Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear in the phone call with your father that you were in hospital for you got the A H1N1 virus which made me feel so tense.
I dont know how you got it,however,dont be so scared for the A H1N1 virus is medicable duo to the high tech.You just need to be clam and partner the treatment with the dostors.
Besides,I want to give some advice about how to prevent the A H1N1 virus.Firstly,you mustnt go to the places full of people to reduce the probability of getting it.
Secondly,you should wash your hand before the meals and after you go home from outside.Only do this can you precent yourself from getting it again.
I am looking forward to hearing from you and wish you recover.
Yours,
Lihua
音乐,每天和我形影不离,因为它知道我最怕孤独;音乐,它从来都不会背叛我,为我保守秘密,因为它知道我不喜欢把自己的事,尤其是那些“呆板”的事让别人的耳朵听到‘音乐,他永远是第一个来听我的倾诉,并且那样真诚地安慰着沉浸在苦海中的我……
音乐,我最好的朋友!它带我一起体验生活的美好。在生活中,在人生路上,不会是一帆风顺的,那是一种考验。可是我经不起一连串的考验,音乐就使用它那优美的“声音”,为我讲述着它所经历的“风雨”,让我知道,这些考验,这些挫折,这些困难,都是那么地容易克服,带来的又是那么美好!
音乐,我最好的朋友!它和我一起分享快乐、烦恼,所有的一切心情。快乐的时候,音乐唱出欢快节奏的歌曲,把我感染得比它还快乐;烦恼的时候,音乐唱出低沉而又伤感的\'歌曲,向我倾诉着它的烦恼;疯狂的时候,音乐陪我疯狂,生气的时候音乐用“水”浇灭了我心中的“火”……
音乐,我最好的朋友!我很感谢这么多年来,一直有你陪我走过,陪我走过那么多却又显得那么少的风雨,有你在我需要帮助的时候,去鼓励我,让我鼓起信心,继续向前走;在我失落无助的时候,你用优美的旋律、活泼的文字、深刻的话语,来抚平我不安的心灵,来填满我空荡的心房……
没有一颗心生来喜欢孤独,所以我们需要朋友,有了朋友,生活变得更加充实,更加精彩,更加美好,更加快乐!也因为朋友,我们有了信心,有了勇气,有了支柱!音乐,是我最好的朋友,因为音乐,我很快乐!
我的同学,——杨天成是我最好的朋友。
杨天成长得比较帅,浓密的眉毛下长着一双炯炯有神的大眼睛,红扑扑的脸蛋既像又大又红的苹果,又像小太阳正在散发出耀眼的红光,令人们见了他都有一种快活的感觉。
我敬佩杨天成,不仅因为他数学、体育成绩好,而且有开朗的性格,还很喜欢乐于助人。记得不久前,我和杨天成、黄海婴、蒋凯等等好多同学们一起约好了到桂山公园去滑冰。当时,我还以为自己还像从前一样,滑冰技术很好,非常自信地穿上遛冰鞋,准备开始遛冰。可我的脚刚一落地便马上认识到:我已经不是从前的自己了。因为没有遛冰鞋,我已经好几年没有练习滑冰了。现在的我穿着遛冰鞋,连走进滑冰场都是一件困难的事。面对同学们的嘲笑,我犹豫起来,思考着该不该继续滑冰。这时,我面前出现了一个熟悉的身影,并传来了一个声音:“邓长盛,我来教你吧。”我定睛一看,原来是杨天成。这时,我虽然不好意思,但是为了不再在同学面前丢脸,硬着头皮答应了。“先左滑一步,然后右滑一步,等速度快了,八字形成或倒八字型滑......”,杨天成耐心地教着我怎么滑冰,我也一点一点地找回了从前的感觉,越滑越快。此时,我是多么感谢他呀!
这件事发生后,我深刻地了解到,原来好朋友不只要让别人愿意交,更要有能让人愿意与你交朋友的能力,比如我最好的朋友——杨天成的仁爱。
“有些路啊,只能一个人走……”当我端坐在窗台旁,以近乎虔诚的心去品读那书本上的一行行铅字,这个声音便在我耳畔萦绕不绝,飘渺,空灵,……我扭头望向那蔚蓝的天空,发出会心的微笑。我知道,在海峡那一边的你一定能感受到。真正的友谊该如何定义,我一时无法解释。但那一路上不变的陪伴与守候,难道就不可以称之为“情”吗?应台阿姨,我们虽不相识,但我想说,你是我最好的朋友。
与你结缘,完全是通过你的文字。从纯真喜悦的《孩子你慢慢来》到坦率得近乎痛楚的《亲爱的安德烈》,再到跨三代人的关乎生死大问的《目送》一书,你的写作逐渐转向人生的深沉。透过这些,我感到那支犀利的笔也有难以言尽的时候。我愿意以阅读的方式悄然走进你的内心,窥探那儿的忧伤、坦然与豁达。我也知道,你一直无私地以自己的人生为蓝本,为我铺就一条思索的长途。而这条路,只能一个人走。你只是以永远深邃温柔的眼神,目送着我的背影渐行渐远。这样的忘年之交,于我而言,真的很值得。
你的书,总是摆在我的床头。因为,我想让你的思想与灵魂一直陪伴在我成长的路途上。一个人的时候,或是行走于车水马龙的喧嚣中,或是静坐在公园的长椅上,我对人生的思考便由此开始。这时,我发觉自己从你那儿获取的思想已在心中植根发芽——那是我心中永远的停靠点。当我迷惘无依时,你教会我坚定自己的方向与选择;当我怅然若失时,你带给了我无尽的温暖,让我不再彷徨;当我面对人生的荣誉功利而不知所措时,你使我学会坦然地放下;当我在人生路上跌倒时,你为我清洗伤口,抚平创痛……一切都是无言的,都只源于无形之中心与心的碰撞与相互抚慰。可除了我最好的朋友——应台阿姨,谁又能让我的成长之路在风雨中焕发光彩呢?
