亲爱的妈妈:
你好!
又到了年末,让我思绪万千,这么多年未曾见面,不知你可安好?你有没有想过我和弟弟?有没有过回家的念头?是或否,答案在你的心里。
自我记事起,记忆里便没有过你的影子,哪怕只是一点点。你为什么出去打工六、七年,直到现在也不给家里打个电话?隐约中只有刚出门时那么几个电话。
小时候的我们,虽然日子过得清苦,但是一家人多么幸福啊!家庭和睦,团团圆圆。我们也明白若不是经济紧张,你们也不会出去打工,可是你为什么不回来看看我和弟弟,爸爸无论在哪务工,春节时都回来呀!
还记得我小时候吗?那是多么的快乐呀!爸爸和你上山干农活时总会带上我和弟弟,你们在地里干着活,我守在弟弟旁边看着你们。你们脸颊上的汗水凝成了珠,滴在了土地上,可是你们是笑着的呀,是发自内心的笑。这就是苦,但苦中有甘。
小时候的我,有点调皮,有些捣蛋,喜欢拿你的耳钉玩。有一次,一不小心,把你的塑料耳钉塞到了鼻子里,取不出来。我特别害怕,就难过得大哭,你知道后,想尽了办法帮我取出来。可是,越紧张就越出错,耳钉不仅没取出来,反倒越往鼻腔里去了。我看见你哭了,你在担心我呀!你顾不上穿好外衣,急急忙忙地找到了爸爸,抱着我往医院赶。到了医院门口,我打了个喷嚏,耳钉出来了。我看了看你,你笑了,喜极而泣,抱着我蹲在地上哭了好久。我依稀记得,那天的风,凉飕飕的,要变天了。
不知从何时起,我隐约觉得你变了,变成了我不认识的妈妈,你和奶奶吵架了,我在奶奶那儿吃饭,你硬拖我下来,带到厨房里,把饭塞到我嘴里,用筷子戳好几下,戳到我的喉咙,我痛得眼泪往外涌,而你却无动于衷。
那天爸爸去邻居家了,你见爸爸前脚走,你立马用被子蒙住我的脸,坐在我身上,我扯着喉咙大喊,直到声音喑哑,我以为我要死了,爷爷奶奶知道了,赶来把你从我身上推下去,抱走了一息尚存的我,我泪水一直在流,心也一直在痛。
如今的我回忆起往昔种种,泪水横流,可是我不恨你呀!因为你是生我养我的亲妈,你为什么不回来呢?为什么不肯打个电话回家呢?什么原由,恐怕只有你自己清楚了。
看着同学一个个父母疼爱,我只能在一旁干瞪眼了。记忆中的你,日渐模糊,不懂你为何能狠下心来离家出走抛弃我们,你可知我、弟弟和爸爸为你流过了多少辛酸的泪,哭过多少回,爸爸为你瘦了多少,你未曾知道。
盼,在我少年时代与你能够再见面一回,哪怕再见只是陌路人也无防。
你的女儿:胡楠
20xx年6月3日
帮理不帮亲是中国历代传承的行为准则,但是社会发展到今天已不是这样子啦。譬如说吧,某人在街上被狗咬了,这人理所当然地向狗的主人讨要医药费,而往往狗主人只会敷衍一两句,然后狗主人的儿子就跳出来大讲“道理”,接着儿子那当官的老丈人也跳了出来,骂被咬之人撒泼使赖,对狗咬人一事却一字不提。天理何在!“韩白骂战”也是这个样子。先是白烨不止一次说韩寒的文学不够文学之类的话,韩寒看了那些话就骂了白烨,而白烨不答话,然后白烨的哥们跳了出来,接着哥们的儿子也跳了出来……跳来跳去,全是些不相***人,都只听说自己的亲朋好友被骂了,就不管孰是孰非,这个说韩寒是“红卫兵”,那个要抽韩寒俩巴掌,这都什么乱七八糟啊,典型的“帮亲不帮理”。
我们祖国的'发展日新月异,人民的生活水平日益提高,汽车走进了千家万户,给人们带来出行便利的同时也给环境带来了破坏。这些年我们国家很重视环保问题,倡导低碳生活,我的爸爸就用上了新能源汽车,为美丽的祖国做出了贡献。
那一天,我在院子门口玩耍时,看见从外地出差的爸爸开着一辆我从未见过的两厢小汽车回来了。我连忙冲上前,好奇极了:“爸爸,这是你的新车吗?”爸爸骄傲地说:“那当然了,这可是最新的新能源汽车!爸爸赶上潮流,赶紧买回来试试。”我好奇地打量着,新能源汽车看上去小巧轻便,车轮比一般的小些。车头呈流线性,末尾平中带弯;它没有排气管,车底下有六个大能量电池启动。我还发现它的车牌是绿色的,而且有六位数,比一般的汽车多出一位。我兴奋极了,央求爸爸开新车带我去兜兜风。
大街上车水马龙,到处是汽车排出的尾气,我们的新能源汽车稳稳当当地行驶着,噪音低、无尾气,路人纷纷向我们投来羡慕的眼光。爸爸边开车边向我解释道:“汽车废气和噪音污染严重影响了环境,造成全球气候变暖,各种气象灾害加剧,也给人民的身体和心理健康带来了很大的影响。发展新能源汽车,是应对节能减排重大挑战的需要。”我连连点头,不禁赞同道:“如果每个人都使用新能源汽车,空气该有多清鲜啊!那时,天空再也不会有那么多雾霾,人们出门也不用戴着厚厚的口罩,地球上的汽油也不会给汽车吃个精光了!”爸爸哈哈大笑:“不是爸爸自夸哦,环保行动要从个人做起,从身边做起!爸爸身体力行,为祖国的环保事业贡献一份微薄的力量!”
