社会变迁类作文模板(社会变迁不好的作文开头)

社会变迁类作文模板(社会变迁不好的作文开头)

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社会变迁类作文模板(社会变迁不好的作文开头)

社会变迁类作文模板【一】

一进家门,有一个棕色的毯子,上面摆放着整整齐齐的拖鞋,左边有一个不大不小的厨房,里面有各种美味的食物。

在前面有一套沙发,全身都是白色的,坐上去软绵绵的,舒服极了,疲惫的时候坐上沙发,就像什么烦恼都烟消云散了,这就是我们家的沙发。

沙发旁边是我的房间,我的房间里有张又大又舒适的床,床上有省运会的吉祥物“兰兰”和“灵灵”,他们是我床上的装饰品,同时也是我的.好伙伴。再看我的写字台,我的写字台上摆放着许多课本,那排列整齐的课本,是我复习功课的好帮手。

楼上是爸爸和妈妈的房间,他们的房间里乱的不得了,每次上去玩时都要整理一番,这都是爸爸的“功劳”。尽管它很乱,但还是很漂亮,一张在地上的大软床,旁边一台台式电脑和书柜都显得非常豪华。

这就是我现在的家。

我也多想看到我未来的家是多么漂亮,一进家门便能看到一个大客厅,一个大软沙发在客厅显得多么耀眼,我还想要一个不大不小的房间,一只可爱的小狗坐在地上,我心情好时和它玩耍,心情不好时与它聊天。在我写字台旁边放一台电脑,有疑问时就让它给你解答。我最最想要的是一张漂亮的写字台,有多种功能,这样我就能快乐的写作业了,这就是我梦想中未来的家,希望能够成真!

社会变迁类作文模板【二】

一奶一一奶一却对下雨有一种天生的恐惧。只要一听到雨声,她就抬起头,仔仔细细地查看天花板,生怕屋顶哪个地方漏下雨来。

这个坏一习一惯,她到现在居然还 没改!

一奶一一奶一总是把以前她怎么急急忙忙找各种各样的盆子,在屋内接水的往事讲给我听:

“哎哟,只要一下雨,屋里就会遭殃!”

“没办法,那个时候屋顶上只有一半是瓦,还 有一半是茅草。”

“那个时候太穷了!”

每次听到这样的往事,我就会想,这样的事,真会发生在一奶一一奶一身上?我表示怀疑。因为和我自己的亲身经历太不一样了!所以一到下雨天,我就拿屋内接雨水的事逗一奶一一奶一。

一一团一白色的雾气从窗户涌了出来,涌进了院子里。我漫步进院门时,一奶一一奶一已经烧好了饭,坐在厨房门口的椅子上向我招手:“来,璐璐,准备一下,快吃饭了!”

灶膛里还 有火光,映在一奶一一奶一的'脸上,红通通的。她脸上的皱纹,也在火光的映照下舒展开来了。

“一奶一一奶一,下雨了。”我笑着说。

她的眼睛眯了起来,抬起头望望天空,又望望我,眼睛眯得更小了:“现在下雨,也不用怕啦!”

话音刚落,我们俩都“哈哈哈”地笑起来。

爸爸走进院子,问我们笑什么。

我和一奶一一奶一相视一眼,她一转身进了屋,我吐了一下舌头:“不告诉你!”

我们家现在的房子,还 是杭千高速修建后那一年造的,因为高速公路从我们村里过,我们村很多旧房子都变成了新房子。本来我们村是场口地区条件很差的一个村子,一交一通不便不说,村里连一幢像样的新房子也没有。村里人都到城里去打工,我爸爸以前也不在村里,因为村里,一级村子附近没有可以工作的地方。

现在不一样了。自从高速公路通车以后,我们村所在的这一片地区,现在成了经济开发区。我们村的旧房子全都消失了,取而代之的是一栋栋漂亮别致的小别墅,还 有一个大大的院落,一到秋天,桂花的香气就飘荡在整个村子的上空……

雨水还 在落,“滴答滴答”的声音从窗外飘进来。我们一家围坐在餐桌上,一边吃着一边谈笑风生……

这是我感到最幸福的时刻!

