五年级英语作文旅行云丘山【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文旅行云丘山【二】
拥有超能力只是人们的臆想，这样的电影剧情也不算创意无限。电影总归是艺术，它不是为了证明自己是真实的，只是为了让我们从故事中领悟到生活的一些含义。
最初的剧情，让我想到这也许会是一个为了追求女孩而发生了很多囧事，然后不断穿越弥补这些错误的故事，可电影刚刚开始30分钟，还剩下四分之三的剧情，如果真是这样的发展，那么真要归到轻松喜剧的影片类别了。
然而不记得从何处开始，剧情忽然变得严肃了，就好像奇巧问他的哥哥：你是什么时候变得这么严肃的？蒂姆回答：从我差点失去你的那一刻起。好的影片也不会失去每一个打开它的观众。
蒂姆的生活就像普通的每一个人，充满了烦恼、挫折、不顺，当然也有欣喜和快乐。每一天都这样平凡地经历着，我们常常只关注了生活中那些消极的事情，压力、不满、甚至生气。如果我们也有机会把今天重新过一次，就算我们不去改变什么，只是去欣赏一下生活中的那些被我们遗落的美好，是不是我们的心灵会纯净许多呢。
父亲的癌症是因为吸烟，父亲也说过，这是改变不了的，在你出生以前我就吸烟，而且你的妈妈正是因为我吸烟时很帅才肯嫁给我。当面临生命中最重要的这个男人将要离开自己时，我们能够做什么呢。
我们可以像以前一样，穿越回去，和父亲一起打乒乓球，看着父亲自己拿着球拍挥舞着说：没有球的时候我简直就是完美的！甚至穿越更久一些，穿上童装和父亲在沙滩上比外漂流石子。可是每当我们回去经历一次时，自己的孩子都会变得不一样。当我们真正面临这种选择时，什么才应该是理智的呢？
生命中有些人是一定会失去的，我们的亲人，陪伴我们走过朝夕的父母。然后生活还会继续，生命中还会出现新的生命。这新生命带来的希望也是无与伦比的。如果我们因为要穿越回去和父亲度过一个美好的午后，而失去了一个自己心爱又寄予厚望的新生命，我们会如何抉择呢？
蒂姆选择了在孩子出生前最后一次穿越回去和父亲度过了美好的一天，从此之后，父子便是永别。而用所有的经历去和自己生命的延续——这个新生命一起度过今后的生活。
我们没有穿越时空的能力，蒂姆最后也不再使用这样的能力了：我现在从不穿越回过去，一天也不，我努力过好每一天，就像我已经穿越回去一样，我努力享受每一天，就像它是我平凡又非凡的生命中的最后一天。
我们生命中的每一天，都是在时间中旅行，我们所能做的就是：尽我们所能，珍惜这段美好的旅程。
五年级英语作文旅行云丘山【三】
强烈推荐《时空恋旅人》这部电影，片中男主拥有穿越时空的能力，能回去过去改变过去，他用这个能力来追求爱，回到过去给对方最好的回忆，无论是第一次与初恋的告白，还是遇到灵魂伴侣的相爱。虽然能回到过去，但是你依然没有办法改变别人是否爱你，依然需要理解、感受和相爱。大千世界，平凡的我们总是梦想这拥有一个完美的人生。
不会做错事，不会说错话，不会遭遇挫折，不会偶遇尴尬，甚至一切都不会失败。结婚那天一定晴空万里阳光明媚，面试当天一定劈关斩将直步青云，与旧时恋人相遇那日一定淡定自若落落大方。当你遇上一段可能即将演变成异地恋的感情，即使两人暧昧，但最终还是决定不要开始为好。但我们在排除一切阻碍我们在原定轨道上运行的干扰因素的同时。
可能也排除了与幸福相遇的可能。人生最美好的，恰恰是那些不期而遇。喜欢女主的风格，英式复古小清新，男主穿越的能力应该叫“时间膨胀”效应吧，虽然男主通过穿越改变或挽回了一些事情，也帮助了别人，但父亲的癌症却是无法改变的……但我们怎样过每一天是可以。最后一段好戳啊。世界这么大，却没有什么能够永恒，即使是可以穿越时空的旅人，也终归要学会离别。
而大多数人都是活在每一秒间的普通人，所以我们总要学会安放每一秒钟的自己，珍惜当下的每一个瞬间。一直对时间充满好奇，所以也偏爱这类电影，当一个人拥有与众不同的能力，或许会迷失自我，也或许会选择，仅仅让生活变得有趣，剧中的父亲让我印象深刻，他告诉儿子他挖掘出了。本以为是搞笑电影。没想到却被它温暖到。我们所能做的就是，尽我们所能，珍惜这段美妙的旅程。
