By the time you read this you will be 30. At the age of 18 I had so many hopes and dreams about where you'd be, what you'd be doing and with whom you'd spend your life with.
Right now I hope that you have traveled and seen everything you've always wanted to, both in Canada and overseas, and maybe even settled down somewhere in Australia doing some research in the field of biology (genetics.
I hope you're married to the man of your dreams. The man of mine is Gwynn. He is originally from South Africa (another place I wish to visit.
You'll probably have two children of your own – a girl(Michaela Anne and a boy (name yet to be decided.If everything goes according to plan you'll be living in Australia in a big house in a small town outside of a big city with a lot of land, a dog, Gwynn and your two beautiful children. Hopefully you have a career in the medical field, maybe doing research in genetics. Gwynn will be a computer programmer and you will be doing alright for yourselves.
However, if things don't go according to plan for you, I wish you all the love, happiness and joy in the world and don't settle for anything less than the best since that is absolutely what you deserve.
Live long, be happy and live life to it's fullest.
Love Sherri "18″
敬爱的张老师:
您好!我是高一年级的杭晓舟。结束了三年初中生活,我对即将到来的高中校园充满期待。新的学习环境,丰富的社团活动,都令人向往。所以在此我申请在学校创建一个心理社,也非常感谢您能在百忙之中抽出时间来看我的这一份申请书。我想创办心理社的原因如下:
第一,心理社可以帮助社员(同学们)缓解生活、学习之中的压力。作为一名学生,压力是肯定会有的。刚经历完中考的我们绝对不会忘记那段紧张却充实的备考时光:写不完的作业、做不完的试卷、一个个鲜红的分数、一张张排名表……对于我而言,那就是一场噩梦。有时我想:就这样吧,太难受了这种感觉。但每当我快要坚持不住的时候,总会有人安慰我,陪着我、听我诉苦。之后心情就会好很多,也有了前进的动力。由此可见,我们需要适量地发泄和倾诉,这样才不会影响我们的日常生活和学习。在心理社,你一定会有机会找到合适的人与之倾诉,缓解压力,这就是创建心理社的第一个原因。
第二,来到新的学校,不热悉的环境、同学和老师可能会让你自卑;身边没有朋友,那种感觉只有经历过的人才能懂。正值青春期,叛逆的我们难免会与父母吵架,大战之后把自己关在房间里偷偷哭,莫名的委屈涌上心头;与朋友闹矛盾,与老师不和,不知道为何就是很郁闷等等这些问题,在心理社你会得到恰当的疏解方法指导。所以,创建的原因之二:加强社员与父母、朋友、老师之间的交流,让他们学会换位思考,按时帮助他们解决问题,培养沟通能力。
我想创建心理社的原因大致如上。假如心理社成功创立,我会设法开展一系列与心理建设方面有关的活动,例如心理茶话会(社员聚集在一起分享平日的趣事或麻烦),编排心理小剧,制作心理小报……我们会与同学们一起探讨心理问题,营造好的心理社氛围,使同学们的校园生活更加快乐和健康。
我诚恳地希望学校和张老师能给我这次机会,让我们的心理社成立,让同学们享受我社如同大家庭般温暖的氛围,并以积极阳光的心态拥抱新生活。
杭晓舟
20xx年6月25日
看到这本书的封面就深深地被吸引了,不仅仅因为“常青藤”,“哈佛”的光环,更是因为“20年经典读物”,因为时间才能真正的检验真理。
本书不同于其他写作书籍:除了20条写作干货以外,在书末,每条原则都有对应练习和参考答案。写作本就是一项技能,练习>理论,所以才说这本书不失为一本写作经典好书。
这本书非常适合用作写作入门书籍或工具用书。刚开始学习的时候可以通篇学习,之后当写作时遇到门槛或问题了,可随时翻阅查看。本书脉络非常清晰,作者的理论部分分别从结构、风格、可读性这三个基本层面阐述了,写作应该遵循的20条基本原则。
首先是结构,结构是关乎文章组织以及表述观点的顺序,有了正确的结构,文章就会给人很清晰的感受。
例如,总——分,分——总还是总——分——总。最重要的观点,次重要的观点,应该按什么顺序进行放置,这些都必须根据不同文体而定。
作者在第一部分,提到的第一个原则,就是运用“自上而下”的原则,在写说明文,议论文,论文,商业文章时都可以应用这种原则——先写总结,开门见山。然后再把表达的观点拆分成功2到4个观点,以最重要,次重要,次重要,最不重要的顺序去排列。这是因为人们在看文章时,注意力会随着时间的增加而不断减少,所以这种方式能够让大家最高效的接受作者想表达的内容。
其实,这种方式不仅仅可以应用于写作,更可以运用到平时的速度当中。“先找文章开头的总结句——再找分解的观点,然后从上至下阅读”,便可提高阅读效率。
其次是风格,风格是写作方式,包括如何使用恰当的例证支撑所写的内容,
有了风格,文章就会显得充实,丰满,让人非常容易理解。举个例子,
1.雪下的特别大。
2.下雪了,一片片雪花从天上飘落下来,一会儿,山头白了,房子白了,窗外的\'一切都白了。
这两句话,同样是描写雪大,但是后面这句添上风格,大家可以感受一下有什么不同?
