November **, ****
To Whom It May Concern:
This is to confirm that Mr. Li Dashui has worked as a full-time system analyst in the NY University since Jun 1994(or This letter is to verify that Mr. Li Dashui worked as an chemist from July 1993 to Sept. 1994. Mr. Lis main duties and responsibilities are as follows:
Design, develop and install various computer hardware, software and network systems for banks.
Determine and analyze the requirements of each system project into related componets solved through the application of computer technology.
Write specifications for computer programs, and test and implement programs for network systems and control systems.
Supervise computer programmers and other system analysts for paticular system projects.
Mr. Li has mainly taken part in the following projects:
The first engineering design of city general business computer network system.
Upgrading banks system for IBM AS/400 E45 to IBM AS/400 320, IBM AS/400 530.
The design development and test of city general business computer network system.
The design and development network and database systems for the Golden Credit Card Project.
Mr. Li is well experienced with IBM AS/400 system analysis, TCP/IP protocol, SNA protocol and LAN; proficient in RPGIII, VB, C/C++ and DB2, and skilled in UNIX, Informix, Client/Server etc.
Mr. Li is a hard-working and talented analyst, and is highly respected member in our company. If you need further information, please feel free to contact me. Sincerely yours, Singature, Zhang Jianguo
Senior Engineer and Technical Manage Company Name, Address, Tex Fax
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
我有一个小伙伴,标准的瓜子脸,一头浓密的黑发,两只浓眉大眼,再加上一副黑色的眼镜,看起来很有学问的样子,他就是我的好朋友刘阳。
前几天,风和日丽,阳光明媚,万里无云,一年一度的学校运动会在区体育场拉开序幕。同学们怀着激动的心情来到了看台上。我既高兴又紧张又兴奋,因为我马上要参加400米竞赛了。
“请六年级参加400米的同学到主席台集合”,听着广播中的通知,我知道终于到我大展身手的时候了。我心想,400米是我最擅长的项目,只要发挥正常就一定可以取得前三名。我在心里默默给自己加油打气,同我一起参加的还有刘阳。他比我跑得慢,但它同样不容小觑。我们在一起在起跑线做准备活动。
“砰!”只听一声枪响划破了长空,顿时我的杂念飞到了九霄云外,奋力地迈开大步奔跑起来。在一开始的时候我稳居第二名,落下第三名好远,但我定睛一看,第一名竟是刘洋,他怎么可能跑第一名?不行,我一定要超过他,不然会被同学们笑话的。比赛进入了白热化阶段,其他选手都渐渐没有了体力,而我却暗暗自喜。哼,我还留着体力呢,我一定要超过刘洋取得第一名。
正当我想加速时,脚底下突然拌蒜,我诶呦大叫一声,重重地摔在了跑道上。看台上的观众发出一片惊叹,我感到尴尬极了,脸涨得跟苹果一样红。正当我想挣扎起来时,只见一双温暖的手把我搀扶起来,我抬头一看,正是刘阳。他对我说:“你没事吧?有没有受伤?”我被他搀着,一瘸一拐撤出了跑道。这时,第三名已经冲到了我们面前,一眨眼到了终点。我握着刘洋的手,那不争气的眼泪像断了线的珍珠一样,涌出眼眶。刘洋为了看看我有没有受伤,失去了几乎到手的第一名,这是多么伟大的友谊呀。赛场上想起了热烈的掌声,刘洋笑着安慰我说:“朋友比第一更重要”!
这就是刘阳,我的好兄弟,我的好伙伴!
