题材除了受思想内容制约以外,还要受人称、时间、场所和人物、事件数量的限制如《我的妈妈》、《我的辅导员》等题目受叙事述人称的限制,只能用第一人称来写,用别的人称就不合要求;《他们都是我的好老师》、《我的同桌》、《一件小事》、《假日新事二则》等题目受人物、事件数量的限制;《难忘的时刻》、《电影放映之前》等题目受时间的限制:《放学路上的奇遇》、《赛场见闻》等题目受场所的限制。在审题中,一定要帮助学生弄清题目中规定的题材范围。这样才不会在取材范围上偏离题目。
写人必记事,记事必写人。写人尽管必记事,但叙述的重点是通过具体事件,表现人物的语文、行为等,来刻划人物的性格,揭示人物的精神风貌。写事尽管必写人,但写人是为写事服务的,叙述的重点不在表现人物的语文行动,刻划人物的性格上,而是通过事件因果过程生动具体的叙述来表现主题。
何谓写人,何谓记事,小学生往往分不清楚,因此必须首先在指导学生的过程中,反上面这些简单的分辨标准教给学生。在此基础上,让学生依据题目,判断文章应该是写人的还是记事的。一般来说,我们给小学生命的作文题都有明显的,利于学生审题的文字标志。审题时应该提示学生注意。例如,《我们的老师》《我心目中的妈妈》、《助人为乐的红领巾》等文题中有"老师"、"妈妈"、"红领巾"表示人物信号标志的中心词,因此这类文章是写人的。《印象深刻的一件事》《放学路上的奇遇》《在回家的公共汽车上》、《难忘的星期天》等文章中有表示事件、场所、时间信号标志的中心词,因此这类文章一般是词的。学生掌握了这些,就会避免由于审题不清,写人写事发生错位的现象。
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转眼间,我已经13岁了,正在我13岁了时候,你离开店,就像天打雷劈一样,劈了我,我害怕你离开我,可是你偏偏离开了,同时我也想明白了,我不应该阻挡你,男儿当自强,我没有权利干涉你。
从小,你就像父亲一样教育我,包容我,我记得,家里刚安上电脑时,那时候我才9岁吧,我不会玩电脑,你不教我,我便自己玩了起来,慢慢地我自己学会了玩电脑,但是我从不玩游戏,在上面不知道干什么,老是你霸占电脑,可是渐渐地我看着你,我知道了有QQ这种东西的存在,我缠着你,给我也申请个号。
你嫌我烦,就给我申请,但你当问我昵称叫什么?我说:平安在心。当时你并没有问我是什么意思,我告诉你:那时候你开摩托车,开得很快,很容易出危险,现在也一样,只不过不是摩托车了,我不止为你一个人而起的,我希望爸爸和你一样能牢牢记住平安在心中。
自从那以后,我也爱上电脑,家里便有了热闹可看,你我争电脑,争来争去的`,你给我零花钱,让我去买好吃,我那时把钱一花,又回来了,看着你,和你又争,你不玩了,说你有事,把电脑给我,其实你在让我。
我每次该到了,你就说,你要考到前三名,送你……,就算我没考好,你还是送我了,可是你有的礼物也不给我。
你的对我好的时候非常好,坏的时候非常坏,我喜欢你这样对我,可是我总不明白,你心里明明爱着珍姨姨,珍姨姨也爱着你,你们为什么不能在一起那,我那次听你们谈话说姨姨你是不能接受,可是这样好残忍埃
我问珍姨姨,可是我知道了,相爱的人未必能在一起,看着你晕晕混混和一个你不喜欢的人订婚,我看着心痛啊,我替珍姨姨感到悲伤啊,也许你们大人的事情,我不该管。
可是,我不想看着我最爱的大大,跳进火坑,我却无能为力,也许这是上天对你的考验。
大大,从现在开始,我会好好学习的,为我而学,也是报答你的最好方法。
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Dear English teacher,
I went on a trip to Hainan today with my family .We went there by plane. After we got off the plane, we went to the beach to see the beautiful sand and swim there. There were other people there too. Some people were surfing and some people were diving in the deeper part of the sea. Afterwards we had lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach. We ate seafood like shrimps and craps, and drank some abalone soup.We all didn't want to go home because the scenery was so beautiful, and there were so many other exciting things to try,but sadly it was time for us to go. It was definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance to go there again, i will be more than happy to visit the place again.
Best wishes for you!
yours,
During the summer vacation, my father and mother took my sister and I to Dalian. My brother and I had a good time at the high tide adventure palace in Xinghai Park.
My sister and I sat on the adventure boat excitedly and began to move forward. The ship flashed along with the speed of the water. Suddenly, the ship turned a bend, entered a dark cave, and there was no five fingers in it, and the horrible bats sounded. Our boat rose, seven or eight meters high, and immediately swooped down to the top, splashing four or five meters of water. The ship continued to move forward, and there was a faint light in the depths of the cave.
