在滨海长廊旁边的树林里,从上往下看就象一片绿色的海洋。树林里,树很绿,草很青,鸟很多。一条石头铺成的路,走过整片树林,石头路的旁边有一片无边无际的大海,它叫“深圳湾”。
这是一片深蓝色的海洋,周围长着青绿色的小草,还有许多有大有小的石头也来凑热闹,一阵风吹过来,小草随风飘动,这些石头好像在看着小草舞蹈,被海浪送上岸来旅游的贝壳,有的停在沙滩上看完美丽的风景后,又被海浪送回海洋,有的被人们带到一个全新的世界。鸟是那样的多,有的横掠过海面,享受海水的凉爽,有的和风筝翩翩起舞,风在为它们伴奏,它们跳起了更加欢快的舞蹈,为深圳湾增添了许多生机。不用说,最有趣的肯定是那深蓝色的海浪了,一阵风吹过,大海唱起了歌儿,开始海浪很大,向前沖来,渐渐变小,最后在金色的沙滩上消失了。
这片大海,给我们带来了快乐,如果可以的话,我很想把海豚、海狮引过来,把这里变成一个海洋公园!
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
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