社会变迁类作文模板【三】

我的外公外婆生于三十年代。解放前,为了生计,外公十四岁就当童工,因为穷没有鞋穿,干活时被滚烫的铁屑烧伤过脚。外婆没钱买鞋,就拿黑布用钉子钉在木板上,做成木屐穿。这种鞋穿起来可累了。

我的爸爸妈妈生在六十年代。妈妈小时候连做梦都想有双白力士球鞋穿。那时候的学生,能有双白力士球鞋就是最幸福、最神气的事了。后来伯父送了双白力士球鞋给妈妈,妈妈爱惜极了,只在上台表演或开运动会才舍得穿。爸爸小时候穿的是军鞋,鞋子是用橡胶和帆布做的,看上去很土气,但特别结实。到了八十年代,爸妈才有了皮鞋穿。

我生在九十年代。我的鞋哪双不是色彩鲜艳,样式新奇呀!我有红色的.休闲鞋,上面绣满了奥特曼大战怪兽;我有白色的旅游鞋,后跟上带着灯,穿上它,脚上的灯会一闪一闪,提醒行人注意我的存在;我还有黄色的“狐狸嘴”棉皮鞋,鞋面看上去就像一个“狐狸嘴”,上面还有一对蝴蝶结,鞋的两侧有镶花,穿上它又漂亮又暖和。啊,对了,我还有一双令人羡慕的蓝色溜冰鞋,鞋面上两根长长的黑带子用来绑脚,鞋底由两块钢板连着,这样整个鞋子不仅可以伸长,而且还可以缩短呢!更神奇的是,鞋子底下的四个轮子,可以横着排,也可以竖着摆┅┅我的鞋子还多着呢。

三代人,三代鞋,三代人的三代鞋不仅见证了我们一家人的生活变迁,同时,也见证了吉安人民的生活变迁。

啊!家乡吉安,愿你的明天越来越美好!

社会变迁类作文模板【四】

作为煤矿子弟的我,从小到大常常从长辈们嘴里说出对义煤公司过去的种种情怀。懵懂的我听的都麻木了,总感觉他们太矫情。也许是我的成长过程享受的是公司和长辈们奋斗后带来的美好生活,而哥哥比我长几岁对岁月留给义煤和长辈们的汗水与回报,他比我更能理解长辈们的心情!在这样的成长环境中我带着好奇心观看了集团公司新出电影《变迁》,内心一次次的冲撞、眼泪一滴滴的.滑落!短短二十年老义煤的变化不是翻天覆地一个词能概括所有的。

内心第一次感动是镜头回到1996年,只有在电视剧中出现的屋子、柴火和锅碗原来它存在于我年幼无知的童年里,那是父母抚养我们最艰苦的年代;半年不发工资是个什么样的生活?上有老下有小父母是怎样坚挺过来的?雪上加霜的是公司需要改制、需要钱、需要每个人都出一份力,大家都是愁眉苦脸的几乎想要放弃了。最后到底是什么样的心境和情怀让他们没有离开公司呢?旺财挨家挨户地借钱,仿佛他的思想里从来没有像其它同事一样有要离开公司的想法。想起了长辈们的话,我的父母当时也是这样坚定地到处借钱入股,何况当初过的还是寄人篱下的生活。我被他们对企业的那份不离不弃、信念坚定的感情所震撼!

内心第二次感动是镜头入股后旺财浑身像是打了鸡血似的不断学习提升自己、工作中像得疯牛病一样努力,他把企业真正当作了自己的家、把自己真正当作了企业的主人。也许正是因为有无数像他一样的员工才有了公司“安全生产节节攀升、技术改革日新月异、员工工资持续翻番”的繁荣景象,大家各个都是洋溢着幸福的笑容;而后公司回报给大家的一个个意想不到的惊喜,便是从在市区给员工们批宅基地盖新房开始了……喜悦之余,最后旺财老婆说是跟对了公司赶上了好时代。

内心第三次感动是镜头旺财生日那一天。过了生日意味着旺财要退休了,他在公司奋斗了一辈子,公司给了他最实在的回报,儿子从矿大毕业分配到公司,买了新房娶了媳妇,一家人过上了幸福生活。离开公司那一天铁铮铮男儿留下了难以割舍的泪水。

最简单朴实的一句话“没有员工的不离不弃就不会有繁荣的企业,没有企业提供的平台就没有幸福的员工”。一滴水只有放进大海里才永远不会干涸,一个人只有当他把自己和集体事业融合在一起的时候才能最有力量。希望我们新一辈怀着一颗“吃水不忘挖丼人”的感恩之心,为实现我们的百年凯嘉梦,砥砺前行!

社会变迁类作文模板【五】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;

2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);

3.你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people 

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:

1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。

1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。

2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。

3)传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.

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