今天,我读了一本很有意义的书叫《荒野求生》,作者是英国的著名求生专家贝尔·格里尔斯。
这本书讲了在非洲旅行的贝克和彼得,无意中发现了钻石xx的事情,并误入了xx者的飞机,被迫跳伞到了炎热的撒哈拉大沙漠,这是个死亡之地,在这里,贝克和彼得要面对中暑、冻死、脱水等危险,最后贝克和彼得终于克服了各种困哪,走到一个村子最后成功获救。
我最喜欢的是书中彼得中暑,贝克努力想办法球员,贝克细心照料彼得,自后他们终于知道到了一下片没人居住的小绿洲,在那里丰富的水源和食物救活了彼得。
我很敬佩贝克,他有那么丰富的野外求生只是,他面对困哪时沉着泠静,冰动手动脑解决问题,我也很敬佩彼得的勇敢。在沙漠里没有食物,他们要吃蝎子、虫子、蜥蜴等动物。
这真是一本有意义的好书啊,让我懂得了:“一个人永远不要失去希望,而且要一直微笑。”还让我懂得许多野外求生知识,真让我受益匪浅!希望大家也都来读一读吧!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
在1965年5月8号上午,英国一架开往巴黎的飞机,突然在途中与雷达失去了联系,降落在一座荒岛上。
那荒岛上,环境十分恶劣,但旅客们不得不下来,这些旅客中,有人是摄影师,有人是便衣警察,有人是渔夫……,他们想从行李中找出有关救援的东西,可惜他们的行李都因飞机进水浸湿了。呆久了,身边也没有什么吃的,肚子都饿得咕咕在叫,大家个个垂头丧气,无精打采,像泄了气的皮球一样。
机长见了,连忙安抚大家说∶我们可以先生火,再看看海中有没有鱼可以捕来充饥,先解决吃的吧!大家好像看到了希望一样,由机长安排分工,一些人生火,一些人去找吃的。
可是,吃的还没找到,有人就中暑了,因饥饿、缺水晕了过去。渔夫失去耐心地说∶你看!机长,晕了那么多人,哪来什么的希望?
不行,我们继续找!留几个人照顾他们就行了,我们要活下去!机长坚定地说道。机长真不愧是个头。
我反对!你们这是见死不救!一位妇女说道。
旅客们喋喋不休发狂吵了一个多小时。有的在哭,有的'在埋怨,有的在想办法。这时,机长说∶你们安静一点,听我说……
机长还未说完,又被争吵声打断了,他顿时来气了!怒吼一声∶安静!那声音像狮子怒吼一样,人们顿时安静了下来,惊讶地看着机长。
见大家安静了下来,机长语气温和了许多,语重心长地说∶现在不是争吵的时候,我们应该团结起来,一起克服困难,想想我们该如何找方法回去。
这番话让大家冷静了下来,可却不知道怎么回去。
我们先不冒险,先找一下食物。旅客们默认了这个方案,三五成群地去找食物。可老天爷仿佛像在逗弄人们一样,让太阳回家了。天黑了,看不清环境了,大家一凑,只有三四条鱼。
机长怕大家又失去信心,鼓励说道∶旅客们!我们有吃的了!虽然少,但也是有吃的,有吃的就有了希望!大家听了,于是有了精神。
大家开始生火,在互相合作下,火越烧越旺,有人主动烤起了鱼来,虽然只有三四条,但大家也知足了,分着充饥。
第二天早上,机长对大家说∶今天我们来想想如何求救吧!大家的讨论结果都不一样,有的说大声呼救,有的说穿上鲜艳的衣服跑来跑去,还有的说就住在岛上等。
这时,摄影师说∶要不我们用石头摆救援信号?这个建议得到了大家的赞同,于是分头去搬来石头。你一块,他一块,终于凑到了不少石头,大家帮忙摆出了SOS的救援信号。
终于,在第二个月后的7月8号那天,一架飞机看见了救援信号,将那群落难的旅客救了回去。
这真是一场令人难忘的荒岛求生啊……
在这个寒假里,爸爸妈妈给我买了一套书,它的名字叫《荒野求生》。
他是由野外生存大师贝尔格里尔斯创作的作品。他将自己所有的.野外生存经验都写进了这本小说,书中描述了很多种的生存技巧,和解决问题的方法,它引导我们不要放弃希望,只要活着就有希望。
这本书主要讲的是:在很多的困境中,主人公少年贝克没有水、也没有食物,他就用自己的双手和智慧去度过重重难关,最后,他成功从困境中走了出来的故事。
其中,我最喜欢的片段是去非洲旅行的贝克和他的朋友彼得,在一次旅游途中,他们无意中发现了钻石xx者的秘密,被迫跳伞落到了炎热的沙漠,他们就得寻找岩石来度过寒冷的黑夜,有岩石的地方比较安全,借助星星来辨别方向,在太阳升起前用石头取水,太阳升起时水分会被蒸发……当他们经历千辛万苦才找到一个神秘的村庄,刚刚走过去,以为自己获救时,却看到xx者拿着枪出现在村子门口……最后,他们凭智慧抓住了xx者,脱离的危险。
《荒野求生》这套书告诉了我很多生存方法,比如:造床不能造在地上,要不然会被地上的虫子咬伤的,要找人的踪迹可以看脚印的方向和被踩过的树枝来辨别,还有赤脚过河只能有十分钟,要不然会体温太低而死亡……它还告诉了我一个道理:不要放弃,坚持就是成功。
荒野求生是一部野外生存小说,贝尔和他的朋友缇堪尼由于飞机坠落而在白狼荒原上求生的故事。
平时我们都生活在繁华的都市,没有去过可怕的荒野,读了这本书,让我懂得很多野外生存的技巧,贝尔把瓶子在二分之一处截开,把上部倒插入瓶底,这样一来就变成外大里小,只要放上虫子,就万事俱备——只欠东风,鱼儿会经不住美食的诱惑,愚蠢的钻进布置的“大口袋",现在鱼儿插翅难逃,从中我感到贝尔的聪明,在险境面前会利用手中的一切生存。
贝尔不仅非常机智、聪明,面对困难时显出镇静和过人的勇敢,贝尔和朋友们曾在普齐尔托克瀑布附近碰到强壮的黑熊,冒着寒光的母熊朝他们赶过来,要把他们一口吞掉似的,贝尔非常镇定,就地缩成一团,一动不动趴在地上,无论棕熊怎么对他低吼、推搡,他都无动于衷。
贝尔面对困难总是保持微笑,贝尔相信只要活着就会有希望,一切皆有可能,只要努力,任何事物都可能被你改变。有一次我在做数学时,一道题就像凶猛的老虎拦住了我,经过一阵绞尽脑汁的思考,还是没有什么进展,心中打起了退堂鼓,脑中有两个小人互相争吵,一个说:“只要努力,就会成功”,一个说:“这么难,还是别做了。”最终我选择了挑战困难,我要向他学习。
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