我为爸爸竖起了大拇指:“爸爸真棒!希望在不久的将来,新能源汽车会更加普及,让我们给地球妈妈穿上一件绿色而健康的衣裳!”
作为祖国未来的建设者,我构想了一种新能源汽车。
新能源汽车,它是不耗电的,不耗煤。新能源汽车在加油的时候,用的不是汽油,而是一种新型的植物油,它冒出来的气是氧气,所以不会污染环境,而且还能净化环境呢!而且汽车的摩擦声会转变成美妙的音乐,转到车里给驾驶员听。这样就不会破坏城市的安宁。
新能源汽车上还装了感应器,它在必要的时候会自动开慢或停下,比如在红灯的时候,有些驾驶员在红灯的时候,想闯红灯汽车就会自动停车。驾驶员再拼命开也启动不了。有的驾驶员想在规定路段超速,它就会自动的变成越开越慢,还有的驾驶员想到处乱停车,汽车就会不停的叫,要求驾驶员按规定停车,如果驾驶员这样开车就会安全多了,交通事故也就很少会发生了。
汽车不但可以在陆地上奔驰,而且可以像飞机一样在天空快速穿梭,还可以在海里游泳,在车里观赏海底世界,探索海底世界的无限奥秘。
车中设施齐备,功能齐全,在卫星信号和电子指挥下,可以到达世界所有地方,不管走到那里,都不会迷路;车里面还有电脑,有DVD,当驾驶员感到闷的时候,可以看看DVD,有电子游戏机,有电冰箱,有电话等,还有自动按摩器呢!――当驾驶员感到腰酸的时候,自动按摩器就可以帮驾驶员按摩;车中安置有一张休息的床,疲惫的时候,可以睡上一大觉;如果长途旅行的话,车还可以变成一间小屋子,人们还可以在车里过夜,屋子里面还有厨房,当驾驶员感到肚子饿的时候,就可以在厨房里煮东西吃;如果想要搜索海底的无限奥秘的话的话,车子还可以从车轮里伸出两个机器手,如果驾驶员想捉一些比较机灵的鱼类,车里的电脑就可以帮您查找他的弱点,帮您实现愿望;车还可以变成海里不同的动物掩护自己,以免伤害鱼类或受到鱼类的伤害;如果有考古工作者想去沙漠里挖恐龙化石的话,车子还可以自动帮主人找到并挖掘恐龙化石。另外还有好多好多……
这辆节能的汽车,一定会给人们带来许许多多的好处!
路上的汽车越来越多,人们出行也越来越便捷,但是有雾霾的天气也越来越频繁,汽车工业的发展带来的环境污染问题越来越突出,新能源汽车的出现能够帮助人们实现清洁出行,还给我们蓝天碧水。
在我们的身边就有一些新能源汽车,也许大家没有发现,今天,我就给大家介绍一下新能源汽车。目前的新能源汽车分为三种类型:混合动力汽车、纯电动汽车、燃料电池汽车,比较常见的前两类新能源汽车,燃料电池电动汽车目前还没有普及,处于示范运行阶段,在不久的将来就能看到。
目前我们在路上看到最多的是混合动力汽车和纯电动汽车,混合动力汽车采用燃油和动力电池作为驱动能源,只是比普通的内燃机汽车更节能,但是依然有尾气的排放。纯电动汽车采用动力电池最为汽车的能源,无污染,完全没有尾气排放,大家在路上看到的绿牌车就是纯电动汽车,车牌以英文字母“D”开头,纯电动汽车一次充电能够连续行驶300多公里,所以很多纯电动汽车晚上需要充电,就像我们日常使用的手机一样。
燃料电池汽车采用氢气作为燃料,通过燃料电池发动机发电,然后通过电机驱动汽车前进,最终的产物只有水,燃料电池汽车的车牌也是绿色的,车牌以英文字母“F”开头,燃料电池汽车与纯电动汽车相比最大的不同是:燃料电池汽车不需要充电,而是可以自己发电。它的排放物甚至可以作为我们的饮用水。
也许在不久的将来,燃料电池汽车将取代其它车辆,在世界上广泛使用,到那时现在的加油站就会变成加氢站。我建议大家尽量选择新能源汽车出行,为环保贡献自已的一份力量,也期待在路上能够看到越来越多的新能源汽车,让我们的地球母亲变得越来越美好。
【习作题目】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;
2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);
3.你的看法。
【习作解读】
显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
【习作展示】
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
【习作点评】
作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:
1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.【练习题目】
2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
【参考范文】
During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.【练习题目】
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。
【参考范文】
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。
1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。
2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。
3)传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator
【参考范文】
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。
【参考范文】
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
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