首先,叔叔用白色奶油厚而均匀的涂抹在蛋糕坯子上,像一面洁白的雪墙,又围绕蛋糕边缘点缀上一圈苹果似的.奶油团,而后,叔叔又拿出一盒紫色的葡萄果酱,取出一点儿装进带尖嘴的塑料袋里,把果酱喷在蛋糕的奶油团上,果酱溢到了蛋糕侧壁,叔叔就用一把扁平的刀子,将果酱均匀的抹在蛋糕侧壁上,然后,叔叔又在蛋糕的中心用白色奶油挤出一片菱形状花朵,接着,叔叔在蛋糕底部镶上白奶油花边,最后是画龙点睛之笔了,叔叔在蛋糕中心插上各种各样的水果,有火龙果,草莓、樱桃、桃子等等,令人垂涎三尺,再涂上荔枝果膏,一个漂亮又好吃的水果奶油蛋糕就竣工了。
今天一大早,爸爸妈妈就出门了。临走前留了张纸条,说要明天才能回来,让姑姑给我做饭。我起了床,走到姑姑房间:“姑姑,起来做饭吧,爸妈不在家!“姑姑说:“什么?让我做饭?不是吧!”姑姑赶紧起来给爸爸打电话,问了具体情况。
完后,姑姑“扑通”一声坐到沙发上,说:“你写作业去吧,我查一查能做什么?”我笑着跑去写作业,只见姑姑打开电脑,查了又查,然后就出去买菜了。
不一会,姑姑回来,手里提着菜,说:“看我今天给你露一手——蔬菜水果沙拉!”
我说:“好呀!不好吃的话,我就出去吃,你在家里吃你的沙拉!”
姑姑说:“行”!
姑姑整个上午一直都在厨房。我进去看时,见姑姑正在切菜,只见她把胡萝卜、黄瓜、土豆切成小块;把青菜、白菜、油菜都切成一瓣一瓣的;又把水果拿出来,把苹果、梨、桃子、香蕉和西瓜也切成小块的。最后把它们都倒入盆中,倒了点油、盐、果酱,然后又把它们都搅拌匀了。最后叫我吃饭。
我看着那饭,说:“看见就不好吃!”
姑姑说:“你尝一口,就想吃了!”
我说:“那,好吧!”
我闭起眼,吃了一口——哎!还真的好吃!只觉得,入口的一瞬间,好像人也升到了空中,那空中好像正有许多许多正在泛着幽幽香气的花卉……姑姑见了,就叫:“喂,赶紧吃!”我朝姑姑笑了笑,便狼吞虎咽地吃起来。
这是我最喜欢的一顿饭,这饭,虽然不是很好看,但很好吃,因为里面有一种爱的“佐料”,只有最疼我的姑姑才会用!这恐怕也是世界上最独一无二的手艺了吧!
今天,我们在小桔灯的课堂上,跟老师学做了一道香甜可口的美味家肴。想知道是怎么做的吗?不知道吧?那请跟我一起走进小桔灯的课堂吧!
首先,老师把水果拿到桌子上,只见红彤彤的苹果、黄澄澄的梨、半绿半绿的葡萄、绿油油的黄瓜等等,都出现在讲桌上,讲桌上一下子变得更加的鲜艳了。
接着,老师把水果们请到一盆清澈见底的'温水中,让它们洗一温水澡,把它们洗得干干净净的。洗好之后,就开始削皮了,老师右手拿小刀,左手拿苹果,刀随着苹果转动,一道彩虹般的苹果皮垂了下来,它越来越长,突然刀一抖,彩虹断了,我们遗撼极了。
削好皮的水果被老师切成了形态各异的小块,有丁形的,有圆形的,还有三角形的等等。最后,老师把形态各异的小块放入盘子里,再加了许多的沙拉酱。我们狼吞虎咽,我们一下子就把它们干掉了,那味道香甜可口,回味无穷。美味极了!
回到家里,我一定要做一道水果沙拉,给爸爸妈妈尝尝这个美味!
——贺俊逸 四(6班
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
话说“民以食为天”。一种令人垂涎欲滴并做法快捷的美食是我的首选,是的,我要介绍的就是——水果沙拉。
水果沙拉味道好,看相也好。一瓣一瓣的苹果、梨、桔子围成几朵精致的花,层层叠叠地分布着,最上面是几朵雕刻精细、模样小巧的胡萝卜花,一层层乳白色的沙拉酱,将它们衬托得更是美味。沙拉酱有种说不出的味道,再配上多汁鲜嫩雪白的水果,如一个小小的水果蛋糕——看,那些可爱的水果正惬意地半卧在沙拉酱中,舒服地伸展着腰,向大家展示它们的美妙呢!
说到这,你们是不是想知道水果沙拉的做法呢?它的做法非常简单,也不过四五分钟。将喜欢的水果去皮切片,片不需太薄、太厚,适当即可,找来沙拉酱,将水果按喜欢的样子摆好,再精细地、用心淋上,最后摆上几朵胡萝卜花或香蕉片做成的花边,一盘色、香、味俱全的水果沙拉就做成了。而喜欢别的水果的人,也可根据口味适当添加。
吃水果沙拉也很有趣,拿起小银勺,先小抿一口,沙拉酱那又酸又甜的滋味便在舌尖荡漾开来,刺激着味蕾,正想好好品味,它就突然消失了,只留下一股既香又浓的奶香弥漫在口腔中,许久不散。咬一口水果,饱满的汁水四溢出来,与沙拉酱奇妙地融合在一起,酸酸甜甜,顽皮地在舌尖上跳动,嚼一嚼,苹果的微酸、香蕉的香稠、葡萄的鲜嫩、桔子的多汁伴随沙拉酱一起涌来,如潮水扑向岸边岩石;如激烈奔放的伦巴舞步,在舌腔中舒展着自己的身躯,释放着属于自己的天地。随着它们滑向食道,我感受到了几丝清甜。
这就是水果沙拉,它就像我的人生,有酸,也有甜;有惆怅,也有温暖。水果沙拉,每当我轻含进嘴里时,它就让我变得乐观向上,也给我一种坚强起来的力量!
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