Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
西红柿炒鸡蛋人人会做,但是要做的好吃,难。主要是由几个误区,等会我会详细说。
材料:西红柿,鸡蛋
配料:植物油,盐。注意,西红柿炒鸡蛋不用放鸡精或者味精,因为西红柿炒鸡蛋是吃一个“鲜”字,而西红柿炒鸡蛋的时候就有形成鲜味的物质析出,不需要再放提鲜的味精或者鸡精。这也是做这道菜的时候不放葱姜蒜的原因。
制作方法:
1.西红柿切成块,要大小不一,什么形状无所谓,鸡蛋打开放入碗中,打匀,放入少许的盐。
2.锅内放入适量(炒鸡蛋的时候,油放多少很关键,我的是放相当于鸡蛋液的2/3的油,等油热了的时候,(我后面详细讲如何判断油的温度,倒入鸡蛋液,注意这个时候,鸡蛋液会自然的凝固,不要动,等到这个鸡蛋液都凝固的时候(要小心油干了,造成鸡蛋糊了,用饭铲(也叫炒勺从鸡蛋的边缘轻轻进入,将鸡蛋翻过来,煎一下,等两面的颜色都呈现金黄的颜色时候,把鸡蛋从锅里取出来(也可以不取,不过等熟练以后再说吧,这个时候锅里面应该还有一些油,把西红柿翻进去,翻炒几下,由于西红柿里面含有大量的'水分,会有水份析出,这个时候把炒好的鸡蛋放进去,放入少许盐,翻炒几下,出锅。PS:有人喜欢做的时候,放一些水进去,本人不推荐,其实西红柿里的水份完全够用了,不用放水。还有,现在的西红柿质量不好,炒出来的菜不甜还有些苦味,出锅的时候可以适量放一些白糖。
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
老师布置一项作业---做一次西红柿炒鸡蛋。中午,奶奶给我两个鸡蛋和一个西红柿就跑去干别的事了。
我把鸡蛋往桌脚一磕,顺着裂缝一掰,鸡蛋便从手指上滑到碗里。然后,我用筷子使劲搅,蛋清和蛋黄搅到一起了。
搅完鸡蛋,我开始砌西红柿,我先把西红柿放在毡板上,双手握菜刀高高举起,对准西红柿脑门一挥,谁知西红柿像个顽皮的孩子,滚到了一边,害的我差点把自己的手切了,我气急败坏,按住西红柿,拿起菜刀一顿砍,西红柿被我砍成一小块一小块的,如同一个个红衣仙女。
开始炒鸡蛋了,我先将油倒入锅中,等到油冒出青烟时,再把鸡蛋液倒进锅中,“滋啦”一声,吓得我往后退了几步,等到油不溅了,我往前走了几步,发现鸡蛋已经凝固了,好像一个小太阳,然后我把“太阳”分开了,我将西红柿放进去一块炒,炒的时候,我发现西红柿膨胀起来了,像一团团肉球。
炒好后,我把西红柿炒鸡蛋装盘,浓浓的香味引来了全家人,他们“狼吞虎咽”,一盘“美食"便被吃完了。吃完后,奶奶说:“烧的太好吃了”。听了奶奶的夸奖,我的心里比吃了蜜还甜。
平时,看见妈妈做西红柿炒鸡蛋时便觉得很有趣,我很想亲自尝试一下,就在今天晚上“机会”终于来了。我走进厨房对妈妈说:“今天晚上让我来做西红柿炒鸡蛋,行吗?”“好啊!”妈妈爽快地答应了。
妈妈给我准备了四个西红柿两个鸡蛋,油、盐、还有葱后就走了。我把西红柿和葱洗得干干净净,然后把葱叶顶部已发黄的叶子和葱根去除掉,按照妈妈的指导将葱和西红柿切好,把鸡蛋打进碗里搅匀。然后开火,放锅。
等锅内的水干了,我倒上一点油,又热以后倒入葱花和鸡蛋,炒得差不多再倒上西红柿,最后,加入少量的盐。来回翻炒一至五次后把这道菜盛入盘子里。
我和妈妈品尝了一下,虽然没有妈妈做得好吃,但是知道了妈妈平日做饭的辛苦,以后我一定要多帮妈妈做家务。
我学做的第一道家常菜——西红柿炒鸡蛋
今天妈妈做饭的时候,我请求妈妈教我做一个菜,妈妈答应了。我戴上围裙,把手洗干净,就正式上岗了。在妈妈的指导下,我先把两个西红柿洗干净,放在案板上切成小块,再把剥好的蒜切碎,然后拿了四个生鸡蛋,在碗边上把鸡蛋壳磕开一条缝,掰开把蛋液倒进碗里,再加点盐,把蛋液搅拌均匀。妈妈说:“准备工作已经就绪了,可以开始炒菜了。”妈妈让我把炒菜锅放到燃气灶上,点着火,把锅里倒点油,油微微冒烟时,把打好的蛋液倒进锅里,轻轻翻动,屋子里弥漫着浓浓的炒蛋香,待鸡蛋炒好后铲进盘子里。再次往锅里倒点油,把火关小,把切好的蒜末放进去炒,炒出香味后在把火开大,把切好的西红柿倒进锅里,加点盐,继续翻炒,大约过了五、六分钟,西红柿炒出了好多红红的汤汁,妈妈说:“把炒好的鸡蛋倒进去吧,马上可以出锅了。”我忙把盘子里超好的鸡蛋倒进锅里,搅拌在一起,拿起盘子就要往外盛菜。妈妈拦住我,又往里放了一小勺黄色的粉末,然后拿铲子拌匀了,说:“关火吧,好了!”“妈妈,您刚才加进去的.是什么呀?”我好奇的问道,妈妈笑着说:“鸡精,用来提鲜的。”我小心翼这道色香味俱佳的西红柿炒蛋铲进盘子里,端上餐桌。爸爸拿起筷子尝了一口,抿嘴儿笑着说:“这是我吃到的最最好吃的菜!”
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
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