玩游戏的时候,老师说:“先示范一下吧!”同学们做示范的时候,个个像热锅上的蚂蚁一样紧张。
开始游戏了,同学们都向后退,生怕被别人捉到。老师说:“开始,从前……竹子!”同学们把自己的右手食指贴到身上,左手去抓另一个同学的右手食指。“啊,抓到了。”随着一声叫喊,我们看到一个同学被淘汰了。接着,又有几个同学被淘汰了。我是第四个被淘汰的。
接着,一个又一个,一个又一个地被淘汰,直到最后两人在PK。最后,那个高个子同学输了,矮个子的同学胜利,得了冠军。
于是,老师说:“我和你来一场,支持我的举手。”两三个人举起了手。老师说:“选个人当裁判,选了一个女生,这令人我很不满意。虽然,我不满意,但我注重的.还是比赛。”
比赛开始了,裁判员说:“从前有一个人,他特别喜欢……竹子。”老师没抓到同学。接着,裁判员又说:“从前,在一个竹子!”老师又没抓住。这时,老师“呵呵”地笑了起来。老师说:“你是同学组的冠军,我是老师组的冠军。”
从这个游戏中,我知道了任何时候都要集中注意力,否则,要被人家抓住的。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
其实很想知道这种早恋电影是怎么过审核的,还未婚先育。14,5岁未婚生育然后会这么幸福欢乐,不怕教坏小学生初中生吗。
关于抄袭《非常主播》这件事情,怎么说呢姜炯哲导演是知道了并默许,还是没发现或者发现了没发飙,不得而知。因为著作权这件事情,好像该归给编剧?还是投资方?(这方面法律知识不是很熟,莫怪
关于抄袭,网上留言不多,可能看过车太贤主演的《非常主播》的人大多是80后,90后。而现在影院主力军都是95后,00后的原因吧。
那我来说一说,《非常主播》这部电影的剧情吧,下面这一段引用自百度百科——
知名DJ南贤洙(车太贤饰曾是偶像团队的成员,想当年的情形就跟“东方神起”不相上下。尽管已经三十好几的他却仍被称为永远的少女偶像。看到娱乐圈竞争日益激烈,南贤洙开始努力朝幕后发展并且在电台拥有了自己的节目,眼看节目不断占据收听榜冠军,事业重新冒出无限生机。
然而在这个节骨眼儿上,等待他的却是一个22岁的女儿。站在南贤洙面前的女生正是自己的头号听众黄正南(朴宝英饰。黄正南坚定地告诉南贤洙自己是他在初三那年留下的骨肉。现年36岁的南贤洙怎么也无法相信自己有一个小自己14岁的女儿,然而更让他崩溃的还在后面。
早就成为未婚妈妈的黄正南身边还带着一个六岁的小孩黄基栋(王锡玄饰,也就是南贤洙的孙子。理清头绪后,南贤洙冷汗直流,关键的不是这个女儿和孙子是真是假,最关键的而是不能让广大粉丝们知道自己的丑闻。暂时收留他们不成问题,可偏偏他又是个不折不扣的工作狂,既要工作又要保守秘密防止和小孙子曝光,南贤洙开始了他忙碌得没头没脑的生活。
我们再看看外公芳龄38,下面这一段同样引用自百度百科——
38岁的明星主播何志武(佟大为饰在家中精心打扮,准备迎接性感女友“临幸”。打开家门时,外面站着的却是一对陌生母子——来自“胡建”的20岁未婚妈妈唐慧茹(陈妍希饰带着5岁的儿子唐家栋(吕云骢饰上门认亲,面对从天而降的女儿和小萌孙,正值“芳龄”的何志武无法接受,要求进行亲子鉴定。然而,结局却令人出乎意料。
抄袭不抄袭其实都不好说,因为影片未正式上映。抄袭与翻拍也只在于有没有跟原作者打好招呼。这些年来,祖国大地上也有很多翻拍得很好看的电影和电视剧,请大家客官并且耐心得等待。
而娱乐圈那么大,著名导演于麻麻拍摄了那么多作品雷同作家琼瑶阿姨的小说。打官司配的钱对其抄袭挣的钱来说更本就是九牛一毛。郭某导演写的文章雷同于庄羽童鞋的小说,赔的钱一样不及稿费的零头。
这都过于自大,也过于偏激。
知识产权,说大不大,因为对于大部分普通人来说,远没有隔壁的王老太撞衫自己来得事大。
知识产权,说小不小,因为我们对于一个公民来说,道德,不是因为我没有看到,就不重要,道德,是人之所以为人,而非牲畜的一个软性指标。
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
翻拍自韩国《极速绯闻》的《外公芳龄38》因为笔者并未目睹过原版,所以在此就不作相提并论,仅就电影本身来与大家做一个观影感受的分享。
片名乍看颇具足吸引力,大家一看到这个片名,一定会情不自禁哑然失笑,外公怎么可能才38岁?还芳龄呢!似乎带着一丝戏谑和调侃的味道,其实这里也预示了影片是一部充满喜剧、幽默、欢乐的轻松型电影。
在常人的惯性认知中,外公一定是一位弯腰驼背、两鬓斑白、年过六旬、身形佝偻、步履蹒跚、老眼昏花、行动迟缓、鸡皮鹤发、半截入土的糟老头,一言以蔽之,就是“夕阳无限好,只是近黄昏”。可是如果你的外公只有38岁,还是一个朝气蓬勃、年轻英俊、奋发图强的峥嵘青年,那会是一种什么样的感觉呢?一定会被引为奇葩事件,被大众津津乐道、议论纷纷吧!