最后是可读性,这一点教我们如何对文章进行正确的排版。
让读者获得愉悦的阅读体验,在有限的时间里获得最有效的信息,并愿意继续读下去。例如作者所说的尽量增大周围边框和黑体字就可以让阅读视感更佳轻松。
本文只是给大家展示了书中两三个原则,其余的原则还等着大家自己去联系和掌握。总之,本书内容非常丰富,不仅适合写作入门级爱好者,也适合于广大的高中初中的同学作为写作的提高资料。
dear xxx,
hi,i am xxx,allow me to tell you something about my hobbies and living habits.i think i am a social person,i have a great circle of friends,they all admire me for my great sense of humour.i am talkative ,i am on the school debate team and i always win.i like reading magazines or newspapers after class,i think they can help me know more about the world.i also do well in my school work.i also like playing sports especially ball games such as basketball,volleyball and soccer.but i am not very good at it.i think i have a healthy life style ,my living habits are prettey good.i always get up early in the morning,i never go to school without breakfast.and in the evening ,i never go to bed late,i finish my homework very fast.but only one living habit is not very healthy,that is ,i have a bad habit of eating dessert.
what are your hobby and living habits?could you tell me more about your life?please contact me as soon as possible.
looking forward to your reply.
yours,
xxx
Dear wu Yanzu:
You are my favourite superstar.I am addicited to your films and some other works.Our teacher asked us to write a letter to a superstar. You come to mine mind firstly. I am inertested in a question.That is why you are not good at our mother tongue.I am anxious to eat your cooking.It must be taste good.Oh i can not wait.How I wish I could taste it at once. You hurt your nose in an accident.I am very wooried about that,can I have a look at your nose.Yang Qianhua is a so good singer.You two look like a couple,and you will be good lovers.
Yours
XXX
When you look back on yourself in the past – 10, 20, 30 or more years ago – it’s surprising to see how much you have changed over time. Your experiences, your friends, your family and your work have all shaped who you are right now. But where will you be in another few years? How will you have changed? Reflective writing in your journal is an excellent way to think about what you want out of the future.
当你10年、20年或更多年后回顾过去时,你会吃惊地发现,随着时光的流逝,你也发生了很大的变化。你的经历、朋友、家庭和工作造就了现在的你。但是再过几年你会在哪里呢?你会如何变化呢?这样反思性的写作,会是思考未来你想要什么的一种好的方式。
You may have already written a letter to your younger self before, conveying all the wisdom and perspective you wish you had had at the time. Now consider the opposite end of the spectrum; what would you say if you wrote your future self a letter?
你也许以前试过给过去的自己写信,向年轻时的自己传授一些人生的智慧和观点,你希望那时候的自己就能知道这些。现在我们换个角度看问题,如果让你给未来的自己写封信,你会写点什么?
