我在家里很能干 五年级英语作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我在家里很能干 五年级英语作文【二】
??个人在家-五年级某天晚上，爸爸和妈妈都出差了，只留下幼小的我待在家中。
爸爸妈妈走后，我兴奋地想：今晚只有我一个人待在家里，终于可以好好玩耍咯！我一脸开心地坐在沙发上，刚准备打开电视，突然，狂风大作，“轰轰轰的雷声也响了起来。我开始紧张，把自己缩成一团。“滴答滴答——闹钟走动的声音，“沙沙沙——屋外树木的声音，“呼呼呼——窗帘开始不断飘动……我的心跳得越来越快，但我还是打开了电视缓解我的心情。刚打开电视，“啊！我大喊，竟然是鬼片，我捂着眼睛，连忙关掉了电视。“啪！整个屋子突然黑了下来，心想：不会吧，这个时候跳闸！我小心翼翼地来到阁楼，脑子里全是刚刚鬼片的画面。在阁楼寻找电闸时，我清晰地听见一楼清脆的脚步声，我更害怕了，慌张地想：是僵尸吗？或者是女鬼？不行，得藏起来！我停止了寻找电闸的脚步，转身把阁楼门关上。但由于关门的声音太大，楼下的那个“鬼好似已经听见，我赶紧藏进了阁楼的隐藏隔间。
几分钟之后，藏在隔间的我听见响亮的开门声，我开始震惊，“鬼已经来到了阁楼？那我岂不如同猎物被“鬼寻找着？我捂住嘴巴，眼泪悄无声息地流。许久之后，脚步声停止了，我从极小的`门缝观察着外面的一切，我喘了一口气，打开了门，“轰！一声雷响再次把我吓到，我连爬带滚地回到隔间，刚刚的一切让我感觉到难以置信。我开始冷静下来，认真分析：世界上不可能有鬼，一定是我的幻觉，估计是爸爸妈妈呢？我开始不再畏惧，勇敢地迈出第一步。我打开门，听见有人在说：“哎呀，我找不到她！天那么黑，不可能跑出去玩了！我像疯了似的跑了下去，看见了妈妈在打电话，我妈一脸生气，我抱紧妈妈，大哭了起来。最后我才知道，刚刚的脚步声原来是寻找我的妈妈。
一个人在家，真是一件可怕的事，但这件事，也让我不再畏惧。
我在家里很能干 五年级英语作文【三】
今天，我学会了包饺子。原来，包饺子也不难，让我来慢慢告诉你们吧：
我先观察妈妈是怎样包饺子的。首先，先拿起一个饺子皮放在左手上，再用勺子把肉馅放进饺子皮里，然后右手食指沾一下水，在饺子皮上划一圈，然后把饺子皮捏起来，最难的当属这一步了，需要捏起一个个褶子，既美观又牢固可不是件容易的'事呢。需要我们更多的耐心和专心，把褶子一个个慢慢地捏过去。这样，一个饺子就大功告成了。我也迫不及待地做了一个，咦！真的做成功了，我开心极了。做好了一个，我当然要尝试做花样饺子了。前面的做法都一模一样的，就是最后一个步骤不一样，需要把边缘的饺子皮都往上捏，最后再捏捏紧，一个烧卖型的饺子就完成了。我拿给妈妈看，妈妈笑着说：“安安，你做得真棒呀！那就再做几个呗！”我欣然同意了，跟妈妈一起包完了所有的饺子。
接下来是吃饺子的时间，妈妈烧了足够多的饺子，我和妹妹一起吃起来，看着妹妹津津有味地吃着我包的烧卖饺子，我开心地笑了。
包饺子好有趣，下次，我还要帮妈妈一起包饺子呢。
我在家里很能干 五年级英语作文【四】
我的舅妈是一位教师，个头中等，下颏略方，神情和蔼，性格开朗。因为舅妈是教语文的而且平时文章写得不错，所以我每次写了作文都通过网络传给舅妈指点修改。舅妈总能找到我的薄弱环节细心地写上修改意见。每当我的文章在学校获奖时，第一个想到的就是舅妈，因为是她让我走上了领奖台。但是每当我在写作过程中因为粗心出错尤其是老毛病重犯时，她也会严厉的批评指正我，让我一条条的记住不该犯错的地方。她的指点总是非常切实，言语也深入浅出。这种能力让我崇拜。
记得有一回，我写了一篇《畅游香港迪士尼》的作文传给舅妈评价，过了一会儿，舅妈上QQ对我说：“你这篇文章格局不错，内容丰富，细节处理的很好，但错别字太多，希望以后能注意。”我听了心里别提有多高兴了。因为以前我的作文一直处于中下，总是错误多于好评。但这次一向对我要求严格的舅妈也多了赞誉之词了，怎不叫人高兴呢。我把那篇作文保留在文件夹里，时时刻刻都让我知道，这篇文章是我第一次受到舅妈的表扬。当然，因为我的懒惰，并不是所有的文章都在进步中，比如近来有次我写的一篇作文受到了舅妈的严厉批评，原因是字数太少、结构太乱、没有总起和过渡句。当时怪自己太粗心，没有好好检查，才会写得乱七八糟。我真希望那时时光能倒流，让我回去好好反省一下。
上个月，舅妈给自己开了个博客，我也有幸拜读，她的文章、诗句，情感饱满。我在上面也发表了两次评论，也有别的读者在上面评奖。我听说有些人建立博客之后总是不告诉家人，也许是他们喜欢放什么隐私上去吧。舅妈的博客很明朗，她说有时就是将自己发表过的文章存在里面，有时将一些小小随感放置其中，不搞什么标新立异的东西所以也不怕家人看到。舅妈说以后我要有什么好文章就把它放在她的博客上去。我心里暗下决心，以后一定要有一篇作文被舅妈赏识放在上面，我相信我一定能做到 。
这就是我和蔼又严厉的舅妈，有了她对我的鞭策，我的文章以后肯定能够不断进步。