很喜欢这句话。让我们珍惜生命的每一天，让我们彼此共勉！科幻作为轻盈外衣，伴着佐料有笑有泪温馨细腻，感悟了人与人交汇的温暖，懂得每个遗憾都值得珍惜，每个瞬间都胜过永恒。男主有回到过去的超能力，是一个善良的人，帮助女孩在跨年派对缓解尴尬，给初恋告白，最后找到真爱。无论你回去几次，只为重新感受被自己忽略的平凡世界的美好。
其实电影最强烈的线是父子，父亲告诉儿子这个能力，告诉他如何幸福。儿子在父亲的葬礼上回到过去和父亲再进行一次心灵的交谈，最感动这部分。帮助妹妹逃离渣男，却因此使自己的女儿变成了儿子。但还是回归正常世界。总之，整部电影特别温馨，充满人生哲理，细微之处感受美好。人生可能性那么多，只是一点细节的更改其实对于别人的人生无关紧要啊。都是沧海一粟的普通人，拥有这么奇妙的能力，做一点微妙的改变，很浪漫。
第一次觉得台风天结婚是一件温暖到不行的事。最后看着父亲牵着儿子的手在海边散步，哭到整个人大崩溃。挺好的啊，最后还是要向前走，毕竟未来才是最重要的事。这个故事很大的温暖的点，就是里面的人，基本都是善良的，如果稍微爸爸或者儿子自私或者贪婪，绝对就是灾难片，估计每天都要回放，细思极恐，幸好这是个温暖的善意的`故事，他们的父子之情，真的是暖心的，当他们夫妻俩讨论要不要要第三个孩子的时候，确定不是在黑我的祖国，另外女主真的好美。
五年级英语作文旅行云丘山【四】
在很多电影推荐名单上看到这部电影，终于我抽空看了看。用到了抽空这个词，因为不知是我出了问题还是所有人都这样，大学并不是我从前十八年想象的那么美好，我被各种各样的事牵扯住，明明忙得连吃饭睡觉的时间都没有，却偏生胡思乱想了起来，想起来，我缺少很多东西：亲情，爱情，友情……
大概它能治愈我，抱着这样的想法，我看了这部电影。
影片一开头是Tim无厘头式的一家人的介绍，节奏快却给人留下深刻印象，轻易地就将配角的生命力表现出来，于是乎，在开头的几分钟，我就喜欢上了Tim的一家人，尤其喜欢爸爸。Tim与爸爸的关系是完美的父子关系，单凭他俩年复一年的乒乓球较量就足以证明。在中国，父子关系通常不会特别和谐，像影片中表现的成年的Tim与父亲相处的状态是极少的，也许中国的父亲大多含蓄内敛，中国的儿子大多粗心忙碌吧。全片我最感动的地方是，Tim最后一次与爸爸在过去的时光见面，时空能力者爸爸带着时空能力者儿子一起回到爸爸带着年幼的儿子在沙滩玩耍的时候，那是他们共同的最美好的回忆。阳光照耀在他们身上，Tim不能再使用能力回去怀念爸爸，但爸爸将一直活在时光里，他们彼此知道。
不是所有超能力者都必须拯救地球，至少Tim只想用超能力找个女朋友。Tim在使用超能力追求他爱上的第一个女孩时明白了一个道理:不爱你的人怎样都不会爱你。可是Tim在使用超能力追求第二个女孩时告诉了我们一个道理：正确的人总会相遇。在黑暗晚餐中Tim和Marry就相爱了。
Tim思考伴郎的人选的时候是我认为全片最搞笑的看点，那种我的好朋友全店铺是傻的想法很是真实了。
亲情，爱情，友情，齐全了。爱情虽是影片的主线，但若仅仅是想表达爱情，这部影片就不会出彩，正如人生也不能只有爱情，缺失什么的人看这部电影就会看到什么。所谓亲情并非是要孝感天地，所谓爱情并非是要一场豪华婚礼，所谓友情也并非是互相帮助。这不是一部严肃电影，导演没有想用它来表示自己深刻的思想和对社会的担忧或是对人性的探讨，它是一部真正意义上的治愈向电影，它治愈了所有对生活有强烈要求、过度要求的人。
幸福是什么是个千古问题，影片中爸爸只是要Tim把每天过两遍，不要用超能力改变任何事情，Tim就感受到了幸福。第二天的Tim比第一天的Tim开心，因为他看问题的角度不同。其实超能力者都没法真正干预生活的发生，悲伤与狗血，喜悦和幸运，一切如期而至。这部电影心灵鸡汤似的给我们灌输一些道理，并不显得俗气。人们没必要抗拒心灵鸡汤，而且这是一锅熬得清香四溢的鸡汤。它就是娓娓道来，一种岁月静好的感觉。
所以我愿意干了这碗鸡汤，我被治愈了。
