一封信写完了,突然又想起遗漏的事情,这时用p.s.表示,再写上遗漏的话即可,要长话短说。通常在信末签名下面几行的左方,应于正文齐头。
注意:在正式的信函中,应避免使用附言。
My name is li hua, and the most impressive thing of my life came to my life yesterday. When I walked near by a lake with my friend, he was falling into the lake, and I was so worried. I didt know how to swim, but I had to save my friends live. I was shouting and asking someone to help.
After that, the most impressive thing happened which was a young solder that jump into the lake without thinking, swimmed to the palace where my friend were, and got him out of the lake. After the young solder checked if there was nothing wrong with my friend, he went away. In conclusion, this young solder is the one who i respect a lot!
位置在下面称呼语隔一行,是信的核心部分。因此要求正文层次分明、简单易懂。和中文信不同的是,正文中一般不用hello!(你好!)
正文有缩进式和齐头式两种。每段书信第一行的第一个字母稍微向右缩进些,通常以五个字母为宜,每段第二行从左面顶格写起,这就是缩进式。
但美国人写信各段落往往不用缩进式,用齐头式,即每一行都从左面顶格写起。商务信件大都采用齐头式的写法。
On the afternoon of October 28, the weather was particularly sunny. The day I had been looking forward to for two weeks finally came. Today, we are going to the emergency rescue training base of the Municipal Red Cross Society to learn first aid knowledge and skills.
We took a bus to our destination. First of all, the volunteers of the Municipal Red Cross Society explained to us the origin, functions and components of the Red Cross movement.
From his introduction, I know that may 8 is the World Red Cross Day every year. The bright red red cross represents the spirit of humanity, fraternity and dedication. Then, we started the practical operation. The first one was cardiopulmonary resuscitation. Volunteers introduced the operation process of cardiopulmonary resuscitation and simulated first aid.
Secondly, volunteers also teach us four skills of trauma rescue: hemostasis, dressing, fixation and handling. When learning hemostatic bandage, volunteers showed us triangular towel head bandage, stirring rod bandage, etc. Finally, we carry out practical operation.
Under the careful guidance of volunteers, we studied very hard, and everyone mastered these first-aid skills.