你,是我最好的朋友,我永远都不会忘记你,在记忆的长河里,你就是那条永远都在向前游动的小鱼。
你还记得么?在那个恬静、阳光飞溅的下午茶时光,我和你面对面躺在床上,一起享受着阳光的洗礼,你总是慵懒得眯着眼睛,不一会儿就睡着了,阳光下的你好像渡了一层金子,触动着我内心最温暖的地方。
你还记得么?有一次我发烧了,烧的很严重,醒来以后就看见你趴在我的被子上睡着了,我本来想小心翼翼的起来而你却醒了,当时已经12点多了,你那天一定累坏了,而我却非要拉着你玩,玩了好久,当我出去倒水的时候回来你已经睡着了,我想你一定是累坏了吧?自责感瞬间充斥着我的内心,那晚,是深深的自责和寂寞的月亮陪我度过的。
你还记得么?有一次我带你出去买早餐,我们两个高兴的出了门,而你更是拉着我一路小跑。我们过了马路去了对门的包子铺买包子,回去的时候你硬是拉着我的裤腿不让我走,刚想着把你抱过马路去,面前一阵风吹过我的脸颊,原来是一辆飞奔的轿车,我低声说了声谢谢,也不知道你听没听见?
你还记得么,有一次我被妈妈骂了一顿,当时我哭的很厉害你先是叼了一卷卫生纸,然后趴在我的腿上用头蹭我的手来安慰我。是你在我高兴的时候陪我欢笑,是你在我难过的时候安慰我,更是你陪我度过那一段炫丽的童年!
虽然现在你已经不在我身边,但你依然在我的内心深处陪伴着我,你,是我最好的朋友!
如果说风令人清爽,雨令人缠绵,月令人神怡,则书令人宁静而淡雅,唐诗杂论、名著导读、哲理学问、素质教育都是源于书。于是,我认定了——书,我最好的朋友。
在“浅草才能没马蹄”的三月里,我们携手。
小时候,总爱抱着一本连环画,肆意得玩弄着。趴在地上,暖暖的阳光铺在地面上,我抱起洒满阳光的书面,我有一颗向往的心,向往灰姑娘的幸福生活,那时,我会咯咯地笑出声来;当看到阴险的王后要毒害美丽的白雪公主时,我心里更是愤怒不已……在连环画的陪伴下,我走过了童年,走过了新绽的浅草。
在“小荷才露尖尖角”的六月里,我们相约。
今天,是你陪伴我走向初中的大门,很多难题在我面前频频倒下,是因为你,书,让我了解了许多知识。夜深人静的时候,即使妈妈再嘱咐我关灯睡觉,我也不舍得把你放下,我会执著的捧着你,沉浸在书的海洋,我们时时刻刻相约,梦寐在幸福的粉沫中。
在“晴空一鹤排云上”的九月里,我们厮守。
明天,我将走进崭新的高中的门槛。也许,真诚的友情将不属于我,诱人的名利不属于我,强大的权势也不会属于我。但我知道,你会永远陪伴我,书。在一本一本书连缀成的理想中,我将走向未来,拥抱明天。
浅浅的草儿生长着,青青的荷花屹立着,晴空中的白鹤自由的飞翔着。书——我最好的朋友。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
一个风和日丽的下午,我们正在上课,忽然我做了一个小动作,红领巾一见就不高兴了说:“不要上课动来动去,否则就听不好老师讲得内容了。”
我一听,连忙改正过来,专心致志地听老师讲课。放学回家,红领巾对我:“小主人,作业做得快,学习效率要高,做作业不要马虎。”我听了,按照红领巾的要求去做,做着做着,我的姿势又差了,字也烂了,错题也越来越多。红领巾看见了,瞪着眼睛大声说:“你这个家伙,学习效率不高,我就不陪你玩了。”我一听,马上认认真真地做作业,又把作业检查了一遍。 “做每件事都要感兴趣地去做,不要老是我来提醒你。”
红领巾又耐心地对我说。我听了,脸颊微微发热。晚上,我在被窝里偷偷地哭,红领巾听见了,问我:“小主人,你为什么流泪呀?”“明天要书法比赛,我还准备的不够充分。”我难为情地说道。“不要气馁,相信自己,你一定是最棒的“红领巾”。
第二天,我用饱满的精神去做每一件事,果然我做到了。我和红领巾一起手拉手,跳啊!唱啊!玩得真开心!
“小主人,你真棒,不要骄傲,一定保持噢!”红领巾冷静地说。红领巾,我想对你说:“有了你,我就感到很自豪,因为你教会了我自觉。有了你,我就感到无比幸福,因为你听我说悄悄话,使我更加自信。
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