圆滚滚的身材,胖嘟嘟的脸,一副萌萌的样子特别可爱,可若是你看到他的小嘴在蠕动,甭问,他绝对又是在吃零食了。
我的这个小伙伴叫小宇,他身高中等,横向发展却很厉害,尤其是四五年级时,体重暴增,原本一个帅帅的小伙子就升级为一个胖墩儿,这一切都和他那张永不停歇的嘴有关系。
一天,我到他家玩,进了门,茶几上摆放的各种小零食吸引了我的眼球:薯片、海苔、干果、进口食品应有尽有,半个月才能吃一袋零食的我顿时看呆了。“这……你能吃这么多零食?”“嗯,当然,这只是一小部分呢。走,我带你见识见识我的粮仓去。”他走到阳台,将几个大箱子搬出,把箱子盖掀起,“喏,怎么样?我的零食多不多?”箱子里琳琅满目,各种小食品数不胜数,就像一个浓缩的食品小超市啊!他友好大方地取出许多零食给我吃,我们俩边看电视边吃零食,多么悠闲惬意的时光啊!那一天里,我的体重怕是也直线上升了一公斤吧……
受到了零食的诱惑与吃货小伙伴的感染,我也控制不住自己的嘴巴而越来越贪吃,每当妈妈让我减肥时,我总说:“不急,您看小宇不是比我还胖,不也没事吗?以后再说吧……”
可这个一直被我当做挡箭牌的小宇居然开始减肥了……
一天,我们相约去公园玩,为了解决温饱问题,我特意带了两个肉松面包准备和他一起分享。谁知,一向号称吃货的他,居然没有接受美食,委婉地拒绝了我,还幽默地对我说:“肉松,肉松,吃多了肉就会松,我正减肥呢!”“你不馋吗?”我疑惑地问,“当然馋,但也要克制,只有减肥我才能再变帅啊,虽然很辛苦,但也要坚持。”
哈哈,这家伙,竟说得我无言以对了,那两个面包自然是安然无恙地归来了,因为我也要加入减肥队伍了。
现在,我们俩用管住嘴,多动腿的方法,一起锻炼一起减肥,我们俩的体重都在一点点下降中,看来,这个“伙伴减肥法”还真是有效啊!
蔚蓝的天空中挂着一轮火红的圆日,下面是一座美丽的山城,到处是长长的街道。一条宽阔的马路上,一个十一二岁的少年骑着自行车,鼻子上沁出晶莹的汗珠,双手悠闲地垂在身体两侧,双脚飞快地蹬着脚踏板。
这少年便是我的小伙伴——李浩宇。他与我同岁,但个子比我高出许多。每到下课,他都会第一个冲向操场,足球网前有他快活的身影,单双杠下由他灵动的身姿......
我知道李浩宇的骑车技术十分精湛。有一日,我便要他给我表演一下,他爽快地答应了。于是他跨上车子,两手紧紧地握着车把,右脚踏在脚踏板上,左脚踩在地上。他右脚使劲一蹬,左脚迅速收起,双脚齐用力,自行车像注入活力似的,一眨眼的工夫就跑出去好远。突然,一个急刹车,自行车的后轮高高地抬起,随即又落下。我愣住了,生怕他摔倒。谁知他又弓着腰,双手紧握车把,双脚在半空中飞快地画了一个又一个圆。渐渐的,速度越来越快。他两只手完全离开 车把,身子立得直直的,像根竹竿,但自行车还是飞快地奔跑着。我看着都有些担心,但他依旧神情自然,毫不惧怕。他还给我表演了:抬前轮和漂移。每当表演完李浩宇的嘴角总是微微上扬,摆出一副很得意的样子。他似乎很喜欢漂移时发出的那一声响,每次都会做出很享受的样子。
我看了他的表演,心里十分羡慕,便走到他身边,说:“你骑得真好呀!”李浩宇骄傲地回答:“那当然。”“你的技术这么好,当我的教练没问题。”“好的,星期天到我家来,我教你。”
我便日日盼望星期天,可总是没有机会。终于有一天,阳光明媚,温暖的阳光驱走了往日的寒冷,正是个骑车的好日子,我俩相约来到体育场。“首先教你最简单的抬后轮。”李浩宇一边给我示范,一边说,“先把车子骑快一点,再猛得一刹前闸,就可以了。但是要记住一点,一定要保持平衡。”我点点头,接过车子,学着他的样子做,把车子骑得飞快,猛一刹前闸,摔了个人仰马翻。他说:“别着急,慢慢来,我是练了好多次才成功的。”说着,他得意地甩了甩头发,跨上车子来了个漂亮的漂移。后来,他又教了我几个花样,但我都没有学会。可见,冰冻三尺非一日之寒啊。
这就是我的小伙伴—— 一个骑车技术高超而又爱耍酷的.阳光男孩。
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