When the boat approached, we were surprised to see that many dinosaurs were realistic. If you don't look at it carefully, you really need to be scared. These dinosaurs were all big mouths and looked terrible. The water is speeding up, a sharp bend, and we are coming to the "ape man world". In the dense forest, we can see the vivid figures of our ancestors. Some of them sit on the grass, watch around a round object, hang on trees, and wash their faces and feet at the water. Suddenly, a huge crab lay on the water and blocked our way. The smart elder sister just put her head down and just passed. I also lowered my head and tried, but no way, I squatted down in the bottom of the cabin. Hey, it was really successful.
Just through an obstacle, suddenly the water stopped, so we had to row ourselves by boat. My sister and I worked together and rowed vigorously. After about 20 minutes, we reached the finish line and ended this exciting and interesting adventure tour.
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i went to three cities to play during last summer holidays. they are beijing, dalian and huhehot. i went to beijing more than eight times. beijing is the capital of china. it’s a big city. i am very familiar with beijing. it takes an hour and forty minutes from nantong to beijing by plane. there are many tall buildings in beijing. it’s a modern city. my family visited the great wall, the summer palace, the palace museum, the beihai park, the space museum, etc.
i went to the countryside of beijing to go boating and fishing. it was very interesting. i went shopping in wangfujing. i bought lots of souvenirs and other things. i like eating beijing snacks. they are delicious. don’t miss beijing duck. it is really nice. dalian is a beautiful city. dalian is close to beijing. i spent 5o minutes on the plane. dalian is near the sea. i smelled the salt in the air. the roads are clean. there are lots of trees and flowers near the roads. there are many esplanades and japanese buildings. there are some fountains in one of the esplanades. some people flew kites and walked on the esplanades. we went to see the beach and the sea. the sea is blue. there were many swimmers in the sea. i lay on the beach to see the sky. dalian is a very nice place to live in. huhehot is in inner mongol. there are lots of large grasslands. the grasslands are endless. the sky is bright blue. there were a lot of horses and sheep. they were running or eating grass. i rode a horse on the grassland.
i picked some colourful flowers. we drank tea with milk. there is a small desert, it was very hot when i walked on it. the sand could sing. these trips helped me open my eyes. i enjoyed my day.
This may day Dad took me to climb Huashan, where all the plants and trees were unforgettable.
I have been to Jincheng Mountain in Yilong, where fruit trees are everywhere and green grass is everywhere. But I can't compare to the beauty of Huashan; I have been to the east mountain of Deyang, where the mountains are green and green, but they are still not as strange as Huashan; I have also been to the Zhongjing Pingshan, where there are many places of interest, but not in Huashan.
As soon as I set foot on the Huashan Road, I saw a mountain peak rising from the ground, and a dark green light on the mountain. I looked at it. Dad said, "Hey, go." I went up and said, "Daddy, look, what a beautiful view!"
As I walked, I saw that the mountain peak was bare and grotesque. Under such conditions, trees were still growing. There is a mountain with these one or two trees long, far from seeing, the mountain is different, the mountain is like the tota Li, the tree is the tower, how angry! We see a national protection tree - the Sophora japonica, more than 500 years history. The tree is thick and oval - dense and oval, and the more I climb, the more scared it is, but the joy is my motivation, and my family and I continue to climb and climb higher. I saw Xifeng. It was the place where incense sticks to save the mountain. I jumped up with joy. Then I walked a long way, and I saw the long sky plank road, which was connected by a plank on the edge of the mountain. Look at that 1000 foot building, straight up 87 degrees slope, straight into the sky.
The listens say: the sunrise in Huashan and the sea of clouds are also beautiful. The sun just rose from the horizon, the first to show a lovely smiling face...... Hey, down the mountain, ride the cable car, so high! On the cable car to see this side of the mountain is different. How fast can I believe that every passing pile on the cable car is very fast, and when it reaches the foot of the hill?
Time is too fast, or I'll conquer it again.
How bright the June sun is, and the bright sunshine brings us to the same heart. It's like this: Dad took a camera from school and took pictures for us these days. Dad organized us to play together today. In the afternoon, we rode on motorcycles and walked on the same road.
On the way, I was in a good mood when I suddenly saw a blue sea, the sea breeze blowing my body, comfortable, the sea breeze seemed to blow into my heart, blowing out all the unhappiness in my heart.
Soon we came to Shiyuan. We just walked into the poetry garden. Before I took the two step, I came to the gate. I thought, "Oh! How nice it is to take a picture here, so I hastened to shout, "Dad, please come and take Zhang Xiang to me." Dad hurriedly came over and took a picture of me with a click. Then we went on, when I found one of the rocks, just one that could make me do something, and when I was sitting, my father came over to give me a picture. We ran to the place where there was water and came to the side of the sea. I thought, why not take a picture with the sea? I put my posture ready for a picture. Dad came over again and gave me a picture.
At this time we came to the place where there was a pavilion, and everyone was ready to see this good place. You see your sister's posture so beautiful, and the brother also put a posture in the mother's arms. I started to prepare, when I suddenly saw a stone made goose. What I want to ride on it, how impressive and impressive. I got on the goose on top of it. Dad came to take a picture of me. My sister came to take a picture of the little fish next to him.
Then we came to the mosque, because we didn't have enough time, so we hurriedly made several photos.
When Dad took us to a place, there were two ships, and I wanted to experience the experience of the ship as a ship, but the steamer was not there. So we don't have a steamer.
I am very happy today.
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