Just imagine writing a letter to your future self 5 years from now, then opening it at that exact moment 5 years down the road to see how much of it resonated with you. It is a useful supplementary tool to be used in goal achievement, because when you write the letter to your future self, it helps crystallize exactly how you anticipate yourself to become at that specific moment down the road.
想象一下,给5年后的\'自己写一封信,当5年后你打开那封信时,你会产生多少共鸣。这是实现目标的一种有用的辅助工具,因为当你给未来的自己写信时,你会慢慢理清希望自己在人生旅途的那个特定时刻变成什么样子。
As you read the letter in the future, you can assess how many things match up (or not vs. your expectations in the past and think about why that’s the case. Often times, the goals we set and our goal achievement process are subjected to a lot of changes along the way, due to varying obstacles, unanticipated circumstances and changing priorities. The letter gives you a macro-view of your initial vision and lets you recognize how your current vision differs from the past.
当你在未来读这封信时,你可以看看有多少事情是像你过去期望的那样,你也会思考为什么会这样。很多时候,我们设定目标在实现的过程中会受到沿途中各种因素的影响,因为会遇到各种各样的困难、各种意外情况并需要不断调整优先级。这封信能让你从宏观的角度上去看自己最初的愿景,让你意识到自己现在的想法和过去相比有多么不同。
When you open the letter in the future, you as your future self gets to compare how you used to be in the past and compare with how you are currently. This lets you see in totality how much things have changed since then – and this can be a really intriguingexperience. It’s interesting to just see how much you have grown/changed since you wrote the letter.
当你以后看信时,你会把过去的自己和现在的自己进行比较。这会让你看清从写信时起你发生了哪些变化,这种体验是非常有趣的。光看看从你写信开始发生了哪些变化就很有趣了。
尊敬的张老师:
您好!我是一名高一新生,因对本校社团活动有强烈兴趣,所以我毛遂自荐希望加入学校的摄影社团。
我叫杭晓舟,来自高一三班。我喜欢去景区欣赏世间万物的美好,因为每种景观都有它们独一无二的美。我曾经幻想过,如果有一天,这些绚丽的风景不存在了,那对我们的后代来说,何尝不是一种遗憾呢?但用一部手机,亦或是一台摄像机就能记录下这些奇观异景了。大概是从六年级开始,我发现自己善于观察周边的人或事物。如果看到一个人有意思,他有与众不同的地方,我会记录下来。如果街边看到一个色彩丰富造型独特的垃圾桶,我也会记录下来。我在六年级时就拥有自己的第一部手机了,我总是用它记录生活点滴。
寒假期间,妈妈骑车接我回家。那个时刻刚好是太阳下山,日落时分,余晖照耀下,整片大地都被染成了橘红色。我情不自禁地拍摄了几张日落照,分享到一个软件上。第二天我的作品居然火了,得到了许多网友的点赞。这让我对自己的摄影技术更加肯定,但我还想让自己的摄影技术提高更快,希望我能变得专业!
在我看来,相机可以记录下的东西,如果仅仅只是表面的美,那岂不是太过肤浅?我认为每一张拍摄下来的照片都有它独特的意义,或许在照片中也能寄托拍摄者的感情和当时的心情,还可能是拍摄者想通过一张照片传达一种情感或观念。恰好每个人的理解都是不同的,一千个人眼里面就有一千个哈姆雷特,所以每个人对一张照片的层次理解是不同的。就好比,我看到一株青青的小草,我会想拍下它不同生长阶段的生命姿态,就像人一样,我们人类每个生长阶段都是不同的。还比如我看到被压弯的树枝,我会想到人生有时得低头是为了更好的抬头。摄影让我每一次都能找出新的亮点,它记录下了我用心灵感悟的东西,我也喜欢把自己的摄影作品与大家分享,让大家通过我的作品从而了解到我这个人。
尊敬的张老师,谢谢您在百忙之中阅读了我的来信,我希望能有幸加入我校的摄影社,不断打磨自己的技术,记录生活中更多的美好,与大家一同来品味生活中的小美好。
此致
敬礼!
杭晓舟
2020年6月25日
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