十六族兄弟同胞庆开怀。《吉祥三宝》的歌声婉转而动听,久久萦绕在我的脑海里,这和谐的音符是我们期待已久的心声。

二十四时节气,乾坤竞秀

五十六朵奇葩,和睦同春

富饶的祖宝岛——台湾;你是祖国怀抱中不可缺少的一份子,你是我生命中的呐喊,我在呼唤,我在高昂。愿你早日回归祖国,愿海峡同胞早日同聚一堂。我愿化作千只“飞鸽”,共同祈祷,共同期待祖国统一的新篇章。

“和美丽日,沧桑正道,神州昌盛尽收颜”。

构建和谐之家是我们的共同祈盼,生活在欢歌笑语的校园里,是多么的温馨,多么的清闲。“校园风情皆欣喜,焕彩山河移入画。”张中的“毅气”依旧弥漫满园。让我们为盛世的张中划策,共同为张中的兴荣出力。

“长亭外,古道边,芳草碧连天;晚风拂柳笛声残,夕阳山外山。天之涯,地之角,知交半零落;一杯浊酒尽余欢,今宵别梦寒。”中考的钟声即将敲 响,我相信今年的那个六月将不再黑暗,我要把握住生命的咽喉,我要为我的生命添砖献瓦,我更要为祖国播撒爱的誓言。和谐的春姑娘将带着轻盈的脚步,走遍大 江南北,炫耀出世间最灿烂的彩虹;演奏出人世间最婉转的生命绝唱。

——长弘善美,乐构和谐,大业辉煌开盛世;

——锦绣中华,和字全民写;繁荣盛世,谐音回海传;

展翅雄鹰煽动着清柔的翅膀,飞翔于天际;建设新家村,构建新校园。伴随着和谐的音符,让我们打开社会之门,开辟心灵的智慧之窗!与世界同步,共创美好未来!

2016宜昌中考英语作文【五】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文:

第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法

结论:

第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法

2016宜昌中考英语作文【六】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

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