随着社会经济的飞速发展,人们的道德意识滑坡严重,思想观念的开放造成了一系列社会隐忧,尤其是在性开放这一块近年来逐渐呈现低龄化趋势,前段时间看新闻就报道一个16岁的小伙喜当爹,全家年龄加起来只有34岁,这已足够令人震惊,如果社会不在这方面进行重视,只怕隐患会越来越严重,因为无论从伦理道德还是从中医角度抑或是从整个社会发展角度来说,太早结婚生子都是一件弊大于利的事,不过这个问题在此暂不做深究,还是言归正传,回到电影本身上来。
佟大为饰演的电台主持人在花样年华之时爱上了一个叫婉君的女孩,并和她发生了关系。这件事过去十几年后,此时已过而立之年事业也小有成就的佟大为在某日突遭一个自称是她女儿的人以寻找亲身父亲的名义找上了门,并带来了一个五岁的孩子。之后这个女儿和孩子就“幸福快乐”地安心住在爸爸的家里和其共享“天伦之乐”。然后又发生了一系列令人啼笑皆非又感动人心的小故事。这部电影的风格大部分都是以轻松、喜剧、浮夸的形式呈现,陈妍希饰演的女儿唐慧茹虽然带着做作的台湾腔贯穿始终,不过你只要入戏了,很容易就会被她萌萌哒的天真和可爱所打动,浮夸风的格调兴许会被部分观众所不喜,不过还是那句话,只要你入戏了,就能体验到水到渠成的欢乐和温暖。
佟大为对待女儿和外孙的心理过程经历了四个阶段的变化,由最初的震惊莫名死不相信到做了DNA鉴定后的目瞪口呆徒然认命到随波逐流心情慢慢平复习以为常再到发生矛盾大吵一架狠心诀别,最后又冰释前嫌和好如初收获完美大团圆。而女儿唐慧茹对待父亲的\'心理变化也经历着由最初的满心欢喜充满期待到渐渐融洽亲密无间再到误会丛生产生隔阂最后又闪亮归来团聚一堂四个波折跌宕。其中还穿插着一条女儿喜欢唱歌而追逐梦想努力奋斗的故事,唱歌是一条贯穿全剧的不可或缺的引线,不仅串联着女儿的成长和蜕变,也为影片喜剧色彩的基调渲染起到了推波助澜的促进作用,当然更为影片关乎亲情的羁绊和对生活无论遭遇怎样的波折都永远积极健康乐观不消极的正能量的主题着上了浓墨重彩的点缀。
影片将亲情与梦想、爱情与责任、良知与勇气巧妙融于一体,但又百川归海落脚于爱的诚挚,譬如陈妍希带着梦想之心角逐冠军却在关键时刻被好事记者闹出绯闻而影响了佟大为的事业时,她甘愿放弃梦想忍受默默哭泣的酸楚只为减轻父亲承受的万千压力,被男友逼着质问绯闻真相也矢志不渝答应父亲保守秘密的承诺,甚至与男友决绝砸坏男友准备曝光的相机只为维护父亲的清白,即使后来被父亲误解被负气撵出门也不愿抛头露面招摇过市只屈身于一家小餐馆打工糊口而已,父亲自责不已才恍然这个突如其来的女儿千辛万苦寻找自己真的只是为了那天赐的亲情和血脉的牵绊……
影片中诸如此类的小温暖、小笑料、小轻松、小阴谋还有很多,在此就不一一列举了。其中的歌曲舞曲也是见缝插针、不绝如缕,且十分应景、恰如其分,毫无违和感和格格不入感,很像前几天一部动画《魔发精灵》的真人版。总之,这部电影在整体上很温馨、很出彩、很有趣、很真诚、很轻松,较之《比利林恩》给人带来的昏昏欲睡,我却是格外衷情《外公芳龄》的轻松温暖。
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
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