Early morning,sun farther—in—law showed smiling face,small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries,seem to saying:“Beautiful,should get up!Should get up!!
Li Lixing,see sun farther—in—law came out,asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress,wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment,transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry,li Li looks up to look,a birdie is crying,seem to saying:“Li Li has breakfast quickly,I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly,carry small satchel on the back,go to school together with birdie。
我和我的表弟表妹来到了潘州公园,我和我的表弟就用了五块钱打枪战,一共五十发子弹,我和我的表弟的枪法不是很好,所以,五十发子弹只打爆了五十个气球,我们旁边有一个枪法很好的一个大哥哥十发子弹打爆了二十个气球,因为,它很有耐心,一动不动,每发子弹都是一箭双雕,不过时间很久,我表妹在玩涂色,我和我表弟打完枪了。我们看到表妹在涂陶娃娃,我们就来帮我表妹涂,我们涂着涂着就涂成科学怪人了,全身上下,有五颜六色的点脸都变成了黑色的,变成了五颜六色的`了,身子也是五颜六色的,我们一人好几种颜色,每种颜色,一人一笔。
后来,我们玩累了,就走去玩游戏机,我们每人十一个游戏币,我们就去玩游戏机,我表弟傻傻的,就玩那些只亏不赚的游戏,我和我的表妹去玩其他游戏,我们都赚了好多游戏币,我们就分了一大半给我表弟,我告诉他不要去玩只亏不赚的游戏,他还是傻傻的去玩,最后,我们的游戏币都玩光了,我们就去看僵尸来了的恐怖电影,把我吓得一整晚都没睡觉。后来,我们又玩了一下跳跳床,跳的我们晕乎乎的,全身上下都痛,因为,跳跳床的弹力太大了。
后来,我们吃了一喜欢牛杂就一起回家吃晚饭了。
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
我和我的表弟表妹来到了潘州公园,我和我的表弟就用了五块钱打枪战,一共五十发子弹,我和我的表弟的枪法不是很好,所以,五十发子弹只打爆了五十个气球,我们旁边有一个枪法很好的一个大哥哥十发子弹打爆了二十个气球,因为,它很有耐心,一动不动,每发子弹都是一箭双雕,不过时间很久,我表妹在玩涂色,我和我表弟打完枪了。我们看到表妹在涂陶娃娃,我们就来帮我表妹涂,我们涂着涂着就涂成科学怪人了,全身上下,有五颜六色的点脸都变成了黑色的,变成了五颜六色的了,身子也是五颜六色的,我们一人好几种颜色,每种颜色,一人一笔。
后来,我们玩累了,就走去玩游戏机,我们每人十一个游戏币,我们就去玩游戏机,我表弟傻傻的,就玩那些只亏不赚的`游戏,我和我的表妹去玩其他游戏,我们都赚了好多游戏币,我们就分了一大半给我表弟,我告诉他不要去玩只亏不赚的游戏,他还是傻傻的去玩,最后,我们的游戏币都玩光了,我们就去看僵尸来了的恐怖电影,把我吓得一整晚都没睡觉。后来,我们又玩了一下跳跳床,跳的我们晕乎乎的,全身上下都痛,因为,跳跳床的弹力太大了。
后来,我们吃了一喜欢牛杂就一起回家吃晚饭了。
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