Time passed quickly, and the afternoons study soon came to an end, and the students were still not satisfied. Before I took part in this activity, I didnt know what the Red Cross did, and I never wanted to know it. Through this afternoons study, I deeply felt that the Red Cross Society is really great. I want to inherit its spirit and be a loving person. Thank you very much for allowing me to participate in such a meaningful activity!
人之初,性本善。每个人都是有良心的,之所以没有做符合良心的事,是因为他们没有认识到良心是知恩图报的感恩,是关爱他人的仁爱,是忠贞爱国的真情。
良心,是受人滴水之恩,以涌泉相报的感恩。徐本禹在大学期间,受到社会各界的帮助,得以完成学业,在毕业后,他毫不犹豫地走进山村支教,以行动来回报社会的帮助。徐本禹能够毫不犹豫地做出决定,是因为他知道感恩是他应用来回报社会的良心,也因为这样,他将自己的青春献给山村教育,回报社会。然而,那些受丛飞资助的贫困学生,在丛飞生病后没有去探望过,还向他要生活费,他们没有认识到他们应该感恩,应该回报,他们没有认识到感恩是他们应该用来回报丛飞的帮助的良心。
良心,是己所不欲,勿施与人的仁爱。人在社会中生活,难免与人接触,与人交往,也就免不了产生矛盾。就需要我们做到仁爱。获得诺贝尔和平奖的特蕾莎修女,她竭尽所能,帮助众多贫苦人民,受广大人民的.爱戴。特蕾莎修女的良心,就是她对别人无私无尽的帮助和关爱。在与别人的矛盾中,她用关爱他人来化解,既帮助了别人,也帮助自己。也因为这样,特蕾莎修女的仁爱的良心受世人称赞。在看范美忠,在地震来临时,他不顾学生,自己离开学校,让学生在地震中丧生。他的自私,不关爱他人,让他受世人唾骂,遗臭万年。
良心,是天下兴亡,匹夫有责的爱国真情。古有戚继光英勇抗倭,文天祥宁死不屈,岳飞精忠报国……他们的良心,是他们对祖国的忠贞,是他们为国而流的鲜血。“人生自古谁无死,留取丹心照汗青”一句抒尽心中万丈豪情,激荡了一代又一代人的心。然而,“青山有幸埋忠骨,白铁无辜铸佞臣”,秦桧为了荣华富贵不惜卖国,吴三桂冲冠一怒让国家动荡,和珅不顾祖国危难敛收富比国库的钱财……他们的良心,在他们的背叛,破坏中消亡,留下千古骂名。
当老人跌倒时无人上去扶起,有人偷东西时却不出声相告,受别人帮助后没有感谢。社会上还有许多蒙蔽良心的事出现,我们要认识到感恩、仁爱和爱国的良心,并且用它们让社会变得美好。
“加油,加油!”今日的校园显得有些不同寻常。走进操场一看——哦!原来是六年级的同学们正在进行劳动技能大赛,同学们正在给自己班级的选手们加油呢。
让我们进入到比赛现场。现在参赛的一共有三支队伍:六年一班、六年二班还有六年三班。比赛的方式是各班派出四名选手,以接力形式,依次完成缝纽扣、炒西红柿炒蛋、削苹果和做寿司,评委会按照时间与精美度来给出综合得分,决出冠军。
“哔——”一声响亮的哨声打破了比赛前的宁静,比赛正式开始了!我们六年二班派出的第一名选手是方佳怡。比赛一开始,她就以迅雷不及掩耳之势拿起了针和线,开始缝纽扣。看着缝纽扣时他不紧不慢的样子,我感到十分着急,连忙大喊:“方佳怡,快快快!”方佳怡在听到之后,立即加快了速度。两三分钟后,方佳怡第一个缝完了纽扣,将重任交给了林樱婷。
“咚,咚,咚……”一声声规律而有力的刀声展现在了林樱婷做菜的工夫上,不一会,他就切完了西红柿。这时,其他两个班级也相继赶来,开始切西红柿和打蛋。下锅后,三个班才开始了真正的较量。别看炒菜简单,这其实是门深奥的学问呢!只有把握好火候,时间和调料的平衡,才可以炒出好菜。真不愧是“炒蛋之王”!林樱婷率先完成了装盘,接下来由李晨洋来接棒。
看着李晨洋熟练又快速的刀法,我就感到了胜券在握。果然,只用了45秒,李晨洋就削好了苹果,并以百米冲刺般的速度冲向了邓郑彬,完成了最后一掌。可是,没想到在这时,我们班的一群女生竟然到了比赛场地上,在评委还没有品尝的情况下,把西红柿炒蛋吃光了!同时,比赛结束了,可能是我们在寿司的摆盘上消耗了时间,我们慢了三班几秒。
宣布比赛结果的时刻到了。“胜利者是——”主持人说道,“六年三班获胜!”“唉!”我们班叹息道,“都怪那些女生!”我想:输与赢其实并不重要,重在参与,重在友谊。所以,我并不伤心。
于是,这一天便在欢声和笑语中度过了。
一、英文书信的结构
第一节英文书信的结构
英文书信一般由以下六部分组成:信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结尾、签名。
1.信头(Heading)
信头是指发信人的地址和日期,通常写在第一页的右上角。行首可以齐头写,也可以逐行缩进写。地址的书写顺序由小到大:门牌号、街道、城市、省(州)、邮编、国名,最后写发信日期。私人信件一般只写寄信日期即可。例如:
