【以灵山六峰山游记为例】
引导孩子你到六峰山景区玩,在山脚下你看到了什么?有什么感想?——到半山腰时你看到了什么?听到了什么?你做了些什么?——在山顶你有什么感受?你看到了什么呢?
随着电子技术的发展,智能手机充斥着市场,受到人们的热烈追捧。苹果手机的更新换代更是在转眼之间,各种热门软件也跟风相继出现。
手机使人们客观之前的距离缩短了。表达思念的信件卡片似乎已经过时了。一封电子邮件,一条短信,更加省时也更加方便。
每年过节都会收到祝福的短信。这些短信可以说是词藻华丽,语句优美。不知道你读完之后是什么感觉呢,是开心还是失落呢?这些短信多数是群发,而不是亲笔之作。
现在就行出一个新的名词"低头族"。所谓低头族就是无时无刻都在低头看手机的人群。过马路,公交车,还有排队。低头族随处可见,而且他们引发的交通事故也并不少见。
刷屏,微博,微信。这些已经成为手指间上的游戏。不停的刷着朋友圈,是害怕别人忽略了你的'存在,但是没有你的刷屏,太阳依旧会升起。
我曾看过一个漫画,饭桌上,一家人坐在一起,除了老人,连幼儿园的小孩子都在看手机。老人只好默默地离开。大作家莫言他的手机不是智能的,而是一部能接打电话的老人机。当记者询问他缘由的时候,莫言淡然的说他不想让手机拉开了他与家人的距离。
手机,利弊共存。我们要利用好它。不要让手机忽视了你的亲人。
终于登顶了,此时你的感受是怎样的?累?兴奋?开心?
怎样表现你的感受?大声喊叫?大笑?交流?
向山下眺望你看到了什么?
【范例】
历尽千辛万苦,终于到山顶了,我气喘吁吁地跑到亭子的栏杆边靠着,迫不及待的在这享受高峰之风。一边平息内心的兴奋与激动,一边向下眺望,灵山全景尽收眼底,仿佛我在天上,灵山在地下。我心中的话一吐而出:“会当临绝顶,一览灵山小!”
nowadays, we can see some boys and girls who live in a small world of their own. they bury themselves among books and are proud of themselves. they think that it will make them lose their face if they do housework for they often think themselves very noble.
these young people are wrong. in my opinion every student should have a knowledge of housework. after all, they will have a family of their own, and they should do their part in keeping a good home. boys should also learn to do housework, for what will they do if they remain single? though not all boys remain single,yet they will be very helpful in the family if they know some housework. anyhow they will not lose anything, but, on the contrary, they will gain something useful.
for what i said above, we can find some eamples of our fellow-students studying abroad. all young men do housework as girls do. someone would argue that we can employ servants. this is true.however, what shall we do if the servant leaves us and all things are left to ourselves? we just cannot leave our clothes as they are and let worms and ants eat them up. and what can we do it we go and study in a foreign country where servants are out our means to employ? we must work for ourselves. why not start to learn to do housework now or else it will be too late? everyone should learn to do housework. what do you think about my idea, boys and girls?
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