英语作文如何体现责任感【一】
在写作文中，事例要生动，内容要具体。要把老师和学生的动作、神态、语言和心理活动写得生动、形象，字里行间洋溢着教师爱护学生，学生尊敬老师的师生之情，让人读后深受感动，突出老师的园丁精神。例如一位学生写《龙卷风中的师生情》的结尾：“黄老师的伤虽然治好了，但却留下了后遗症——脚拐了。现在，我已经转到新学校学习了，但黄老师舍己为同学的动人一幕，我至今仍不能忘怀。她是辛勤的园丁，在危急关头，挺身而出，像慈母般地呵护着我们，我终生难忘。”这样写黄老师舍己为学生的动人一幕，令“我”终生难忘，体现师生情，突出中心，深化了主题。
英语作文如何体现责任感【二】
独自走在那空荡的小路上，沉重的脚步向前挪动着，看看脚下，枯黄的叶子落了一地，杂乱无章。我的眼泪再次聚集，那种伤痛再次撕扯我的心，唉，妈妈病了！
由于妈妈劳累过度，腿关节骨质增生要做手术，当我听到的那一刻吓了一跳，天哪、那可是要在腿上用刀赤裸裸的开个口子呀！那得多疼啊！一家人沉闷的围在饭桌旁，如果手术做好，那就不成问题。关键是如果动不好，那妈妈的腿可就……经过家人的再次讨论，决定再给妈妈做一次手术。
饭桌旁，那沉闷的气息凝聚成一团，牢牢的固定在这儿，看来，它不想离去，我开始收拾饭桌，这沉闷的气息，彻底贴在每个人的身上，每个人的心里。
终于，我忍不住了，以最快的速度跑到屋里，把门反锁，趴在床上终于偷偷哭了，听见妈妈嘱咐弟弟：“你要听姐姐话啊！妈妈如果明天做手术，你得和姐姐在家等着妈妈，要乖啊，和姐姐写完作业以后再玩，一定要听话啊！”弟弟用那稚嫩的声音，对妈妈说：“我会听话的，妈妈，你可早点回家啊”“嗯！宝贝乖些，妈妈就会早点回家陪你。”妈妈又对我说：“闺女，明天你要把弟弟照顾好啊！你们俩可得听话啊！”我“嗯”了一声。鼻子更酸了，泪水止不住的往外流，让我失去了控制。
在不知不觉中，慢慢地睡着了！
到了早晨，睁开了那红肿的眼，爸爸和妈妈已经去医院了。我按妈妈的嘱咐照顾好小弟，一整天我的心都像一根紧绷着的弦。终于到了中午，我实在忍不住了，便拨通了妈妈的手机号，电话那边传来了妈妈的声音：“喂”“喂，妈，你做完手术了吗？”我焦急的问着，妈妈说：“这边的医生说没事，不必开刀，打打针贴贴膏药就行了，我一会就回去”。我的心咯噔一下，哎！终于亮堂多了。心中的那块大石头终于平安着陆了！
现在最重要的还是要默默祈祷，妈妈的腿要快点恢复健康！
妈妈我只想对你说：“谢谢您，亲爱的妈妈，不管什么时候，您永远都在女儿的心里占据第一位”。
英语作文如何体现责任感【三】
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
英语作文如何体现责任感【四】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
英语作文如何体现责任感【五】
一位好教师必然是有着强烈的责任心和崇高的使命感。这种责任心和使命感反映在教师平时的工作中，表现一种敬业精神，一种对教育事业的热爱，一种对教学工作完美境界的追求。教师的言谈举止，任劳任怨，无私奉献的园丁精神，都是你写作的内容。可写老师教育顽皮的学生，用诚信和真挚的爱心教育学生，让学生充满希望的阳光，从而表达学生对老师的敬佩之情；可写教师刻苦钻研教材，写好教案，深入浅出，生动有趣的讲课……例如：一位同学写蔡老师，“你讲课声音洪亮，娓娓动听，我特别喜欢听您的课。您会把《西门豹》这一课改编成课本剧，让同学们当堂表演，让我们在快乐轻松的气氛中学习。”这样写赞美了老师教学艺术高超，生动有趣。
英语作文如何体现责任感【六】
有一种思念，叫魂牵梦萦；有一种关怀，叫做无微不至；有一种唠叨，是爱的寄语；有一份新情值得我们永远珍惜。
小时候，自己与妈妈的交流很少，我总是和爸爸玩，妈妈对我来说就是严厉，很恐怖。自己对小提琴是“恨之如骨”，我每天耳边都是妈妈源源不断的唠叨：“快练琴，马上就要考级了，快点练琴去。”我正在玩电脑玩的乐不思蜀，听到妈妈这话我是一个耳朵进一个耳朵出，才不当回儿事，哼哼答应两句就继续玩电脑。妈妈听我没动静，就走来说：“赶快！干什么事都要雷厉风行，拖拖拉拉像什么东西！”听到这话我气不打一处说：“不练！我才不练，练那玩意儿又不能当饭吃！”妈妈一听我这句话生气的说：“你要再不练，我就打你了！”“你敢，你越打我，我越不练！”我嘴硬的说。听到这话妈妈怎么可能放过我，“啪”的一巴掌就打到了我的背上，我哭了，伤心欲绝的跑回房里，在房间里，我一个劲的哭，连晚饭都没吃，哭到最后哭累了就睡下了。半夜里，我听见有声音，就假装睡着，原来，是妈妈进来了，她替我掖了掖被角说：“孩子，妈妈并不想打你，只是替你着急，如果你考级考不好，那你一定会更伤心。妈妈那么爱你，怎么会打你呢？好宝贝，你千万不要不听话，因为这样会害了你的\'！”听到这句话，我的眼角湿润了，在我的印象里，妈妈对我的严格要求是在我心中的形象，可妈妈说这样的话让我很感动，我心里想，明天一定好好练琴，要听妈妈话。第二天，我不仅向妈妈道了歉还练了一上午的琴。从那以后，我与妈妈的关系发生了转变，和妈妈变成了“好朋友”，每天的好事，坏事，有趣的事我都会给妈妈说。
亲情是夜晚一个掖被角的动作，亲情是一家人一起看电视，亲情也是一盆洗脚水……我们每个小孩子现在都是衣来伸手，饭来张口，在家里都是小皇帝小公主，但我们只是索要，却忘记了父母是怎样挣钱养我们的，生活中让我们值得珍惜的东西太多太多，但我们决不能忘掉父母的爱，千万不要在想到要珍惜时，爱却走了，珍惜亲情，珍惜爱！