123 Tianhe Road
Tianhe District
Guangzhou 510620
Guangdong Province
P. R. C.
Jan 8,20xx
2.信内地址(Inside Address)
信内地址要写收信人的姓名和地址。在公务信件中要写明这一项,在私人信件中,这一项常常省略。该项写在写信日期下一行的左上角,格式与寄信人地址一样。
3.称呼(Salutation)
称呼是对收信人的`称谓,应与左边线对齐,写在收信人姓名、地址下面1—2行处。在称呼后,英国人常用逗号,美国人则常用冒号。在私人信件中可直呼收信人的名字,但公务信件中一定要写收信人的姓。大部分信件在称呼前加“Dear”。如:
Dear Professor/Prof。 Bergen:
Dear Dr。 Johnson,
对不相识的人可按性别称呼:
Dear Sir:或Dear Madam:Dear Ladies。
如果不知收信人的性别则可用Dear Sir or Madam:
4.正文(Body of Letter)
正文是书信的主体。与中文信件不同的是,英文书信的正文的开头不是先写一些问候语,再阐明写信的目的,而是直接说明写信人的身份及写信的目的,然后提出写信人的情况、想法或要求,并加以必要的解释或说明。英文书信陈述目的时,应该直截了当,意思明确,层次清楚,言简意赅。
书信正文的第一句话或第一段,通常被称为起首语。一般说来,人们习惯用一些客套的写法作为书信正文的起始,即先将对方来信的日期、主题加以简单描述,以便使对方一看便知该信是回答哪一封信的。如果是第一次给别人写信,也可用开头语作必要的自我介绍,并表明自己写信的主要目的。
5.结尾礼词(Complimentary Close)
公务信件的结尾礼词包含两部分:发信人的结尾套语与署名。结
尾套语写在签名上面一行,第一个字母要大写,套语结尾后面要加逗号。在公务信件中,发信人常用的结尾套语有:
Yours truly,Yours sincerely,Respectfully yours,Cordially yours,Yours cordially等。
私人信件中,发信人常用的结尾套语有:
Sincerely yours,Lovely yours,Your lovely,Your loving son/daughter等。
6. 签名(Signature)
写信人的签名常位于结尾礼词正下方一二行。除非是给很熟悉的人写信,签名一般须写出全名。签名常常较潦草,不易辨认,因此在签名的正下方须打印出全名。
第二节书信作文的出题形式和写作要领
1990年到20xx年1月之间的四级考试作文题中,书信作文共出现两次(20xx年6月和20xx年1月)。下面,我们先来看看20xx年6月四级考试的作文题:
Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter。 Suppose you are Zhang Ying。 Write a letter to Xiao Wang,a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week—long holiday。 You should write at least 120 words according to the suggestion given below in Chinese:
1.表示欢迎
2.提出对度假安排的建议
3.提醒应注意的事项
A Letter to a Schoolmate
June 23,20xx
Dear Xiao Wang,
__________________________________
__________________________________
__________________________________.
Yours,
Zhang Ying
从上面的例子可见,书信作文不仅给出正文部分的内容的提纲,而且还给出书信各部分的结构的框架。也就是说,我们只要考虑如何表达提纲部分的内容,而不用考虑书信的结构。
在写书信作文时,首先要把书信正文的提纲内容细化,扩展成更细的英文提纲,然后用简洁、明了、礼貌、正确和得体的语言表达出细化了的提纲内容。例如前面的那封信就可以列出下面的提纲:Topic:A Letter to a SchoolmateQuestion:What are the holiday arrangements and points for attention?
Outline:
I.Extending my welcome
II.Holiday schedule
1.1st day – campus
2. 2nd day – the art gallery & music hall
3. 3rd day – mountain climbing4。 next 3 days – other places of interest(Swan Cave,Golden Lake?)
4. Last day – departure
III.Points for attention
1.Train number & time of arrival
2. Sunglasses
IV. Looking forward to seeing you。
1.Conclusion
范文:
A Letter to A Schoolmate
June 23,20xx
Dear Xiao Wang,
I’m very glad to learn that you’re going to visit me during the week—long holiday.My parents will also be happy to see you again.I am sure you will enjoy every minute here.
I have arranged our schedule for the holiday as follows.On the first day you arrive,I’ll show you around our campus. On the second day,we’ll visit the art gallery and the music hall. Next day,we’ll climb a hill in the northeastern part of the city.On the top of the hill,we can have a wonderful bird’s eye view of the city. During the next three days,we’ll make some short trips to some places of interest.
Yours,
Zhang Ying
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