2022上海市初中英语中考作文【一】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构
2022上海市初中英语中考作文【二】
山，犹如圣哲，沉稳敦厚；水，犹如豆蔻女子，灵动，聪慧。山水造就了世间生命的美丽。
有人生活在绿柳如阴的江南，却向往千里冰封、万里雪飘的`北国风光；有人生活在浩瀚无边、波澜壮阔的海边，却期待一览驼走大漠、长河落日的壮美；有人生活在明月松间照，清泉石上流的乡间，却向往过灯红酒绿的都市生活。“生活中并不是缺少美，只是缺少发现美的眼睛”。生活中的人们往往忽略了身边的风景，静思品味时，就会发现风景这边独好。
我的家乡在日照，那青幽幽的山，清粼粼的水，无时无刻不留在我的记忆深处。
家乡的山上有许许多多姿态各异的石头，有的相互依靠，像是在说悄悄话，那神情宛如羞涩的少女；有的则高高站起，抬头向上，似乎要仰天长啸，抒发心中的激情；更有趣的是像顽童一样的石头，这儿一堆，那儿一块，好像是在做捉迷藏的游戏。春天到来山上百花齐放，万紫千红，争奇斗艳；夏天树木翠绿，树荫遮阳，凉风送爽……真是一派迷人的好风景。
山有山的灵秀，水有水的空灵。在山腰平坦处有一水渠，终日流淌着清澈见底的河水，水流到远处的小河里面，小河河面宛如明镜一般，清晰地映出蓝的天、白的云、红的花、绿的树。小河是活的，层层粼粼细波随风而起，伴着跳跃的阳光，伴着我的心，在追逐，在玩耍，河中偶有小鱼自由自在的游玩；小河是软的，微风吹过，波纹道道，像一幅迎风飘舞的丝绸；小河是硬的，像一块无暇的翡翠，闪烁着美丽的光泽。我经常在河边散步，在静静的河边徜徉，偶尔投一块小石子，或放一只小纸船在河里，随着河水轻轻飘荡。正是这充满活力的水造就了那秀丽的山，滋润了花草树木，也滋润了我的心田。
无须去名山大川，无须到沧海大漠，怀有一颗赤诚的心和一双善于发现的眼睛，无论世事怎样变化，无论走向何方，我依然爱你，家乡的山河。
2022上海市初中英语中考作文【三】
Shanghai Disneyland will be open soon, as the day is so close, there are all kinds of trial run information released. The public is so looking forward to it and they want to have the honor become the first visitors. While after scanning the released information, they feel unsatisfied.
上海迪士尼乐园很快就要开放了,由于距离开放日子是如此的接近,各种各样的试行信息发布了出来。公众是如此的期待,他们希望能有荣幸成为第一批游客。然而在浏览了发布信息后,他们感到不满意。
The first is about the high entrance ticket. According to the average ticket of about 400 RMB, a family always need to pay at least for 3 persons, which means it takes them more than 1000 RMB. It is only the lowest budget for the local visitors, while for the nonlocal visitors, they need to pay for the hotel, which is a great expense.
第一个是关于高价格的门票。根据平均一张门票约400元,一个家庭总是需要支付至少3人,这意味着他们需要支付超过1000元人民币。然而最低的预算只是对于当地游客来说,而对于外地游客,他们需要支付酒店,这是一笔巨大的开销。
The second is the food in Disneyland. The offcial website has listed the price that offered in the amusement park. A beef burger with cheese is 80 RMB, a child-sized hot dog is 60 RMB and so on. Many people think it is such high price for them to pay. In that way, a family only pays for the food will cost more than 500 RMB!
第二个是迪斯尼乐园的食物。官方网站列出了游乐园提供的食物价格。一个牛肉汉堡和奶酪是80元,一个儿童的热狗是60元等等。许多人认为这是很高的价格。这样的话,一个家庭光支付食物就要超过500元!
The trial run of Shanghai Disneyland exposes many problems and the public concerns about the price. Maybe adjusting the price can attracts more tourists.
上海迪士尼乐园的试行反应了许多问题，公众关心的是价格。也许调整价格可以吸引更多的游客。
2022上海市初中英语中考作文【四】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
